The Obion Three, an elite group of tenno, were sent to Mars' moon to release one of their old comrades still held in stasis in the void. Unfortunately for them, not only has the portal been discovered, they find that the Grineer have already infested the entrance and are guarding every point of the dry desert surface of Eris. Once more, Captain Vor is preparing to use his prized golden void key to enter it and capture the tenno in stasis. The Obion Three must save their comrade, but what will happen if they interrupt the portal opening to the void? It seems that whatever they did will 'infect' a new world and might condemn it forever, and this world is on the verge of a great cataclysm of its own. The balance must be maintained in all things and all places.
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Dang, I'm not the first to make a Warframe fic. Welp, guess I'll read it later.
Heavy gunners can infact be knocked down with rhinos charge ability
I have wanted to see or write a Warframe crossover for the longest time
4488021 NOOOO! I was supposed to be the first! Ya've ruined everythin'!
Ooh, a Volt and Frost P? I like both, but I'm just missing a piece of FP
4490029 Haven't even finished the first chapter yet, so you're still good.
Though the Griffins made absolutely no sense here. It was hard to understand what was going on as well.
4492482 That was implied by Twilight and a few ponies who openly remarked that.
The title of the second chapter also has a secret to it.
4492441 Well, it took me four months to get the systems, soooo...
4492544 Oh God, four months? I had almost every piece in three days, don't know how you can go four months without the systems.
4493606 Because of rarity and people not getting T3 keys.
Sooo...
Hentaiframe?
4503564 Hentaiframe? You mean Hydros? No. This was a Teech design I put in the warframe forums some time ago. It's in the description. It was made to be a heavy artillery warframe with extreme armor second only to Valkyrie, shields, and cannon weapons. It was supposed to be a pirate-ninja.
...... why do I expect Darvo to come out of no where?
4536166 Darvo?
4536291 Darvo
4536302 Oh. Him. I never remember his name.
4536354 I just expect him to pop out of a box or something that pinkie has
Phorid pls be gentile
4632139 Strmn pls
Now, Desert Tactics are possible. Eventually with Desert Skates. Oh, and take a Pic from Grineer Words or show the Transltion from the Wikia.(Not to good at writing, and typing words)
4636627 With work, you'll get perfect with describing the environnement as you see it.
So, I can See, Infestion coming out. Getting Creepy, Great.... And what you really do the best, Warframes can write
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4637458
Oh fuck that reminds me of that amazing fluffy abuse artist, ak-something, I'm too high to remember shut up
4637465
You need a ladder to get down?
Ooh, a Warframe crossover that I haven't read!
Please, be good...
4698071 So? What do you think?
4698483 Oh, i thought I commented already... Well, looks like my phone is not doing a good work...
It is, indeed, a good one (so far)
Maybe partially because I've read Ponyframe recently (an example of "how not to write Warframe X-over"), but it is good nontheless (based on first chapter only, though).
I'll be sure to leave any feedback if I spot something wrong. So far there were a few mistakes (Tenno without a capital letter, error in Lech Kril name, some fragments that could use some synonims), but nothing major, trust me. You're doing a great job
4698499 Hmmm. I always run the chapters through spellcheck, but these sorts of things...I never know when I'm supposed to capitalize them or not. I'm glad to get feedback from someone finally.
Tell me, do you know Lephantis?
4698710 I'm with Warframe since closed beta, mate. I know every enemy, every boss, frame and weapon
4698730 So was I. I still have the Braton Vandal, and my first frame was the Volt.
4699087 I got all of the event weapons so far, but yeah, Braton Vandal earns the most respect (maybe besides Founders Gear, but well...).
My starter was Cal, now I main... Well, I don't have a main exactly, I like to use all of the frames, but Rhino (Prime) is probably the most used.
Good to see somebody with a knowledge about the actual game to write a crossover with it
You are making Griffons sound like Corpus, the trading and all, while they speak of Ponies as of Grineer - military expansion is their domain after all...
Looks like I'm the only one to notice the refference :P
4700930 I did it AGAIN?! I never notice these things when I write!
Oooooh, Infested... Well this is going to be fun
4702690 Also, there's a reason why I had asked you about Lephantis.
4701484 Well, it's not like it's something bad, and the reference itself is rather subtle (I'd say you need to be on a fan-leven of knowing how is Booben formed and knowing what Pink Shorts are to notice that).
