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Novalis14


I am a young ametur author. I love to write and I like mlp fim so before I could stop myself I came up with ideas.

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The war between the draconaqui and the alicorns has been raging for centuries, harmony and chaos clashing once more. However it is drawing to a close, as a young draconaquus flees his burning city he meets one of the enemies a blue alicorn filly who shares a mutual worry for the end of the war.

A one-shot written on a whim contains: flowery words, Head cannon, questionable writing quality.
Hope you enjoy.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 17 )

Good story, like the concept actually. I thought that there was a little too much emphasis on some areas, but the general bulk of the story was quite good. I will give this a like, and maybe a watch. :raritywink:

I liked it , though I'm guessing Celestia was hiding somewhere else. or maybe fighting?

AWESOME WORKv:pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy:
please continue this :rainbowkiss:

4607938

She was scouting ahead to see if it was safe.

4608011
It was written as a one shot but maybe if i get enough people asking I could make a few more stories in the same setting.

Who are you? The writing style seems to match that of one of my best friends. (A non brony college kid)
Trippy...

4608372

Yeah not me dude...

4608374 lol I figured. I loved the story tho!

Well, this was a fine story. (Luna and Discord? :rainbowhuh: Won't Celestia and Fluttershy get mad? :rainbowderp:)

4616196
lol well it isn't really supposed to be a ship fic, :twilightsheepish:more like they hold a mutual understanding.

4616961 I meant it to be a joke. Celestia wouldn't put up with him for a second, Fluttershy's too timid, and Luna would be far too strict (no one say dirty, it's too easy :rainbowlaugh:). As a rule, I'm not a big fan of shipping, unless it's done extraordinarily well. :eeyup:

For any YouTubers who read this, this would make for an excellent read.
This story has been...
LUNA APPROVED!®
Owww, Luna, you didn`t have to yell that is my ear, think I busted an eardrum.
:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:Pinkie score:13/10

4608011
Well there is a sort of sequel out now.

I would actually place the desire for Peace as something firmly in the realm of Harmony, but I get what you are going for here. Certainly Discord's absence of lethal tactics could be put down to this, although I personally prefer the idea that he just didn't like completely destroying his 'toys' because then he couldn't keep mangling them. (and then :fluttershysad: happened)

4947870 Really? Where can I read it? Do you think that this story would make it onto Equestria Daily?
4607938 What does the writing say in your avatar?

5497945
There are two Here -> Clickity and Here -> Clickity 2
They can pretty much be read in any order.

I don't know how to get on equestria daily, besides I don't think this is anywhere near good enough.:twilightsheepish:

5497945 "Dayum That's Funky"

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