I want to make it clear that I'm not downvoting this for being a Fall of Equestria story but because it's a bad story, in my opinion.

The moral: Learn English, at least if your supposed to be a author? :T

When is next chapter?

Can't wait for next chapter!

All I want to say, while I do enjoy a good clopfic, you should invest at least 10 - 20 mins into proofreading each chapter. Sometimes, good grammar and spell checks go a long way. Also, check and see if you can't invest in a proofreader. Seriously, you could use it to make this story seem readable to others.

Either way, enjoyed the FoE parody.

Next Chapter!

Update?

Seriously needs some better grammar. Spike speaking in broken sentences is ok, but much of the text is just a mess. Otherwise enjoyable.

I can't wait to see what happens when Discord gets free, or the Cantorlot invasion, heck the Equestria Girls movie chapter will be great to see when Sunset Steals the Element of Magic and finds out what happened in Equestria while she was stuck in the human world, I bet if she does it just right this time then no pony will figure out that she stole the element of magic and made it so they lose a powerful magical item, I would think Sunset wouldn't try to take over Equestria after what she would find out what happened to it after returning and seeing how the world was changed.

MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

please?

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According to Wikipedia, a nariphon is a tree in Buddhist mythology which bore fruit that looked like young women. The fruit were attached at the head. I give props to the author for including a nod to something from real life mythology.

Woo found this one again!

Does anyone knows what a war beast look like in this story?

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Same here in disgust.

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Here's what I say to Dainn, "FUCK YOU AND YOUR SEXISM, YOU COCK SUCKING REINDEER! SO GO TO HELHEIM AND TAKE YOUR PERVY FRIENDS YOU!"