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Yosh-E-O


I am aspiring author who enjoys writing various works of fantasy in which have a cutesy touch

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Spike has long felt something missing in his life. More particularly that despite being a Baby Dragon he has never had what most would consider a childhood.

Spike finds solace in surrendering himself to juvenile needs and wants that Twilight does not approve of. This leads to a fight with Spike storming out. Eventually coming across Rarity who is more than willing to give her Spikey-Wikey what he so desires so long as he does not share her feelings and their actions with any pony else.

In the end Spike takes comfort in how the one who has the Element he truly represents does love him for who he is.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 31 )

What the buck is it with people wanting to put Spike in diapers!?!?

Seriously :pinkiesick: :facehoof: :twilightangry2: :flutterrage::

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It could be the fact that he has been referred to at times as a 'Baby Dragon'. I know that's part of the reason why I do it. :twistnerd:

It could also be, if others are like myself, writers relating to Spike as a child who truly has never had a true childhood. It's been proven time and time again interrupted childhoods make people inclined to find ways of getting them back. The diaper along with other baby related items and actions being the closest they can come as adults to fill a hole in which their mind is convinced was never properly satiated.

More simply it could be how he of all the characters would best fit wearing a diaper. The Mane 6 aren't exactly babies nor do they appear to have any issues that would make them feel like they had tough childhoods.

Well, except for Fluttershy. However she has another way of coping with her tough childhood. By becoming Assertive Fluttershy.

Fluttershy, of all the cast, has shown there's a lot of pent up angst despite having a soft spoken demeanor. The way she yelled at Pinkie Pie and Rarity during "Putting Your Hoof Down" shows how she truly feels deep down about both of her friends. Though Fluttershy is largely in control of her rage. Likely channeling it through using "The Stare" or perhaps therapy sessions with Angel Bunny.

So, you do realize you gave away your entire story in the description, right?

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Pretty much. :scootangel:

This sort of work is often unpopular except for a specific audience. So I believed putting it all out there in advance would keep folks who weren't genuinely interested from being upset when they read it while making it is folks who may be able to relate to the work more intrigued to see how it all goes.

Success or failure it is an effort all the same. :duck:

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I'd be interested in knowing what brings you to an acronym response.

Is it the writing style? The content? The way in which it all goes together, or perhaps does not go together?

I'm open if you have more in which you feel willing to share regarding your overall thoughts on the work.

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It's simply the premise. The grammar and punctuation is decent, but the premise is so fucked up.

Oh, and the chapters are unbelievably short.

And it switches from normal story to poem format quickly.

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*Nods* Great point regarding the story form to poem form.

Originally I was just going to post the story part. But the poems I wrote awhile back went with the events in which transpired in Part 1. So I thought I'd be a little different and just put them altogether.

It is understandable for you to not enjoy the premise. It's one far do. Though those who do tend to appreciate it. So I accept how my work here would garner more dislikes than likes. Tis the nature of the beast.

Thanks a lot for clearing up your issues with this work. I really appreciate it. Can't know if you don't ask. :scootangel:

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You know, I was expecting a raging guy who deletes his comments on the first sign of constructive criticism. But, I was mistaken.

Have a follow, good sir! :moustache:

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Thank you. Perhaps my work "Shining Cadence" or "Love's True Form" may be more enjoyable than this particular piece of material? "Spike's Shining Armor" is also a casual read without any of the content in which may not be desirable from this work.

I've learned a long time ago that if you're going to post something you've got to take the good with the bad. When I submitted this work I expected it wouldn't be one for most readers but did so as I did find people who really related with the situations I created in both the story and poem segments. So I figured "What the hay" and put it here to see if anyone else could gleam something positive from it as well.

There's much I need to learn as a writer and it is individuals like you who take the time to explain the positives and negatives about a piece in which enables me to be better. So thank you, good sir. :scootangel:

Spike is a BADASS in this story. LOVE IT!

