Wat.
Pretty much all I have to say after reading this.

Damn good Streak... damn good.

The intro felt like ah ok so spike can get a date with Twi pretty simple
But when Twi became all stuff my mind shut down SUDDEN CHANGE IS SUDDEN

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Meh. It was decent, I guess.
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Not that bad, really. But, there are errors here and there, too.

You need to re-read this story as there are a handful of grammatical errors.

Weird but...
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So much gusta.

You've done it again, man. Great job!

Cool story and very clopfic

SO MUCH WIN

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I have seen cover picture in comic O.o
Not sure if want to read...

When I saw the title this played in my head!

Your girlfriend dumped you? Don't worry Onee-kun, I'll be your girlfriend for tonight.

I counted several errors

Fuck yeah >:3

nice!

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Bueno
Me Gusta
Yes

Dude before i forget my comment. first thank you Spike gets almost no love on show in art and even fanfics. I perfer spike and rarity but thats for personal reasons. Anyways thank you its nice to see someone out their show the dragon some love.

Yet another good fic!

whoa

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Agreed, spike needs more fics

also,
WHAT!?!?!
No sequel?

Still, very awesome fic

I didn't like it very much. There wasn't anything horribly wrong with it aside from twilight deciding to break the whole "family bond" with spike. It just doesn't sit well with me. The plot seemed a little forced and while you did make a good effort to make it work, there were a bunch of small things that just added up to me not liking it. I still hope to see you try some more fics in the future because your not too bad a writer and could get pretty good with practice based of this one piece.

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Yeah, I really wasn't trying to impress anybrony with this. Just an idea I had in my head that I wanted it to get out before it turned into a full-length fic that would end up getting incompleted and I would drag on and procrastinate in doing it...

So I went with the 1-shot method.

Do this to imitate my reaction.
Step 1: Point the tip of your thumbnail at the right side of your throat and drag it across to the other side.
Step 2: Place the print of your thumb against the left side of your upper chin and drag it to the right all the way across.
Step 3: Hold our your hand in a peace sign while holding out your thumb as well.
Step 4: This is the final step. While holding out your hand shout the words, "OH HEEEEELL NAW!!!!! DAT BOY JUS GOT SUM PUSSY!!!!!" And the reaction enactment shall be complete.
Have a nice day.

i agree with the comments of spikethed and meRBrony. spike is awesome he needs more fics

not my favorite because, think about it, Baby Dragon + Magically transformed Eqquine to dragon...

While not the best ever written due to some errors, I was rather impressed by this (even though I read this story abut four times now) I love Spike/Twilight and always will, although I perfer her as a pony, I have nothing against her being a dragon, you did very well on this Streak as always, and I'm truely hoping to see more later on, bro. Keep this up. Spike/Twilight FOREVER!

Well, that was fun. I say sir, you never disappoint!

Looks like Twilight.
(puts shades on.)
got spike'd
yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!

And now Lyra will want that spell so she can have hands.

dat pic = wtf!?

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I'm kind of ashamed that I read that.
But...
I'm not entirely sure why... ...something?

I like it

A dragon Twilight!?
Now that's something!

Nice. Simple, but nice.

So I realized that from the title image, twilight has two horns. This can only mean that she is a pandoracorn. Since there is only one Dragon of legendary magical properties and the ability to end generations of evil on Pandora, I can conclude that twilight the dragon is a hybrid between a pandoracorn, and the Warrior.

No, his is not the blue people Pandora, but instead the bandit infested planet much sought after by the Hyperion Corporation, and is abundant with the rare element of Eridium.

I'm a little bit of a gamer.
Just a bit.

Short, loving, romantic, and sweet.
A most excellent fic.

:pinkiecrazydragons

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Did you unlock the Pink Pandoracorn skin on Gage? (Also, Gage is best brony based character ever...)

I got
I GAVE
I lost
I party
I just don't know what went wrong !

PONGONs are coming !

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Brush, I played so much, I got pandoracorn on EVERYONE.

But honestly, I prefer the skin that is mostly white, with red decal. It looks the most like my dirt bike.

This is somewhat similar to the plot of the clopcomic "Dragon You Over." Bit of a strange read, but it's worth it I suppose.

great story! i do wish you'd do a sequel

Oh wow. What a beautiful and well written little story. I really enjoyed!