Fluttershy never thought Rainbow Dash would love her. Never thought Dash would hold her in that way. But she does. So then, why does it hurt so much inside? Why doesn't she feel the same way? Why can't she just love Rainbow back?
Ratings may change in further chapters.
Woo! New story! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Bonbon_OMG_LOVE.png
If you liked this story or have some constructive critiscism, feel free to comment! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Derpy_Hooves_lolface.png Your feedback is appreciated! Or, if you hated it and want me to burn in a fiery pit of death, why not post a bunch of negative comments and/or spam me with hate-mail? dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Luna_apple.png
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I feel much more sorry for Rainbow Dash than I do for Fluttershy.
Hmmm... Possible Flutterdash...
*looks at rating*
*sees 'everyone'*
Nope.
I like things a little... saucy....
1113940 Ratings my change, it depends on what happens. I thought if I rated it Teen or Mature right now people would get angry because there wasn't any "sauce." But there probably will be later.
1113957 *may
and i'll click 'read later then :)
1113968 Awesome... it worked...(rubs hooves together) hehehe...
No, just jesting ya', they probably will.
Wow, i see potential, but i hope for a fair and nice ending, i mean, in a moment in the story, Fluttershy discorvers that she actually loves Rainbow back. But it is up to you, i'll read it anyways.
Adding to read later.
1114008 Thanks! Who knows what could happen... except me... dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Fluttershy_lolface.png
Poor Rainbow.
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1114265 Thanks! I promise, you won't be dissapointed! Or, at least, I hope... dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Fluttershy.png
Looks pretty good. Fav and upvote.
I like the RainbowShy ship, and this is a unique one. I can't wait to see what Shy's internal monologue comes to
Although the 'spam idea' is tempting, I'll just inform you that of my following of this story.
Other than a few grammar mistakes, and other nit-picks, I like it.
Although I don't normally like Flutterdash stories, this one peeks my interest, I will be eager to see it how it plays out.
--Sol Out--
1114476 Thanks! I'm glad this is unique, I was worried somepony did this before me... dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Rainbow_Dash.png
1114502 I'm glad you're giving this a chance! I'm gonna work hard to make sure the next chapter is better! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Fluttershy_lolface.png
Peace out! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_dealwithit.png
An interesting take on FlutterDash. I'm really interested on seeing how this plays out.
I only read the first part cause Im on the verge of passing out but the way fluttershy and rainbows word are written its amazing it feels like Im listening to them talk but continue on with the story and good luck with it
Wow. I was wondering when somebrony would write this idea out. I've already read a one-sided Flutterdash with RD totally not swinging that way and Fluttershy being about it.
Goes to show that it takes a while for your feelings for a friend to grow, esp. when you've never looked at them that way before.
I'll be watching this!
Yeah, I have to admit I sympathize more with Rainbow Dash on this one. She's in love with Fluttershy and here's Fluttershy unable to speak against her feelings. But this is interesting, giving Fluttershy some time to let her feelings grow. Which makes sense, considering she'd never seen her best friend that way and would need a little time to adjust to it. If nothing else, Fluttershy is pretty much giving her a chance. Not quite so, I know, but again, she just needs time to let herself grow and get more used to the idea and feeling.
Fluttershy, you're sad because you're deceiving her. That makes sense though, I think anyone would feel that way. She's sad because she knows she doesn't feel that way and is deceiving somepony who loves her so much. ...Come on Fluttershy, give it time! FEEL THE LOVE!
As long as they end up together in the long run, I'm happy...
So, this is definitely an interesting take! I'll be keeping watch of this.
1114824 Thanks! Things are gonna get interesting soon, I promise!
1114839 Thanks so much! I was trying to make them sound true to their charecters, and I'm glad it's working! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_rainbowkiss_flip.png
1115526 Hmm, I was hoping that something like this was never used, but it was futile, I guess. I really hope you enjoy the chapters to come!
1116234 Wow! My first text wall comment! Hooray! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra.png It's true, Futtershy could end up falling for Dash slowly, but with the mayhem that's on the way, anything could happen! Things could go either way! Who knows? Oh, wait, I do... dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Derpy_Hooves_lolface.png
still waiting for some 'special sauce'
1117097 The secret ingredient isn't ready, dude. Come back in a couple chapters. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Redheart_hmph.png
1117104 k
1117036 I guess we'll see, then!
Hooray for wall of text comments!
