Hi there! The names Kro! Hope you enjoy your stay!
Page generated in 0.173 seconds
Total duration
1,006 users online
79,731 hits today, 2,244,100 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Huh... Surprised that no one else tried to comment on this unlisted story...
PS. Surprise!
i'm going to save this for later >.>
Well that kind of stuff happened in the midevil times
Ummmm gotta to take care of something.......right now!!!!
The "start-up sequence" that you are describing when Button turns on his laptop is actually called "booting."
Remember when you could think about Milano cookies without getting turned on? Pepperidge Farm remembers.
5237149 MY SIDES!
such a fantastic mother-son one shot. A little rushed in parts, but very well paced overall.
Read, Fav'd, Liked, and will enjoy again in the future.
5237149 Jesus Christ! I'm dying!
5237149
PFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFT AHAHAHAHAHAHA!
Typo~
Interting clop here, gj for your first time.
Okay. Where's the hand lotion...
alt name has already been taken for other fics heh.....
Why the hell did you put that giant ass author note at the top?
~Skeeter The Lurker
Just because of his gaming ADDICTION... You put the wrong word...
Doctor Whooves reference, good job man...
Now this is quite a good clopfic, well written too...
You really need to make a sequel to this...
5241903 Of her being impregnated?
5242141
Not necessarily, just a sequel of some more Button on Milano action I guess...
5242203 Err....I dunno. This is my first ever clop, so I'm still kinda new to the concept. A sequel would probably be on a real huge hiatus until I can get a better grasp of this certain genre.
5242293
You actually did an extremely good job for I first time clop fic writer.
This is good and all, but I noticed a few places you could touch up...
Why not find an editor and clean it up?
~Skeeter The Lurker
5242293
I agree..
~OreoKookie
I clopped to this.
And the results are in... Button Mash...YOU...ARE...THE FATHER.
(Live studio audience cheers)
5245762 I can't believe I got the reference so damn fast
I tried to resist the clop but lost it.
well it looks like Button may have a little sibling soon
aaaaaaaannd.....boom goes the dynamite.
5249137 SON OF A BITCH YOU WENT THERE YOU FUCKING WENT THERE!!!!
5254353 Jeez, calm down. Haven't you seen pornographic cartoons? No one gets pregnant, literally no one.
5258186 dude that was all in good fun. i was only joking around.
Was his first name Silver?
5260904 Idk. Just thought Mr Quill is a cool name
5260918 okay
5258347 ...fair enough.
5261097 so...whats your opinion on foalcon? me? its funny as hell when your reading it to yourself XD
5261191 Personally, it's...strange. I'm honestly intrigued when a story like this comes up and I wonder to myself "I wonder how we got into this set of circumstances" so I sit down and I read it. Most of the time it's okay, this one was actually quite good, but as for foalcon itself... well there's two different kinds of that: foal X foal (Which is slightly better in my opinion both story wise and logic wise) and adult X foal (Which I like less because parents having intercourse with their kids is weird and I wouldn't want that happening in the real world, forgive me for being Kantian.)
5262235 I take cooking classes, so I won't judge :3
other than that, foalcon is just plain comedic platinum to me XD
5262678 Ah, cooking class, I really want to cook as a profession.
5262726 yes yes of course. Now hush for a few minutes, I'm baking a cake
5262852 Did someone say cake?! But I thought the cake was a lie?!
5284945 I meant that i was actually baking a chocolate cake....
Surprised this hasn't come up yet:
5300072 All my yes XD
There are some things you may want to edit.
"addiction".
That should be something else.
You're missing a word.
That should be "panties;" and "them".
"her".
"him".
And there shouldn't be a comma there.
5300072 I was half expecting that.
I think that this thing needs an epilogue. Milano just did Button in the throes of her heat manifesting, and she said that there will be more sessions until the heat is over. And I have to say that generally heated mare + no protection + willing stallion = foal in about a year. So there is gonna be a foal that is also gonna be a son/daughter of Milano and brother/sister of Button. There is probably a story about those consequences, unless there is gonna be a deus ex type of memory swipe that keeps things status quo.....
Found something in the message.
new1.fjcdn.com/thumbnails/comments/4275223+_d0b5a19dcebbbdbca32c93c9fce9ba5f.jpg
ever-so satisfying to imagine it in a british accent
also