The Doctor and Derpy wake up in a strange world. They have no Tardis no sonic screwdriver, just a chest with a wooden pickaxe and a book.
This is a dr.whooves minecraft crossover
WARNING!
This story is not of high quality. It will have decent grammar, punctuation and spelling HOWEVER. It will have crappy pacing odd wording at times and might not make sense to everyone.
This story was written because the idea would leave me alone until I wrote it, and because I wrote it someone has to read it.....
Chapters (6)
i like
Good concept
But please get an editor
The important thing here is, you got the idea out of your head and made it real.
The mistakes are trivial compared to that. How many of us have ideas but then do nothing to make them happen? They sit there, tumbling around in our brains, taking up space, and they never see the light of day.
The hardest part is that first step, getting them out into text. The little details like grammar and spelling can take care of themselves later. I do not deny that they are important, but making an idea a solid is a far more complicated task. Focus on that for now.
I'll follow this for now. It seems interesting. However, no vote yet; I'm still undecided.
But really, please find an editor at some point. Your grammar is worse than you think it is.
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That is hard to believe seeing how I think it is pretty crappy. As said in the description this story is not going to be high quality, it is more of a rant of ideas that I had to get out of my head. At some point I will probably get a editor but probably not until I finish it.
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A quote from the description:
I don't know if I would go so far as to describe it with "decent."
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Trust me compared to some other I've read mine is near perfect.
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I'm not comparing you to others. I'm comparing you to a basic level of competence. Your latest chapter has nine or so errors in the first paragraph. I'm sorry, but to me, that is not "decent." And comparing yourself to someone below you is--to me, at least--lazy. I'm doing a lot better than some people, but I will be the first to admit that I'm nowhere near the best. I'm not going to simply point out that I'm better than that guy and call it a day. I want to work until I'm better than the guy above me--so to speak.
However, I think I will take me leave. Sorry for the mini rant, but it kind of irked me that you called your grammar decent.
Good luck with the rest of the story.
Wow, this is actually.. Not bad, you are ocassionally missing punctuation with the Doctor's name but other than that, if you ignore the mistakes, this isn't half bad, keep up the good work!
I really like this idea. keep it up!
This isn't half bad. I am slightly impressed. Keep up the almost good work!
I really like this!
Doctor, derpy is a pony let us not make bacon jokes
What I think should happen next/at some point:
1. They find a village.
2. They meet an enderman.
3. Derpy sees a man with completely white eyes standing in the foggy distance.
4. They find a ravine, and consequently an abandoned mineshaft and gold.
Also, do you plan to end this story with the two finding a stronghold and going to the End?
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I love your ideas! Also I would tell you about my ending plans but it would spoil the ending.
I really didn't notice any grammar or punctuation, then again, I'm horrible with that stuff soo.....
Anyway, I like this story so far!
Pssssttt! Heres a suggestion for when they 'like' each other *hint* *hint*, The Doctor finds a diamond, and gives it to Ditzy! That would make me so, so happy! Oh, and if you give Ditzy the pet name Pigeon. I. Will. Die. FROM CUTENESS LIKE, PIEGON! ITS SO FRICKING CUTE! So please please do that!
I love this story, you present the whole Minecraft world in quite a way that I don't think I've read before. Also, the characters are nice to read as well. Overall I'd say it's a fairly light read, which is by no means a bad thing, in fact I like it very much as it is. I hope new chapters come soon, thank you for writing this.
love this story already
...she was almost immediately encased in a dirt room, with white text glaring in her face that read: Disconnected, flying is not enabled on this server.
HAAHAA