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Yay! New chapter of Embers!
Sizeplay's not really my thing, but it was a good chapter.
One interesting aspect of the escort industry from interviews and reddit AMA sessions: not only are most regular customers happy to pay the higher rate, their satisfaction often goes up! A corollary to the “You don’t value what you don’t pay for” rule.
In fact, one escort asked a former client why he had dropped her. It was because her prices were too low!
I half expected Far Gaze to bring up this pay proportional to satisfaction argument.
Wait, Pearl, who's that?
Immediately brought Celestia's alter ego into mind, but then you mentioned money issues...
Unless Equestria is hemorrhaging money like the USA?
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Pearl is from the Pearl of Desire chapter.
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I was gonna say.
I hope she hasn't fallen in worth another ungrateful lout of a stallion. :(
Interesting little chapter. Ember's boredom actually reminded me a bit of Sherlock Holmes. He once commented that cases could be important, but entirely uninteresting. And a good callback to Pearl too; the idea that Ember, sadly, can't help everyone with all their problems. Maybe she'll come back in the future?
As for this chapter's client, I thought it was very well done. It actually touched on a kink of mine quite well. The gentler side of the fetish is often ignored or neglected by most writers. And, as ever, Ember gave some pretty good advice to Slugger, even if it doesn't as you say, translate into the real world too well.
So what exactly is Ember the changeling? The picture and the concept implies a queen (or at least something else stronger/smarter/physically larger than the average specimen). But on the other hand, Canterlot invasion was lead by Chrysalis with a swarm of low-tier(or seeming to be such) soldiers.
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Read the story.
How did Slugger not know Ember was a changeling? She always greets customers in her changeling form, doesn't she, and she shape-shifted to grow bigger.
Typo: "a personal problem should could help him with" - *she
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Slugger did know. I'm not sure why you think he didn't?
The post-sex conversation just read kind of like it didn't really occur to him but re-reading it he does acknowledge her species at the start, he just kind of talked about it like it hadn't factored into his mental processes. Never mind.
Though one line did raise a question;
The guy does know what a changeling is, right? Like I said, he saw her shapeshift . . . .
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He's not stupid. He just doesn't specifically have a changeling fetish. He came to Ember for other reasons.
It sounded like he didn't realize how it was that Ember looked like a pony and not a changeling.
This is far better than it has any right to be.
What if Ember would meet a pony who has some serious mommy issues (or just a fetish) and it leads to nursing and other stuff (no diapers though).
Such a nice story.
I do have a suggestion for a story involving Pearl. It could be the reason Pearl was so upset the day Ember saw her is because her ex-husband and his new child-bride are expecting a foal. Pearl feels miserable because she was robbed of one of life's treasures. Maybe there is a way Ember can comfort and help her.
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Continued support post!
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maybe in a non sexual way , isn't ember sterile ? she probably has useful instrospection
Sometimes outside perspective is what's needed to kickstart new thoughts.
Adjusting prices is a good idea. For those who can't pay in bits pay in other ways.