Neverthless, great story so far! At first I was concerned about this commander guy being a bad, Gary Stu type OC (with his bad-OC-like looks), but now it's justified.
Oh, and I like how your story is the only one where Tenno do not speak.
Keep up the good work and U'm waiting for more!
4702728 I hesitated immensely on having them speak or not. I wanted them to speak, but that wouldn't reflect their "silent-even-when-bleeding-and-crawling-along-the-floor" archetype (not sure I'm using this word well). Then I remembered I had done this sort of thing with three other characters from one of my older stories and realized I can do that style with them. Show that they can communicate silently amongst eachother while demonstrating personality through actions and observation.
Also, yes. Lephantis was a reference.
4702752 I was reffering to the Ponies-Grineer, Griphons-Corpus refference. Well, that's the thing with two threads being in one discussion, you never know to which thread one is reffering to
But, yeah, it's refreshing to see a fic that portrays Tenno as they are in-game, and gives them personality and everything without using any spoken words.
And I guess, that Lephantis is coming..?
4702776 I never said that.
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4702799 Oh, of course, I must've misunderstood you
Of course, my crappy phone didn't even saved my elaborate comment
Lephantis, huh? Well, he'll definitely make a good main villain (at least I hope he'll be one), the Grineer or the Corpus are main villains in most of the crossover fics (except Endure for an Eternity - which firstly has no villain, but then also features Lephantis - maybe).
Well, we'll see how things will go
The exposition takes pretty long, but that's understandable, since Tenno are not the only main plotline in here, there's the whole Gryphons - Ponies conflict, both nations being on the verge of war pretty much. Still, I feel that the Tenno should get more focus. But that's probably coming, since the Infested appeared and Tenno are the only ones able to fight them. I long for seeing the ponies' reactions to Nekros slicing his enemies - living creatures, still, and inhabitants of Equestria ar rather pacifistic - or Frost leaving holes in them using his weapons... Yeah, more action!
As for ponies themselves - sometimes they seem almost not interested in the Tenno whatsoever. See Luna jumping on Twilight for not being here on time and completely oblivious to the fact, that four humanoidal extremely powerful beings from other space are sitting in her garden and did something that shocked even Twilight the alicorn, bah, the GODDES of very magic! If Twi is shocked by something then hell, it's probably worth checking out. She should be like "What? What have they done? Report immediately!" not "Pfff, whatever, it's not like they can raise the dead or something, sit on your flank and listen to my story".
Also Luna acted like a bitch. I mean, come on, since Twilight is an alicorn, that means we have Nightmare Night behind us, which means that Luna is rather friendly now. Hell, she's most probably grateful to Twilight for what she did. And what do we got? "You were late! You are an alicorn but I am a better alicorn! You do not deseve the title! I won't ever acknowledge you! No, your discoveries don't interest me in the slightest!"
Yeah, she was kind of out of character.
But other than that - no issues so far. Well, maybe sometimes it's hard to tell who you are referring to, but it's not something big.
Keep up the good work, mate! I'm waiting for nest chapters!
4744435 Actually, it's because I'm portraying Luna as somene being very serious and who follows the rules since she's kind of culturally out of place. She needs something to hang onto. Also, the tenno will get their light. The ponies are simply mostly ignoring them not because they're not super curious, but because of the possible war between griffons and neighponese. The 'creatures' are keeping to themselves and are barely doing anything, so they sometimes get forgotten.
4744448 Well... Ok, yeah, I can understand that. The war is probably more important than some creatures that meditate in the garden and do nothing. Yes, that works.
4744449 I predict everything without even planning it or actually predicting it.
Nice. I love this story. BTW OP, do you play warframe?
4749787 Aye. I'm a Closed Beta tester.
Remember the beta? Everything was better back in the closed beta.
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4749803 Wait does that mean you have the prime version of excal?
4749847 I'm not a founder. You had to pay a lot to get it. And frankly, I didn't want to waste a hundred bucks for a mildly changed Excalibur.
4749864 Huh. My friend has every damn warframe in the game except that one.