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Have a few typos. At least there're no public mounds this time. :P
I presume this is a typo. Might be wrong, but it seems off.
I guess that Far could not resist the urge after all. :3
Such horn. Much pleasure.
What's a man? I am perhaps going too much into world details here, but the MLP-verse did establish an equivalent of that as gentlecolt, and some fics also used gentlestallion, so... ^^
Also, yay slightly more backstory. Yay more sexy times. Yay has been doubled.
8133999 The first one isn't a mistake, just a slightly archaic turn of phrase. It's the kind of thing somebody old fashioned, or somebody kind of pretentious would say. I kind of picture Fleur and Fancy as being a bit of both.
The others do definitely need fixing, so thank you!
Ah yes! One of my favorite stories has updated. I quite enjoy this story, the fact it's not all sex, and when it does happen, there is a meaning/purpose behind it and drives the story forward. I quite like that that.
Question, are you taking any requests for OC's to appear?
8134781 Sorta? I already have a stack of ideas both of my own and from other people that'll last for ages, so there's no guarantee I'd use any more, but I don't mind adding to the list, just I make no promises about what actually ends up written and when.
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If you happen to make another April Fools and still got a huge backlog of characters to use, you can simply put out a chapter which would consists of very short introduction scenes with all the OCs one after another, each ending in "and then they fucked". And perhaps some "and then they didn't fuck" for variation, and to keep consistent with chapters so far.
Gotta say, I haven't seen that headcanon for Fleur before. Explains why she's so tall, I suppose?
It's good to see Ember maturing.
So when Fancy came in earlier in the story, he was already familiar with her? Is he a frequent customer?
This was incredibly hot, and fun, and anal.
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I've read it once before. I really like this interpretation.
Yay! More Ember!
They're in Far's house, right? So surely it's Far who isn't wealthy, rather than Fancy?
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8135031 Yeah, I stole it shamelessly. That's one of my favorite clop pieces.
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Thanks for idea
I wanted to say that I never seen idea of Fleur as transgender...tough I guess I can imagine it, as well as imagine that Fancy would be one to understand ( interesting how deep we made some characters that just had a few flash scenes in the entire show.
Please, more, I beg you.
8136488 Fleur and Fancy are some of my favorite background ponies.
8141527 There will definitely be more! I release a new chapter about every month.
Rare.
Rare is it that I read clop in the first place. It's a shame of mine, as I'd like to think of myself as above the sexual side of a fandom built around a show intended for children. But sometimes, I indulge because despite what it says of me, I already know that deep down, I am depraved.
Rarer still do I find clop that's rich in storytelling. More often than not, the plot is poor and the entertainment and lust come from fondling the idea of either unnaturally perfect, incredibly fetishistic, or outrageously impossible sex. But every once in a while, there'll be something deliciously character-driven, sexually realistic, and still incredibly hot. These are the most satisfying, as they appeal to my dark side and my intellectual side.
But never have I read clop twice. Once has always been enough, as I can relive the fantasy and/or the story in my mind. Nowadays, I hardly ever read books twice, let alone erotica of any sort. And yet after reading the latest chapter of a tale I absolutely adore, I found myself going back to previous chapters to read them again. I wanted to relive the powerful moments I remember there being between Ember and her clients. And I found myself delighted all over again.
SPark, you've created the only clop that I legitimately enjoy so much I'd actually be willing to share it with my pony friends and even certain non-pony ones. I would hands-down vote Ember's as the best clop on the site, and it's the only clopfic that's made it to my 'Favorites' list (one of 9 fics out of the 500+ I've had the pleasure of perusing). I rank this up there with FO:E in terms of how well fleshed-out the characters are and how invested I am in their fates while reading. You have my respect and love for this amazing work. If you'd like any sort of help in this or other endeavours, do let me know, as I'd be overjoyed to lend a hand.
Keep up the top-notch storytelling!
8143823 Thank you, that's very high praise!
8146875 Thank you!
I believe that instance of "Fancy" should be Far, if I'm not mistaken about whose bedroom they're in?
8148862 Ah, you're correct. Thanks!
I like Ember and Far, I re-read some chapters and memorize the moments, this is one beautiful fic, thank you.
8158103 You're welcome!
I can't get enough of this story. One of the more "beautiful" story's I've read. <3
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8167320 Thank you!
I was re-reading this and the Honey Pie series and a question popped to mind. Why did Ember develop such an overwhelming sex drive by becoming a queen when Honey Pie didn't?
The only thing that occurs to me is that Honey Pie co-opted an existing hive that already has several thousand changelings while Ember is alone. Some combination of hive-mind link and pheromones that when the number of changelings around a queen drop below a certain number their reproductive drives kick into turbo?
8168954 You pretty much nailed it, yes. Ember's instincts are telling her she should be popping out babies by the dozen to populate her hive.
See? Having a small penis does help anal seem less intimidating. Then again, this is Ember transformed into Celestia, who is far bigger, so a I guess anypony's dick would be small. If I recall, there was a fic that had an appropriate analogy. It's like, even if it's a big cucumber, it's still like throwing a cucumber into a canyon lel.
Definitely loved the dp, especially the butt sex. Eheh definitely can relate to the whole bit about letting someone come in there, despite not coming yourself. I dunno. There's something sensual about it. How damn blissful and happy they are after doing so that's so satisfying. Also that wonderful achy feel. It feels so nice :3
I kinda had the feeling Fleur was transgender in the previous chapter she was mentioned. Ember did mention something about her transformation not being entirely perfect.
I'm wondering how long exactly has Ember been doing her brothel job?
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GAH! What are you doing here?! Uhhhhhh... you don't see me here at all (plz don't tell Bad Horse D:). Wait. What are you doing here? Hmmm...
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ALL HAIL SKYWRITER, EUTHANIZER OF MALFUNCTIONING PAPER TOWEL DISPENSERS!
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This is also a wonderful piece of show rather than tell X3
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I figure she's been at it for quite a few years, for most of this story. It's not strictly linear, obviously, but I picture most of the story happening a decade or so after the In the Beginning story arc.
8182769 Thanks! I appreciate all your comments, btw.
SPark I love your work! You're awesome! I wish I was as awesome as you! You inspire me to work harder at what I do and I don't even write!
8182947 Aww, thank you!
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I'm here because I'm enjoying the story.
Oi, I had almost forgotten that paper towel thing.
Fleur <3
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Yus.
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Well, I've had zero would-be partners push sexually at me. I'm not especially social, but I think the people here tip-toe around the subject, more worried about being ostracized as a sex fiend, or a creep, or getting their face punched in by a zealous boyfriend. You can't even find people talking about sex at all, pretty much.
Sex is one of those things you get sensitized to the less of it you get. The harder you push to suppress it in people, the harder it pushes back. So I'd expect people "waiting for marriage" would get totally obsessed with it.
I'm not ignorant about this stuff, but yes I may have misunderstood what you're trying to say.
I suppose that's a good message. It's definitely much more likely someone'll be happier waiting than getting pushed into it, though exceptions do exist. Some people are shy and scared, and remain in denial even after they're suffering from deprivation. Getting dragged to a brothel is probably too much, but some of us are Fluttershys, who'd be lost without an Angel Bunny to kick us in the direction we want to go sometimes.
I dunno, people are complicated. I can think up ponies in very similar situations to that dutiful Rarity loving student, who'd be in trouble if they waited.
Now that was quite the origin tale... with my favourite unicorn couple to boot ;)
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Ah, technically no, but, kinda?