Eeh, I think I'll see where it goes

Hmmm, interesting! Guess we'll need to fire up the 'ole corrupting FiM adventures thread!

Twilight new she had to heed the call.

Thought I should point this out.

a good start and i hope to see more

Wouldn't that indicate that at least some portion of the world would be destroyed by situations the Mane Six faced? I am imagining that the new rules lack an altruistic drive. This seems like a curious literary experiment, but those happen now and again.

4663066 dunno nightmare moon would be enslaved, as there has already been a mention of the elements.
discord probably wouldn't escape as that's the CMC's fault . no love to steal so chrysalis attack would be useless. sombra already has a slave empire, don't think he'll mind the new management.

funny enough without all the love and tolerance it seems equestria is a lot more save

actualy this is good finaly some one who continues the story

4663247

Discord actually would be released by the extreme disuinity of a harsh and authoritarian regime. I'm actually surprised they aren't buried in snow; Windigos should love all the hate and disuinity. Chrysalis actually would invade. With slaves incapable of escaping they could foribly siphon out all the emotion they wanted. And I forgot another one: Tirek. Tirek absorbs magic. With slaves, they can be drained. It was harmony that defeated him, and only purified harmony from the tree of Harmony. He could suck the magic from the king without any interruption.

Wow. Equestria is ultra-screwed.

I have NOT read this yet... BUT the premise sounds UNBELIEVABLY interesting...

.... Continue.

stuffpoint.com/my-little-pony-friendship-is-magic/image/75603-my-little-pony-friendship-is-magic-lolwat.jpg

4664450 well either way they're ultra-screwed anyway within the FoE setting.
oh well doesn't really matter what we make of it the writer will probably give a suitably perverted explaination

4666136

It's true. But a compounded negative is hardly an improvement.

And who cares about a perverted explanation? How about a sensible one?

4667134 It's clop, not a Inner Demons level story

4673630

So are (for example) "Expecting Exile" and "Daring and Ahuizotl's Tropical Life." Both have sensibly-explained backstories and are elaborate while Being sexually explicit.

It's tragic that most have come to accept that, as a genre, "clop" is syonymous with "cheap."

4674361 Okay it's pointless clop then. Really though is it really a big deal if it may or may not have a good plot?

4674372

Strangely enough, yes. I've spoken with more than my fair share of folks who find that a good plot makes clop better. It becomes something a cut above, and thus superior. It transcends cheapness. It also means there are no nagging "Wait a minute... that's ludicrous" thoughts. That frees up the mind to enjoy the sexuality. To be more clear,Arthur Schopenhauer's retort comes in here. After discussing philosophers who ignored physical blows he imagined an audience saying, "Yes, but these men were philosophers." His retort was "And you are fools, eh? Precisely." It doesn't take a genius to prefer sensible clop.

Just a couple of inconsistencies:

-If Twilight's horn was lost before she took the Entrance Exam, then why would she take it at all? And presumably, Rainbow lost her wings before that point, so she couldn't do the Sonic Rainboom either.

4675837
The story round the egg will get clearer when I get to the retelling her cutie mark story to the cmc. lets just say she doesn't have to be taking the exam to be with the egg.

About Rainbow that's explained a little in the next chapter.

... hmmm while its close to my idea.. its diff enough not to be thievery.
so... not bad. I guess.

The last picture was of the Alicorn in the nude, her horn was gone and wings in socks.

Weren't the wings of Alicorns and Pegasi inside some sort of hard casing?