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5136871 Thanks!
Aww, this was somewhat adorable. Glad to see that Celestia has broken her trope here, at least in part.
Although I gotta admit, I thought you were gonna do some Oviposition there.
5136944 It's mostly written between the lines here rather than stated outright, but Ember isn't fertile, she has no eggs to lay.
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Oh, ok. I gotcha.
Oviposition is slightly my fetish, though. Hue hue hue.
Oh, SPark, never, ever change...
Perhaps it's presumptuous of me, but the way you write Celestia is perfectly in sync with the canon Celestial. You capture her perfectly along with reasonable fears and wants. It's a beautiful thing.
5137034 I'm afraid I screwed up your gratitude and emailed it back to you. Because you've nothing to be grateful for. It is I who is grateful that there are actually some writers who are willing to make something respectable out of clopfics, something that until tonight I didn't think was possible.
So thank you for proving me wrong. Keep up the good work. Keep up the flow you've got going!
Yaay, thought there was ony going to be a finite improbability of Celestia turning up again, but Darjeeling brought along a nice strong hot cup of tea and showed Ember has a heart of gold.
Its a good thing the feelings didnt bounce around and escape, just imagine the rumors going round when Far and the two customers lost it right there just by being Near Ember working her magic, quite literally?
Is Ember ruined now for anyone else? After all, Celestia can easily pay for her entire monetary costs, well, she could, but the complexities of moving that cash around without the nobles finding out.. sigh.
Might wanna fix this one.
5137116 If Ember was doing this just for the money, she'd be charging a lot more. Even if Celestia did decide to pay all her costs, she has many reasons to continue.
5137136 I'm not sure what you think needs fixing there?
Edit: nevermind, found it!
A happy sunset for a certain someone
A nice, solid addition to this little tale. I look forward to seeing what happens next. The only way to go from here is up, SPARK. Only up.
This is my favorite "clopfic" ever!
5137182 Indeed!
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5137411 Thank you!
5137427 After all the crap that fans paint Celestia, she deserves this happiness
5137427 I`ve made my feelings ob your stories clear before. I fell in love withs your style with Sweet Cakes tale and I am very much ebthralled by Ember`s. I like your `lings.
........this chapter was......an experience. No other way to put it. Not bad in the least, but....it was an experience.
Wow. Let me check the List of Awesome Things in Fanfiction:
Awesome backstory
erotic scene
magic
unexpected twist
ponies.
Well, you just made my day.
5137697 Ha ha ha! Well, I'm glad it wasn't a bad experience, at least!
5137954 Thank you!
will it be too much to ask for a 3rd sun chapter?
5138084 Not sure what else I'd put in it, I've said what I wanted to say with what's here already.
5138093 it's too good to let go now...
part 1 - fear of exposure
part 2 - acceptance
part 3 - going willingly, mortal again, with needs
5138117 Eh, I don't really feel like there's any more story to tell there. Her turning up again willingly, having admitted to her needs, would take all of 200 words or so to write, that gets into territory where it's no longer a story that also has smut, it's a non-story that's an excuse for smut.
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5138221 You can feel free to write it yourself if you like.
Normally, I am rather vehementaly against Celestia with Anyone but Twilight. (Unless its Luna [woo princest]) this, though, I mean... Damn. Ember is my favourite! It is very much in line with Pearl's chapter. Another showcase of Ember just wanting to help. Love it.
5138242 i want to start writing but the skill alludes me. i can edit other people storys, add my own input into them... but writing on my own
Another excellent chapter, SPark
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Celestia: "Eeeek! What are all these people doing there? Were they watching?! "
This is fantastic stuff SPark! I'm eagerly awaiting more of Ember's stories, but also wondering if we'll get a chance to learn more about her. You did hint at something interesting when she mentioned the idea of subsisting off love alone a couple chapters back.
More Ember please!
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5138467 Thanks!
On the subject of more about Ember's past, there is definitely some in a couple of the upcoming stories I'm working on. I have two non-Ember stories to release first, though.
Haha for moment i though celestia gonna panic about oviposition or something xd
5138526 Aww, I really appreciate that you liked it so much! It's great to hear that I've reached my goal with having this be a story that happens to have clop in it and not a clop story.
5138587 :( ahh well, love the story BTW!
This is a lovely fic, keep it up!
Shall we be seeing other notable ponies coming to Ember's in the future? Or will you be returning to your previous use of OCs?
5138902 Depends, really. Everything I'm actively working on right now is OC's, but if I get a good idea that uses a canon pony, I won't hesitate to put them in.
As a natural submissive, those are my favourite words. By far trumping "I love you" as a demonstration of the love rather than a telling that is too often told as a lie. I love seeing these words take on that meaning in fiction. This tiny part right here, the way Ember said those words and the way Celestia reacted to them, that was my favourite part of this story so far, and I thank you for it
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No possibility of using substitutes? I could think of lacquered wooden balls.
Latex balls for something squishier. Wee!
That was beautiful
5140137 Well, I don't write these stories just for the fetishes. I suppose if I came up with an idea for a customer where that was something they wanted, Ember could probably figure something out. There's nothing of that sort in my current story plans, though.
Feel free to write your own if you like, I don't mind if other people borrow Ember, just so long as they toss me a link when it's done, because I'd want to read it.
5140260 Thanks!
5139286 I love it when people notice and appreciate the little details like that.
im hoping to see a non pony sometime, maybe a certain griffon?
5140814 Well, once again there's nothing in the current story plans that involves any non-ponies. I won't say it'll never happen, but I can't promise it will either.
Just throwing a random plot idea out there: maybe an errant changeling comes across Ember's and falls completely for her? It'd be an interesting plot device to play around with.
5142489 Heh. Well, two problems with that. One, in this setting random changelings are no more sexually active than worker bees or ants. Only queens have a sex drive. And two, that doesn't really fit in my stated goal of dealing with the sexual problems and issues that my real world readers might identify with. (See story description.) So it's not really something I'm interested in doing.
5142501 It doesn't have to be a sexual thing, bear in mind: considering how utterly distraught changelings are with no hivemind, maybe it'd simply latch on to Ember as a surrogate queen. Also taking into account that Ember doesn't actually want a hive, it'd make things somewhat awkward for her from that point onward. And maybe you could worm in a moral about trust and devotion, who knows.
5142513 I'm sure it'd be a fine story, but it would not be the kind of story I am interested in telling here.
Feel free to use the idea yourself, if you like.