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Bloodmoon

Bloodmoon #1 · Sep 1st, 2014 · · ·

Very nice ^^

Jingle

Jingle #2 · Sep 1st, 2014 · · ·

4937139 Thanks

Bloodmoon

Bloodmoon #3 · Sep 1st, 2014 · · ·

Welcome keep up the good work ^^

iPixella

iPixella #4 · Sep 1st, 2014 · · ·

Love it!

redh00f

redh00f #5 · Sep 1st, 2014 · · ·

THE FEELS!
THEY BURN!

throwawayponystory

throwawayponystory #6 · Sep 1st, 2014 · 1 · ·

Proof = percentage of alcohol * 2. 150 proof is the equivalent of Everclear (it comes in 151 and 190 proof). Drinking an entire mug of it would be near suicide; drinking two barrels?

Ciders are generally measured in alcohol by volume, rather than proof. Strongbow is about 5% ABV. 10% would be very strong. 15% would bring it into range of the strongest beers in the world.

Jingle

Jingle #7 · Sep 1st, 2014 · · ·

Thank you all for your advice and praise.
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LegionofPony

LegionofPony #8 · Sep 2nd, 2014 · 2 · ·

Applejack's face was plastered with the stick lubricant, she continued to run her tongue in circles over the slick walls, occasionally gulping down mouthfuls of her friends seed.

. Mares, nor any other females I know of, release seed in their ejaculations... or at all, for that matter. I've seen this come up in a couple stories now, and it kinda bothers me. Other then that, and the standard few grammatical/punctuation errors, it was very well written. I give it 9/10. :-)

KinkyPony