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Immortan Joe


Follow me and I myself will carry you to the gates of Valhalla. Where you'll ride eternal, shiny and chrome!

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In his battle against TK in the fortune city arena. Frank West was just about to defeat TK, when all of a sudden both men where caught in a blinding flash of light sending them both to a unknown world...
Attention!!
Story Reviewed by: Shahrazard
From the Equestrian Critic Society.
Story got: 6/10
Review can be seen here.

Chapters (11)
Comments ( 50 )

2001778 Thank you person and hopefully you will. I will be posting about a chapter a day if not mabye every two days :scootangel:

you got the ending from red dead redemption undead nightmare didnt you.

2016467 No not entirely your parshaly correct its the end of the Sasquatch mission but I did not write that part let me remind you my friend Mr.Coxen5 wrote that scene which I will be adding his name to the title soon. Its just a random scene. Well here I'll give you a piece of a cookie here enjoy.

I like this guy no remorse.

megamouth sharks suck, they have, like human faces and shark bodys. THE worst. I liked the story so far. can't wait to work on the zacorra part and edit.

2028378 I don't know if I'm gonna do the Zeccora part or not. Because I've came up with a different scene instead she might make a cameo but maybe not a legit scene. Don't know for sure.

2298162Thank you! The grammer problem is being fixed that is one reason why the story is on hiatus.

TK: Hey ya franky wanna play a game?
Frank: FUCK NO!

Shit is hitting the fan.

Besides a couple of well needed commas, I'm enjoying the story.:twilightsmile:
Keep on doing what you're doing.

Is this taking place in the Off the Record timeline? Sweet!

I knew this wasn't going to end well. Seems to be a thing for the poor Dead Rising protagonists. :rainbowlaugh: Can't wait to see more!

FRANK YOU ARE SUCH AN ASSHOLE

:derpyderp1: Is... Is Dash gonna be okay...?

2523212 Gotta wait for the next chapter.

Dead Rising 2 Off the record - Off the record :P Lol, I've been a fan of the dead rising series, have you ever considered adding Chuck to the story? (BTW Nice work)

2523957 Off-the-recordcept-- *shot*

2523957 I'm honestly thinking about it, bad thing is I'm not to good with Chuck's personality.

*Series*
Sorry, Grammar Nazi in the house.
Still, looks promising.
I WILL READ ON!

GRAMMAR NAZI POWERS, ACTIVATE!
Ok, firstly, there is a painful amount of spelling errors here. :facehoof:

'I'm safe Frank thought, 'They're no zombies out here just chill'

Here is one example. :ajbemused: It should be written as:
'I'm safe,' Frank thought, 'There aren't any zombies out here, just chill.'
Just saying, for future reference. Dialouge can be hard, I know. Damn English grammar. :flutterrage:
None the less, I like it. I will continue later. Good work! :pinkiehappy:

2542830 Yeah the beginning chapters are really bad when it comes to grammar but as you read on you'll know that it continues to get better and better. But thanks for the grammar corrections I'll get on that soon and fix'em.

Dude. You watch too much hellsing abridged. (Not a bad thing)

God damn it! Its always RD! I will still read, but it will never be the same :ajsleepy:

2579371 Lol yes some one who caught on to a few of my references! Yeah I'm trying to tone it down with them but, I sometimes my mind will sub-consciously (Pardon my spelling) will latch out towards the funniest thing in my mind. XD

But glad you like it so far.

2580475 hellsing abridged is awesome. You should have TK say "what you do is you go down to the local pharmacy, ask for something called viagra, and it'll help you go fuck yourself!"

I watch hellsing abridged almost every day. It is some of the funniest shit I have ever seen. And I am likely going to reference it in my upcoming fanfic as well.

Celestia: What do you want?
Frank: I'm gonna need a new gun... and one for the reporter girl.
Rebecca: but I already have a gun! *holds up pistol*
Frank: get that bitch a cannon... bitches love cannons.

2580524Yeah I know that shit is funny, but I didn't want to copy it directly. Or I could get in trouble for copy right, but lol the cannon thing might be the last reference I do.

I dont now, it was good enough.

This story has been reviewed by: The Equestrian Critics Society

Story Title: Dead Rising Case: Equetdemic

Author: Dark Nebula

Reviewed by: Shahrazad

“Dead Rising Case: Equetdemic” is a crossover with Dead Rising, specifically: “Dead Rising: Off the Record.” For those who haven’t played Dead Rising, this story will be a bit confusing. The audience is expected to know plenty of things about Dead Rising. At its best, the story can be a bit of mindless fun with the occasional nugget of true joy. At it’s worst, it can be a boring mess. How readers will feel about it depends greatly on how “pro-zombie” that reader is.

Full Review

Score: 6.0/10

2580475
hey, as long as we get some abridged Alucard quotes in here, s'all good.

sorry frank i cannot let you shoot an element of harmony *rider kicks frank's face in*

If you played the game right, you would know, that Frank said right after TK fell off was "Fall to your death?!" to finish TK's response... I've played the game...

The Chuck Greene come along on his bike and is like, WTF?!?!

FRANK IS NOT THAT HEARTLESS NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYY:flutterrage:

Damn, Frank is a little more heartless than I thought

2542830 HA! Nazis hellsing ultimate abridged reference in this

my god this is turning into a hellsing crossover is'nt it

Badass Motherfucker
:pinkiecrazy:

Does anybody know what beaver tastes like?

4246269
Hey give him a break. It's not everyday you mysteriously fallen into a world full of talking ponies

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