Taking place in alternate timeline of the Fall of Equestria universe where the caribou took over Equestria years before the events of the first episode of FiM happened. This retells the stories and events of FiM in an after Fall setting.
This is most retarded version of Element gathering I have ever seen. Good god.
Really... really this what you come up with. They are corrupted as all fuck and the Elements work...
Instead of purifying them of the 'tainted' magic, it works either way. Rainbow Dash is hardly loyal period in this one as she is trying to leave at a drop of a hat so I have no clue how the Element works for her. I would have read it if the Elements fought back and slowly cleanse Equestria while learning Friendship in this sicko world, but once again I am disappointed with how people love this world.
Man... fuck this story and all stories promoting its existence.
And yes, I don't care if you are offended or cry to someone about my opinion about it.
First off, I loathe FoE. There, it's said. It's porn that tries to be a real story and completely fails on that point... I could go for hours elaborating why. Then, there's the whole "rape/slavery/mind control" thing that I hate even more.
There, that's said.
Second, this story is fun. As in, hilariously bad to read. The bits of backstory and information delivered throughout the narrative are awkward at best and suicide worthy at worst. Typos are everywhere and the formatting could use botox, surgery and implants. Or one of these fucking magic collars.
The idea is good but it is very badly executed. The narrative seems lazy and the description is lacking. Not to mention all the spelling and grammar mistakes. Needs a lot of work.
She just kind of explained she doesn't want the other mares to die. She has no loyalty to them.
So how this should have gone is that each of the elements starts to activate followed by Rainbow Dash's element just sputtering out.
Nightmare Moon wins, and Equestria is saved. Sure, a lot of mares die-in fact, so many die that only the rebellion lives, but at the same time the Caribou are going extinct-I sincerely doubt any cows are uncollared.
So I'm calling this-an Equestria where almost everyone died-a happy end.
Genius!
This is most retarded version of Element gathering I have ever seen. Good god.
Really... really this what you come up with. They are corrupted as all fuck and the Elements work...
Instead of purifying them of the 'tainted' magic, it works either way. Rainbow Dash is hardly loyal period in this one as she is trying to leave at a drop of a hat so I have no clue how the Element works for her. I would have read it if the Elements fought back and slowly cleanse Equestria while learning Friendship in this sicko world, but once again I am disappointed with how people love this world.
Man... fuck this story and all stories promoting its existence.
And yes, I don't care if you are offended or cry to someone about my opinion about it.
If you get your rocks off on it, good for you.
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Yeah, every time I write that word I keep thinking of something like The Flash's Speed Froce,
I'm kinda thinking that the tirek episode is going to do a lot of damage.
First off, I loathe FoE. There, it's said. It's porn that tries to be a real story and completely fails on that point... I could go for hours elaborating why. Then, there's the whole "rape/slavery/mind control" thing that I hate even more.
There, that's said.
Second, this story is fun. As in, hilariously bad to read. The bits of backstory and information delivered throughout the narrative are awkward at best and suicide worthy at worst. Typos are everywhere and the formatting could use botox, surgery and implants.
Or one of these fucking magic collars.
Third, what 4700244 said.
Downvoted, called the cops and your mom.
And the UN, not that they would do anything.
So would they have to rebirth the elements after everytime they use them?
The idea is good but it is very badly executed. The narrative seems lazy and the description is lacking. Not to mention all the spelling and grammar mistakes. Needs a lot of work.
Um...
Rainbow Dash didn't demonstrate loyalty.
She just kind of explained she doesn't want the other mares to die. She has no loyalty to them.
So how this should have gone is that each of the elements starts to activate followed by Rainbow Dash's element just sputtering out.
Nightmare Moon wins, and Equestria is saved. Sure, a lot of mares die-in fact, so many die that only the rebellion lives, but at the same time the Caribou are going extinct-I sincerely doubt any cows are uncollared.
So I'm calling this-an Equestria where almost everyone died-a happy end.
Okay, Dainn I can KINDA tolerate Equestria being a maledom society where all mares are worthless rape meat.
I can kind of accept the horrible dick move of 'if I die I'm taking literally ALL of you with me' as assholish as it is.
But holy fuck, punishing them for saving your ass? You suck times infinity dude!