Rarity: Learning One's Worth

Lamaredia

Lamaredia #1 · Jul 15th, 2014 · 4 · 8 ·

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Wow, this was dark. I enjoyed it too however, is this part of a special universe?

Eggonaught

Eggonaught #2 · Jul 15th, 2014 · 6 · 6 ·

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Wow, that was brutal. Absolutely lovely, but wow. Pretty sure I'd end up just like her in this setting, given my sub-par cocksucking and keeping-my-mouth-shut skills.
It's much crueler to the main cast than the canon story (where Rarity's starting to work her way back "up" the social ladder, and Cadance is a bubbly and well-treated pet), but definitely a great read.
Whoever you are (heh), I really hope you enjoy writing these as much as we enjoy reading them.

By the way, caught one typo: "it was possible to he(a)r Rich".

dx9771

dx9771 #3 · Jul 15th, 2014 · 4 · 4 ·

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4696988
It is part of the fall of equestria universe where caribou have taken over and enslaved all mares. If you have a derpibooru account you can look it up under the tag "fall of equestria"

Pink Rocket

Pink Rocket #4 · Jul 15th, 2014 · 5 · 3 ·

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Too exaggerated and silly to be enjoyable. Aside from a few side-tickling dialogues, it really has no girth as a clop and mostly consist of moment were you just roll your eyes, waiting for something interesting to happen.

(Also poor Spike. You can tell that he's really lost his will to live and that nothing is enjoyable for him anymore. Just same the shit everyday. *cue emo tears*)

Little_Draco

Little_Draco #5 · Jul 15th, 2014 · 2 · 4 ·

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I think if you add a little bit more back story to this it could be better, nice job.

Guiding_Passion

Guiding_Passion #6 · Jul 15th, 2014 · 15 · 22 ·

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Crap complete and total crap just like all the other FoE stories. Seriously why do you guys insist on writing this junk

Nuanced

Nuanced #7 · Jul 15th, 2014 · 7 · 4 ·

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This is probably the most brutal FoE story I've seen, which says quite a lot. Anyway I think the only reason I have a problem is because its Rarity, I prefer her in the higher classes.

Pilgrim

Pilgrim #8 · Jul 15th, 2014 · 7 · 7 ·

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Hope this means you'll write a story for the rest of the mane six. Looking forward to more of your work.

NakedSpaceMan

NakedSpaceMan #9 · Jul 16th, 2014 · 8 · 10 ·

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4698404 Because it's fun to read and write about something different than "friendship solves this, love solves that" that over saturates this site. Sure it's about stuff that isn't exactly PC but really it's fiction.

Comment posted by Guiding_Passion deleted Jul 16th, 2014

pinkamenacupcakes

pinkamenacupcakes #11 · Sep 13th, 2014 · 1 · 9 ·

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yes! i no like rarity so take that bitch!!

Shadow of the Night

Shadow of the Night #12 · Jun 9th, 2015 · 1 · ·

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4698404

My thoughts on the thoughts behind your comment, even though I don't agree with the material, do not hold these views IRL, and do not get off to this:

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Guiding_Passion

Guiding_Passion #13 · Jun 9th, 2015 · · 2 ·

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6073664
Eh get lost kid your botherin me.

Shadow of the Night

Shadow of the Night #14 · Jun 9th, 2015 · 1 · ·

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6073931

That is honestly an immature response. First of all, I'm not a kid. Secondly, you could have phrased that in a better manner.

Guiding_Passion

Guiding_Passion #15 · Jun 9th, 2015 · · ·

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6073956
What did you expect your bothering about such an old comment that I forgot I wrote in the first place. Honestly I don't even remember this story at this point I no longer even care about FoE these days.

But your right I probably could have said that in a more polite manner. I just get annoyed when people comment on old comments that I've made that are no longer relevant.

Shadow of the Night