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It's nice to finally know how they got together.
Very nice flashback. It will be interesting to see how she 'comes out' with her business, and the reactions there. I'd imagine she would have to nearly fight off fellow changelings at first.
7984755 I'm curious why you think she'd have to fight off other changelings?
7984659 I've been working on this for a loooooooooong time. It's nice to finally get to put it out!
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Well, extremely social hive mind species, fairly rigid natural hierarchy, recent shattering of the bond for some and widespread confusion with Chrysalis being captured (soon?)
It seems natural that at least a few changelings would want her as leader, protector, or temporary person to find shelter in a chaotic time. She's not a full queen, but she was some sort of leadership in the hive, right?
And since she doesn't seem to want any of that later, well...
Very nice
7984833 Ah, right, I forget that most people reading this haven't read Honey Pie. Let's say that the other changelings will be all taken care of by the time Ember comes out publicly.
Oh believe you me when I say that steamy stuff is not needed for a good story. It's a nice addition, but damn was this a nice chapter. And then there are fics where the non-steamy stuff are the best parts (looking at you, Xenophilia). Also, yay, cuddles.
And some typos here and there.
And cuddles. Mmm, cuddles.
Edit:
As in they'll get cuddles? Please say they'll get cuddles. :3
7984923 Glad you liked it! Alas I don't have an editor for Ember's, my usual editor doesn't do these ones. So anybody who wants to point out typos for me to fix is welcome to.
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But will they get cuddles? :c (see previous edit)
7984935 There have been occasional cuddles. (Changeling grooming cuddle piles are totally part of this universe/my headcanon on changelings.)
Ay lmao 1000 likes.
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Today is being a very good day!
I think you mean 'with a pony' or possibly 'But the thought of mating was a pony that came with a shiver of uncertainty.' If your using figurative language.
But it's probably the former.
7985555 Thank you, fixed!
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I like this particular story, a great deal. It's always interesting to see how someone becomes who they will eventually be.
This looks extremely official, what with the plot-per chapter spoiler bars...
Well, it looks interesting. No where near my usual cup of coffee, but I'll toss it onto my Read Later bin.
I note Far Gaze seems very happy at people boning his GF(?) whom he claims to love.
Just a little idea here...
Because it is in the middle of the series (hopefully) and because it is practically retrospective (and because there was never any suggestion before that Far Gaze would be more than employee and maybe "friend with benefits" to Ember, it may be wise to add few lines at the start and the end...
...lines that would connect the story (maybe some reason why Ember reliving this memory)
but it is not my story in the end and maybe there is reason why you didn't done that
7987156 I find it odd that so many people seemed to not have a clue that Far and Ember have something special going on. I guess I didn't make it obvious enough, but I sure thought it was pretty dang obvious.
Pretty good back story so far. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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I personally think that this has something to do with kind of " work " Ember is doing.
Yes, she helps ponies and it make sense now, when you mentioned that Far Gaze wanted to do that in his life...
...but all in all, in this line of work, and without backstory it was not really obvious. At least not to me, who romantically believe in one partner. I mean I do understand and I am pretty open in these things, but you ' ve said it yourself at least once... or Ember did, that she is technically a whore, and that she is not ashamed of it. ( not exactly sure if you ' ve used this word, so I don ' t mean it with negative implications ), but yeah as a partner I would have issues to deal with it, at least from start.
7984953 Imma steal that headcanon. (love that idea )
I can't hold all this feels. Ya see, she's so goddamn cute, I just want to bloody hug the shite outta that changeling queen.
Love this chapter and what it reveals, though a bit of... Fridge logic? I'm not sure that term entirely applies, but we'll go with that.
Far Gaze sees the unseen.
Just how good was Celestia's disguise as Darjeeling? Far does screen at the front, after all. As I believe one General Calrissian said, there's gotta be some kind of reading, up or down. Either that, or Celestia could teach Changelings a thing or two about subterfuge.
7992045 The thing about Celestia's disguise, is that she's aware of auras. Most things, like changelings, that use magical disguises can't see them, and so don't disguise them as well, so to somebody like Far who sees them, they're obvious. But Celestia was absolutely paranoid about being found out visiting Ember, so she made certain every detail was covered, including her aura.
7992075 That definitely makes sense that she would. Again, Celestia could teach the changelings a thing or two about going deep undercover. They may be sneaky, but her disguise is airtight.
Blue, you say?
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My knee-jerk reaction would be to agree that Far should be at least somewhat reluctant for Ember to become a courtesan. But the longer I dwell on it, the more I keep wondering if it's just my own morality that I grew up in that's making me biased towards demonizing a legitimate occupation-- I don't believe there's any reason to demonize prostitution itself when it's mostly greed and a lack of rule-enforcement that twists the occupation into immoral and harmful things. If society treats it as no different than a psychologist or mage-for-hire, I believe Far would not mind and knows the boundaries between work-time and personal-time.
That aside, I think it was Ember herself that said she literally wears him out and still has "needs" (apparently you can have too much of a good thing, eh Far?). Maybe Far turned out to be a "swinger" or one of his kinks is watching his special some'ling is getting it on with another pony? (What's that one called?)
7997189 "Cuckold" is the usual name of that fetish. Though there's also "Hotwife" which is related but slightly different. (Cuckolding tends to be the male partner getting off on the humiliation of seeing a "better" man with his woman, while Hotwifing tends to be the male partner getting off on the idea that his partner is so amazingly hot all the men want her. Haven't seen the gender-flipped equivalent, though I suspect it exists, it's just not as a named porn genre.)
Parts two and three will get more into how things actually end up working for Far and Ember.
I'm loving this beginnings arc!
Sweet, with a side of spice. Just the way I like it that is to say, my chicken of course. The chapter? It was alright; very sweet, albeit a bit fast on the sugar. How bout a dab of tang next chapter?
Hey, SPark, reading your story gave me some ideas. I saw fit to credit you in the A/N for chapter 2. I hope you don't mind.
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/368221/lovesucker
8053298 Ooo, nifty! *Adds to read later list*
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Thank you!
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Y'know, you should submit this to the Reviewers Cafe group. This is quite exceptional.
8053584 Eh, there are lots of other stories that could use the exposure more.
Oh no, I just realized something terrible. I'm going to keep reading on but I have a bad feeling.
<3
I remember sending you a suggestion once, and you commenting back that people like me kept sending you non-sexual situations for the story, which was weird because you were trying to write a clopfic. So, yes, I think a lot of us will continue to greatly enjoy Ember's adventures, even if there are non-cloppy parts. We're loving the stories, SPark!
8104566 He he he. Well, I'm pretty sure some of the readers are mostly here for the clop. But I'm glad people are enjoying the story as well!
So, are you implying that the hivemind is love-based? IIRC, Pinkie only linked with Sweetcake once she fell in love with him. With Far and Ember also becoming linked...
Or at least ponies that love their changlings will be linked? Seems odd, but hey magic telepathy don't conform to no rules! (Grew up on Anne McCaffery's Talents series.)
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Thanks! Fixed.
No need to say anything complicated:
I love this story in general, and this chapter in particular.
Thank you for creating and sharing it
Light and laughter,
SongCoyote
BABY DON'T HURT ME,
DON'T HURT ME,
NO MORE.
:)
The way you handle the hive mind concept is good, and the emergence of a new bond is brilliantly written. Haven't seen it done this way before. Good stuff, good stuff. I also already love these two.
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Thank you very much!
D'aawwwww!
But then, it's hard to resist inverse-Stockholm syndrome.... 😏