• Published 30th Jul 2014
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Sex on the Beach - AzureDreamer



Derpy Hooves and Carrot Top have a relaxing day at the beach.

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Comments ( 30 )

Will probably read later (currently in public place), but I guess you could say Carrot Top likes going...
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...topless

I like.


~OreoKookie

I died of suspense only to be resurrected in an attempt to find the truth and then I read this and I can die in peace

A+ ending to a fantastic fic.

Finally, it finishes! :pinkiehappy:

and the ending is... actually a real letdown. :fluttershysad:

I was totally looking forward to absurd abdominal stretching/excessive cum/cum inflation, and you even teased the cum inflation, but nope! Magic condom ruins everything! :twilightangry2:

*sigh* oh well. got my hopes up for nothing...

CONTAINS ANTHROS,

yes

HUGE TITS,

Yes.

EXPLICIT SEX

YES!

LACTATION

YES!

FUTA

YE-wat.

My. GOD.
YES, YES IT IS FINALLY HERE AND DONE AND I HAVE COME!
GRAEUHEÜAÖEÜHHH!!!!

...

Okay, this was literally the BEST clopfic I have ever read.
Seriously. I WANT MORE!!!

...

Holy crap, this turned me into some sex crazed idiot... good thing I have a girlfriend!
But seriously, best ending!

-Zeph

5455299 maybe the author will make an alternate sex scene? or an epilogue? one can hope, right?

5455299 5456491 no alternate sex scene or epilogue, sorry. no cum inflation for carrot top, at least for the forseeable future. i can promise you that both of those fetishes will probably be showing up in the sequel, though!

5456114 calling it the best clopfic ever might be a bit of an overstatement, but thank you for the kind words.

5457416
No-no, you don't get it.
It really was the best clop-fic I have ever read!
Seriously! Other stories were either too story driven or only made for a single scene in mind, but this? Maaaan, this is way beyond any of those!

*sees new chapter*
It's finally here yes yes yes yes yes

*finishes reading chapter*
I came so much and IT. WAS. GLORIES!!!


giggda giggdy huh ALRIGHT:rainbowlaugh:

So much bloody build up and damn if was not satisfying. This is going on shelf. Nice finish man.

5455299 I second this...I was even hoping that magic condom + infertal cum bursting through it would = super pregnant carrot top

This sort of thing isn't usually what I try reading, but I decided to give story a shot anyway. I was genuinely interested, and now I want to know if there is a followup in the works!

5485268 about seven hundred words in the works as of now, yes.

Where is

Dinky's Big Adventure

6165953 in the works. very likely to happen tomorrow, actually.

6169205 A, ok, please link it when it's done. please

6169205 Hey... it has been a week...

6192961 like seven weeks later, the sequel is finally up. sorry it took so long, friend.

Pretty good, but it seems like you skipped over some of the best parts.

Damn son. Where do you get your info. (Trying to sound like I don't already know)

It is very good. Want me to spell it for you?:eeyup:

6556819 Your comment sounded as though you thought something here was taken from somewhere else.

I didn't mean it like that. Sorry.:duck:

6373370 Sorry, my friend can be a little bitch sometimes. :ajbemused:

“Don't say 'little' in relation to that, Derps, it's dishonest.”

10465229
Half again means one and a half.

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