1117156 Huzzah! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/lolface_Celestia.png
1117175 Awesome then!
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Oh in case you read that wrong, the fic I read was Fluttershy having unrequited feelings for RD. Sorry if I confused you.
1118726 No, no confusion was caused, I read it correctly. I was just hoping that this story was completely original. A delusional wish, I know... dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Luna_apple.png
1118770 Well, you are the first to write it! One small step for brony, one big leap for Flutterdash!
hmmm, defiantly interesting, she might think lesbianism is wrong... one word to describe Fluttershy's feelings... DENIAL!
*waits for the kiss*
*waits for sudden revelation that she ACTUALLY loves Dash back*
*waits for social/society issues(homophobes)*
*waits for RD to beat the crap out of them*
HURRY UP ALREADY!
1118784 Celestia banish it, Wolfmaster! I'm not filling my story with random clop, okay? There has to be a backround, it can't just sound like this:
"Fluttershy, who didn't love Rainbow Dash at all, was walking around Ponyville. All of the sudden, Raibow Dash, the coolest mare in Equestria, collided with her. They both picked themselves up and stared into each other's eyes. Rainbow Dash said, "Hey, Fluttershy, what's up?" The epicness of Rainbow Dash's voice made Fluttershy's knees weak, and she flipped herself onto her back, saying, "TAKE ME! TAKE ME RIGHT NOW!" Fluttershy was totally in love with Rainbow Dash.
And then they had sex. The End."
That doesn't sound too bad to me...
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Nononononononononono please don't do that!
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Don't worry, Fluttershy, I'm not going to do that to you. You deserve better, and so do the readers.
1118829 woah woah woah, that comment NEVER mentioned clop =\ although i might have implied that... either way... I'm waiting... please continue, i just hope this has a happy ending :)
1118778 Haha, thanks! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Rainbow_Dash_lolface.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Fluttershy_lolface.png
1118842 I'm... just... trying to write the next chapter... and I don't want to be rushed... dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Fluttershy.png
1118875 I'm looking foward to some good Flutterdash here
1118829 is just stupid and hillarious. And unealistic...
FTW!
poor Fluttershy, i know that position...
My clapping ponies, Take them all!
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1147541 Dude, where do you get those? They're amazing! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Rainbow_Dash_lolface.png
Here ya go cdn.broni.es/images/emotes/mlp-slick.png
1147606 Yes! Awesome! :mlp-prainbow:
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You have to copy the image's url into the blue-picture thingy up there^^^
1147631 Oh... hold on... rewind... Yes! Awesome! cdn.broni.es/images/emotes/mlp-prainbow.png
Fluttershy why you no love my dashy. All in all great story I thought it would be another cliche story, but the plot is amazing! Good job! Five out of five cool dash's.
HOOOORAAAAAH!!!!! cant wait for the next chapter!!!!
Alright, I know the endings a little fast, but I just wanted to get this out of my head and on digital paper. I'm actually happy with this chapter, and I hope everyone else is! I love all of my watchers and readers, so please comment, like or fav! Thanks for waiting for so long, I know I've been gone a long time. Thanks so much for reading!
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1624367 Me gusta that pic. I didn't see the magic of romance fics, until you shared its squees with me!
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Some adventure!
Bedroom fun!
A beautiful body!
Faithful and strong!
I like clopping...
It's so fun to read!
And ponies make it all complete!
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Thanks for the fav, btw!
1624427 I wish I could rhyme
1624595 Don't worry, bro. Mine wasn't even rhyming, it's all cool. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_dealwithit.png
Well this is good, at least they had a nice date so far! Even with the mishap at the end...XD But it's nice that slowly but surely Fluttershy seems to be feeling a little more at ease, so that's good.
Hesitant as I may be, I still look forward to how this unfolds!
It was also great to see Rainbow Dash's perspective, too! How adorable, she really does love Fluttershy! Not that I doubted it, but it's nice that we see her side of things too.