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Mr. Grimm


Greetings! I come from the farthest reaches of the Internets to share my mediocrity with you all!

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A carnival comes to Ponyville, much to the delight of its citizens. And of all Ponies, it's Twilight who yearns to go there the most. But she soon discovers that there is something horribly wrong, something that lurks behind the sideshows and the colorful tents. Something that has the power to bring one's deepest, darkest desires to life, but at a terrible price...

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 11 )

Hello, everyone. I apologize for accidently undoing everyone's comments, but I tried to fix something in chapter and it didn't go well. (I had a misunderstanding with the instructions of editing and uploading.) I shall be uploading the second chapter earlier than planned to make up for my noobishness. Here's a little something you can listen to while reading. It really enhances the atmosphere of the story.

I"m unsure of what to make of this. tracking it for now.

I thought you'd be working in Baron von Tokentaker at first. Oh well.

Carnivals can have all sorts of creepy and weird stuff. I'm looking forward to it.

“Well yes,” admitted Rarity, “I would really appreiciate it. But only if you’re all done with your work.” It's appreciate instead of appreiciate. I skipped a lot of the story to tell you, because I always feel like I need to correct wrong spelling/grammar in stories. :pinkiesmile: Anyway, I like the story. :twilightsmile:

!?! Dat title. First thing that came to mind was Harry Potter and the Prisoner of Azkaban.:derpyderp2: i will take a look and see if i am right!:rainbowdetermined2:

Chapter. So. Short.. :flutterrage:

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Well, the next few chapters will be kind of short if I ever get around to writing them.

I didn't think anyone was interested in this anymore.

Holy crap, that is so disturbing. Sorry that I'm late to the party!

:unsuresweetie: Do I even want to THINK about poor Gilda, Trixie, and the Flim-Flam Bros. wished for?

Holy... OCTAVIA'S THERE, TOO?!? Dear sweet mercy...

Spike, for Celestia's sake, GET OUT WHILE YOU CAN!

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