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I love how you presented Pinkie Pie, lawl
That was great!
So, that dunk tank is full of Mare cum? This makes me wonder about something, Are there no any female Warbeasts to harvest cum from? I ask because sometimes in these kind of stories some creatures don't have females and use other species to breed.
Cherry Berry flinch as the stallion raised his voice, “B-but there will be other holidays master. Maybe I’ll be more in the mood during Hearth Warming Eve.”
Will there be a Hearth Warming Eve story?
So the guy ordered hay that's on fire? Wouldn't that kill him?
Aside from the odd typo I pointed out, this was a really well done Fall of Equestria story. Good work! Just so you know, I'm not into this sort of thing either, I just like exploring these stories because of how taboo they are. A lot of them tend to actually be good, but your FoE stories are of the highest quality if you ask me.
Something about this setting that has always bothered me is that no one ever seems to consider that thrusting things into a girl's mouth when she doesn't want to is a horrible idea.
Real world situation, but a guy tried to do something a lot of Caribou and stallion have done in the Fall of Equestria stories and get a forced blowjob. The result?
The girl bit his dick off and he had to be hospitalized and they weren't able to reattach his dick.
Regardless, on this story I found it well written and a shit load better than most cannon Fall of Equestria stories, but that's to be expected. I really felt for Cherry Berry and Fizzy was interesting as well-it's like the part of his mind that says, hey, maybe girls don't enjoy this, is shut off.
Makes sense, actually, considering the corrupted Crystal Heart's effects.
Cherry,ya dummy, just Jump in your rocker and ho to space