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[Crack Pairing] [RarityxKingSombra]
Rarity always liked the big, strong, regal, silent type. Sometimes we get exactly what we wish for, though not always packaged how we expected.
Written for the Crack Ships Inc. June Crack Ship Contest. (Tied for third place.)
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Damn man... you're not stopping here, are you?
That would just be the. Worst. Possible. Thing!
2733271 Seconded. please more?
I request, nay, DEMAND that a continuation be written for this.
It's too perfect not to.
Please continue this in some form, pretty please! It's got promise.
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I'm glad y'all enjoyed it
I don't have any plans to continue at the moment; I'm not sure there's anything left to add (maybe Rarity has to hide it from her friends? Wouldn't be that hard, though). Just no real conflict, especially since this story implies a happy ending (I think?).
If you like Dark Romances, I had a plot bunny for a Dark Rarijack fic over here. Though I have grown as a writer since writing that summary, all the problems I pointed out are still valid concerns (and are preventing me from working on it).
Perhaps I'll come back to this at some point, though.
This is kinda wonderful.
I'll take a look at it later. But there is more, I think... what is Sombra up to? Is he just sticking around? Is he just after some love/sex? Is he trying to possess Rarity? Turn her into his own slave and eventual queen?
I'm itching to read more... and half tempted to write it myself if I have to.
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Thanks
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Fair enough. I still have another unfinished Dark fic, an unfinished Sad fic, an unfinished Dramedy, and two pending Adventure fics. I usually let my ideas stew before acting on them, so maybe by the time I finish one of those inspiration will have struck.
In the meantime, you're more than welcome to write your own continuation, as long as you give me appropriate credit
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I may just do that, and of *course* I'd give you credit!
It's so seldom my warped ideas can be blamed on others!
Would you care for any preview/input privileges, since it is your base concept?
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I'm certain you'll have a much different take on it than I, and I wouldn't want to stifle that, but I definitely wouldn't object if you wanted to show it to me beforehand.
Huh. Well, I can see why other comments are demanding more; explanations are needed. Badly. And yet, for some inexplicable reason, the lack of such adds charm to this story. I'm impressed how you've managed to depict Sombra as a powerful, impeachable beast of beastliness in so little words. A mark of true talent I must admit.
Now, I did have one glaring qualm with it. I would've LOVED to read more of Rarity's perception of our king. Given this is a crack pairing, an extra chapter--or an extension of this one--would finish this story with grit, and grant the praise it so richly deserves.
There ya go; a short review from me, and a 7/10 rating. Not bad, Pun. Not bad at all.
Craine...
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Thanks
I think the lack of detail actually makes things a bit more optimistic (although that may or may not eclipse the creepy undertones).
The last crack shipping story I wrote (RarityxKingKong) spent most of the story characterizing Rarity as someone who wanted to feel safe and protected. I didn't want to repeat myself, but I can see how the story might feel incomplete without those details.
As I mentioned over here 2738746 a continuation isn't out of the question, but I've got a lot of other projects I'm working on.
Still, thank you for the advice and mini-review. The pace I work on things is sporadic, but I really do consider all the advice I receive when I sit down to write new things.
Excellent work...but my dark and evil heart is not satisfied with this tease
...Rarity is a weak and insecure little mare, that needs more of good ol King Sombra to feel protected, loved...and powerful. 
I don`t get it.
How does this have 38 upvotes.
You and your Dark addictions.
Well since she was attracted to Blue Blood I think she would see Sombra as hot.
Rarity needs more of the dark lord! This is not sufficient he would have claimed her body and then her soul in two more chapters
I really like what you have here.
Mmm... Sexy Smokey Sombra. :)