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I'm super glad you enjoyed this story. :duck: It was meant to be an emotional tale with a touch of seeing if others may feel the same way as I've portrayed Spike. :scootangel:

Thanks much for reading. :duck:

You go spike! :moustache: we now need more spike emotes :twilightoops:

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I know what you mean. Having only one Spike emote really limits how many ways one can express his or her feelings via Spike's character.

Though it isn't too surprising he has only one. He is one of the lesser favorite characters in the series. :fluttercry:

I attended BronyCon and couldn't find any quality Spike merch. The one plushie I found made him look like a dog. It'd be nice if Spike got a little more love. :duck:

Thanks for your time in reading the story and for your comments. :scootangel:

I like the idea (that spike has had enough of not being able to act like his age) but I don't, at all, like what you did with it...

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I respect your opinion and thank you for sharing it. :scootangel:

If you were to have written such a story how would you go about it? :moustache: Perhaps I can do better in future works relating to Pony through your idea of what would make the concept of Spike reclaiming his childhood work? :twistnerd:

4973033 seeing that I have a strong distaste (putting it mildly) for diapers (as well as things along those lines) and being treated as a young child, I would have written it in a way that he goes out into the world in the way a normal child of a mature age (around preteen) would, seeing as that he has never experienced any form of life in between when he could not help himself (the infant stage that you place him in) and the stage where he bares many adult responsibilities (where he is in cannon and in the beginning of your story) and basically go on to describe child-like (prepubescent) behavior and the effects it has on him (such as happiness he's never felt before)

But that's just me, and you're not me

Comment posted by beirirangu deleted Sep 8th, 2014

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Thank you. The way you wrote how you'd do it allowed me to mentally picture an alternative version to what I wrote. You are very good with your descriptions. :twistnerd:

We are all different and we all visualize things differently. So I also am glad you are as open minded as you are. An open mind can lead to many possibilities.

My best to you. Thanks again for providing me an alternative vision to this tale in which I weaved. :scootangel:

4974488 well, thank you. and the best to you as well

Spikey snuggled tightly and nibbled on her ear, As Luna flew over the moon.
"Spikey poo you naughty dragon" Rarity cooed.:raritywink:
Spike wispered "Save the baby cloths my lady dear" Raritys eyes widened and her heart raced,
"YES YES YES YES' she beamed in the most unlady like fashion, "MINE!":raritywink:
She grabed the drake & they spun around & around smiling ,laughing and giggling, till they both through up.:moustache::raritystarry::facehoof:

Diapers? Even the elite NASA astronauts wear huggies! :pinkiehappy:

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Now that was a most interesting short story indeed. :rainbowlaugh:

I loved the mental visuals you painted. It all sounded like an emotional roller coaster of adoring affection until it reached its zenith. Very delightful. :raritywink:

I love when my works are complimented through ideas of others, like yourself. Thank you. :scootangel:

I don't care if he's purple or wears frilly aprons. He's fucking BADASS.

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This series of tales and poems was inspired a lot by real life situations. The desire to be treated fairly instead of as a commodity to fulfill a means to an end. As I relate most with Spike from the show I used him to better relate my own feelings at the time.

I thank you for having read through these poems and stories. Perhaps you were able to relate with them in some way? Overall the world can be a scary place but if we find ways to find comfort within chaos it can be better.

i relly think that the diaper is too much.the apron ok but thee diaper really?And why so much people put diaper on pony?:twilightoops:

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Thank you for sharing your feelings about this story and its supplementary poetry. It is definitely appreciated.

As a writer, I've tried to work through a number of emotions and very taxiing times through Pony. Through it all, I have learned that the whole diaper thing is not necessary to make an association for comfort and safety. So my more recent works in Pony have been more substance than about diapers and an association I once had with them regarding feeling safe and not looked down upon by the world as a result of my disability.

So, you are truly accurate with your "WTF" comment. Looking back, I ask myself why I wrote this. But, it was a different time and one I wish to leave around as a reminder of the progress I've made towards self-acceptance without making poor associations to disposable garments.

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