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Wolfsalvo


If you want to see more of my work, look me up on Fanfiction.net, I have many stories already finished there that may interest you if you enjoy what I post here.

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This story is a sequel to Luna's Night Out


Mark is visiting Equestria a month after his and Luna's birthday night at the bar they had met in, and he has a week to spend it all with Luna. They had hit it off amazingly their first night knowing each other, yet a whole week with each other is a lot of time for events to change relationships and views. Despite Princess Luna being royalty, Mark plans on enjoying most of his time with her, along with making her time with him just as pleasant.

Coverart by Yakovlev-vad.
~Please go look at his art, they are just stunning!

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 111 )

Ah, good to see this continued :)
Can't wait to see what happens next!

I enjoyed this. Very cute.

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1st- I love that Happy Tree Friends profile pic XD
2nd- yeah, I know...

3rd- I had 9k words done all this time, but after that, I couldn't find the ideas to write more, and the originally planned 27k mega one-shot is scrapped, as I know this story is going to be much longer than that amount. The best part is, I still have ANOTHER one-shot luna/human story about to be posted. fast paced, but I feel it is good, especially once I get it posted xD

4555316 3 HumanXLuna story?!?!

You're my favourite person on the Internet(Second, next to someone else)

4555734 lol, what can I say? Luna is best pony xD

YOU FUCKING DID IT, THANK GOD PRAISE THE MOON. You crazy sunuvabitch, you did it.

Comment posted by Fireheart 1945 deleted Jun 17th, 2014

Brilliant work mate. This is with out a doubt my number one most anticipated story, because I am really desperate for a good HumanXLuna story, and this is a great start.

One thing tough, how long ago was Luna's birthday? In the description you say one month, in the first paragraph it is two weeks, and a little later it's five weeks. Gest pick one ok.

4558557 ouch, I thought I fixed those errors! Welp, time to go back and edit it. As for the timeline, I plan on it being about a month ago that their birthdays occurred.

Nice job. I look forward to the rest of their week together. And yes, Luna is best pony.

Those of you that got down voted, please note that it wasn't me. someone went through and down voted a majority of my stories and the comments of those referring to my story(s).

Really like your stories now that I've FINALLY gotten around to reading some from my read later lists. Gonna follow you so hard now. :pinkiecrazy:

Eager for more updates here.

Gonna go read another one of your stories now, bye. :rainbowwild:

So much dawwww!!

Not entirely certain how exactly you have managed to accelerate the romance so much without it seeming forced. But very well done in any event! :twilightsmile:

Still wending my way through your inventory, but I have thus far enjoyed your work greatly.

Don't like the idea of interspecies activities that are inappropriate, which seems to be coming...

But this story introduces a number of cute scenes, I can't deny that,

When is the next chapter :3

4758304 I don't know, but I can say it is after the 30th....
I will work on it when I can, as I am an avid Luna fan, but, well....
(legal issues are very... time consuming...)

That there is Quick Silver metal. I have a mare that is good with spells and loves jewelry... she enchanted that stuff so it won’t melt.

Oh good, that's exactly the concern I was having about putting a giant slab of mercury around someone's neck.

:rainbowlaugh: Best prank timing and oldest prank in the book XD that was so funnny i had started crying.... :rainbowlaugh:

Comment posted by Wolfsalvo deleted Oct 28th, 2014

So many ellipses...

Other than that, pretty goooooood.

It is very good. Thank you.

Yay you're alive...keep up the good work:twilightsmile:

BELLY RUBS NOW!!! I NEED TO SEE THE NEXT CHAPTER!!! I NEED TO!!!

Great story can't wait to read the next chapter.

Make him climb another mountain in the Dragon kingdom :pinkiecrazy::rainbowkiss:. No jk. Maybe they can go out to do one of those outdoor activities the humans were fascinated by in the first story. Also great chapter :twilightsmile:

I'm always very happy when this story updates.

"And, my dear Mark, fur takes longer to dry than skin.”

She could always do like dogs and be dry in 10 seconds

Though since Luna seemed to have the fay planned out

Slip of the keyboard, eh?

Still really enjoying this story!

5576511 Eh, I miss a few things here and there...

Any ideas you wanna suggest for the next chapter? Luna being frisky. Mark flirty? A nice romantic setting? A game setup? who knows what else I may be missing... I haven't even been able to think of something that would be plausible or even something I would like to turn into a full on chap yet.

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Hmm, I've thought about it on and off, and like you I can't think of anything for a whole chapter... Perhaps have Luna pull some elaborate prank on Mark? Maybe I'll reread the story from the beginning (as it's been a while) and then something'll come to mind.

More Discord annoyance, Sunset Shimmer visits, and more teasing. That would be what I want to see.

Vary good:pinkiesmile:P.S like:pinkiehappy:

Ding Dong




(Ps:good story bro)

Lovely has always. I love this story.

Chapters like these are fun to read. Just the two of them interacting with eachother and building bonds. Perhaps a chapter where Celestia joins them on one of their trips. You got to know the family aswell.

That was a very beautiful sceen. Loving the story and really wishing portals to Equestra where a real thing.

I need moooooooooooooooooooooore.
:pinkiecrazy:

Lovely chapter, thank you for the update. :heart:

Now we wait for the rest of Luna's story. :twilightsmile:

Really nice story. Keep up the good work!

badass luna incomming

Sorry to double post but just remebered.. did Luna go threw with letting him find out about rubbing the base of a unicorns horn?

6220614 Nope... Im unsure when I will use that, but it is still in te back of my mind...

This story is fantastic, can't wait for more.

Dam it, when do you think the next chapter will come out?:rainbowhuh: Cause I love this story, not once did it feel like I was reading a 8000+ words it more felt like reading a hundred words . Really this is one of the best story's I have ever read in a long time.
My rating is 10:yay: out of 10:yay:

6486121 I don't know when it will be completed, but it is under progress. nearing 3k words as of last nights burst of inspiration...

Movie scene... should I delve into it or just have it mentioned?

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