Applejack and Fluttershy start dating and at first their relationship is growing very well. They help one another and provide strength to one another. Fluttershy's past however, will not stay in the past, and in an attempt to save a dear friend, the mane six are forced to make decisions that they normally would not make.
Cover art is by Rainbowshy1241
Here is a great reading of a scene from Him Part 6: [Link]
This is a very long series with thirteen chapters so far and quite a more to come. I look forward to hearing what you think.
:D posting it here, another place for me to fave it
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Thank you.
Wow.... I honestly can't say much right now...
You're fanfic is the best I've read so far, and I would gladly read this instead of a novel!
Speaking of novels, this should by all means become one... no... a Motion picture would be even better!
Please do continue this compelling story, I shall be reading!
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Thank you very much. I really appreciate it, and I hope to have Trials Part 2 up by this evening. I look forward to hearing what you think.
please, please Please PLEASE PLEEEEAASE! Finish trials and tribulation. soon! I can't wait for it to come out!
and also great... no... awesome.... no...! SUPERB JOB on the story! There are great stories out there that I know many people would kill to read, but man... this!? THIS!? This is story takes the cake, Pie, Pizza, decorations, and the rest of the banquette! Please do keep this wonderful series up, I would simply DIE if this were not continued!
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Thank you very much. I hope to have part 2 up within a couple of days. Curse real life for interfering with my ponies!
It really means a lot that you're enjoying it.
Sorry I keep commenting But i also wanted to give yuo props for the awesome references to previous fanfics! The best quote out of the entire Series was when Pink... i mean "Agent Pie" interrogated the suspected assassin, and at the end of the paragraph she said, " 'Tell me,' Agent Pie said as she took out a knife, 'Do you like cupcakes?" I literally yelled, "OOOOOOOH WHAT NOW?!" and woke up my roommate
Thanks for the great work, I hope to one day make a fanfic as good as yours!
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Thanks. I really appreciate it. Agent Pie is a lot of fun to write, and I thought that was a perfect way to interrogate him. You're on my watch list, so when you post something, I'll be able to check it out.
I dare say it started out... Not exactly slow... But lacking direction. By the third chapter it hit it's stride, and by the "HIM" arc, it is practically a different story. For the better, I assure you. Now this is a real page-turner!
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Thank you very much. I agree. When I started the series, I had no plan set. It was just going to be a few stories about the relationship between Applejack and Fluttershy. Once I got to Dinner Date, I began to get an idea of what I wanted, and now I have a clear plan of where I want the series to end up.
I really appreciate your comment. I means a lot to me.
The great and powerful Make-a-Wish foundation worker is so full of Daaaw and win. My favorite portrayal yet, I think.
The great and powerful Make-a-Wish foundation worker is so full of Daaaw and win. My favorite portrayal yet, I think.
The great and powerful Make-a-Wish foundation worker is so full of Daaaw and win. My favorite portrayal yet, I think.
Wow, this really isn't about AppleShy any more... At all... I don't think it was mentioned last chapter.
Woah, DUDE.
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Thank you very much. I really like Trixie, and I like to see her performing to cheer up sick children.
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If you're referring to Him Part 7, that was intentional. I wanted to keep the action in Cloudsdale. In Family Affairs, you know what Applejack was doing, and I thought it would be interesting for the flow of the action to remain in one city. It does make sense that an AppleShy chapter should contain AppleShy. That only makes sense, and I understand what you mean.
Perhaps it was a bad idea, but I think it worked out well enough. Thank you, though for the feedback. I appreciate it.
This needs more readers.
It's too good to no be seen.
Urg, this story is so good, it better not be dead. I'll have to stank a bitch if I find out otherwise.
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Thank you very much! I really appreciate it that you're enjoying it. I hope to have the next part up really soon.
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Oh this series is not dead. I just have finals to worry about right now, but they're almost over. I hope the have Trials Part 3 up really soon.
Can't wait for the next chapter :D This is the best fan fiction i ever read, i love Pinkie Pie's role i this, she is so awesome being an 'agent'
61544 Oh thank god, you scared me bro...
Scared.
Me.
Favorite Fan Fiction ever :D
oh god i bawled at fluttershy talking to the foal
... hmmmm
Well this was not what I expected... Well great story and I can't wait for the next chapter!
Things are getting intense again.
awwwww yeah!
NEED NEXT CHAPTER NOW I WAITED FOREVER FOR THIS ONE AND I NEED THE NEXT NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
absolutely fantastic series, i cant wait for the next chapter it's going to be amazing
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Thank you very much. I love how Pinkie turned out. She's perfect as an undercover agent.
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I felt the same way when I wrote it. It perhaps the scene that I am happiest with, and saddest if that makes sense, because it showed Fluttershy being able to try and comfort the foal.
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Thank you for the comment. I hope the 'hmmmm,' is a sign of intrigue.
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Thank you very much. I appreciate it.
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Yes things definitely getting intense.
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Thank you very much. I hope to have the next chapter up soon. Right now I'm working on cleaning up the series and improving my work in general.
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Thank you very much. I greatly appreciate the kind words and happy Twilights.
>>To all
I greatly apologize for the delay in my response.
Wheres part four damn it!
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I'm really sorry about the delay. I have a good reason I swear. This story is alive and well. It's just that, I was reading "Surprise Party" and realized that I could have done a better job. I am currently revising the stories and improving them. I am currently up to Dinner Date and hope to have that and Pinkie's Private Party finished by the end of today. The good news is that the editing will be easier from Him onward. Once that's done I will deliver Trials Part 4. A little information on it, the schemes, if they feel disjointed, will begin to converge in this part and Fluttershy's trial will begin.
I Pinkie Promise that I'm working on it, I'll have it up as soon as I can.
311947 I love you.
Yay for Appleshy!
Damn you cliffhanger
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D'aw! Thankee.
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It's the first ship I saw, and the one I truly supported.
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I know. I hate them when I read other folks' stories, but I can't help it. It just felt right. I promise there will be no four month wait for the next part. I don't plan there being a two week wait.
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oh my god im sooo glad u added a new chapter ive been waiting forever. so far this is my favorite fanfic and i love where uve gone with it
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Oh yeah, those too are in seriously trouble. Pinkie's pissed and hot on the trail
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I feel terrible for taking so long, but I'm glad that you're enjoying the series. Triple Pinkie?
I think that this story and that pinkieshy one were some of the first mlp fanfics I read. I remember seeing a comic or something about your story.
Its good to see it is getting updated again.
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Thanks. I'm looking forward to updating the stories in a more timely manner now.
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I love Appleshy!
I love this mate
Yay it's here! I dunno how I missed it, but I really do love this story. Keep up the fantastic work.
517376 Thank you very much. It's among my favorite pairs, and the very first one that I ever read.