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Oh, my. That was a good take on fetish/fantasy guilt. I can trip down memory lane to the early 2000s and how often such things were seen in corners of the net, people ashamed of perfectly normal desires that done responsibly hurt nobody.
And this was a lovely take on that issue.
4452782 Thank you. I'm glad people can relate.
Hmm... This makes it sound like she did something to actual alter herself to fit this lifestyle. I'm intrigued...
4452991 Hee. I'm glad somebody noticed that part. Ember herself has a backstory that I'm putting little bits of into some of the chapters.
I can't really explain it. If I could, I would. But, something in this chapter's first couple hundred words, something Ember said, I don't know what, just gave me this vibe... that she has a secret. That there's something that she would go to her own business to discuss and solve, were it possible. I don't know if that was planned or not, but if you could gradually expand on such a plotline throughout this story over quite a few chapters... that would be very interesting.
4453083 You are not entirely wrong.
4453092 Actually it's quite possible to read that without clicking anything. And thanks!
4453142 Sorry it took me so long to reply, but, I'm half-wrong, then?
4453477 He he he. Well, if I explained it all, I'd be spoilering it.
4453502 God damn it. You know, there are a lot of problems with Fimfiction's chapter-by-chapter format from a literary perspective, and this wait is just one of them.
4453507 Well, if you'd really like to know, you can drop me a PM. It's going to be a low, slow reveal, since the point of the story isn't about Ember, that's just some side-stuff I'm putting in because I can't help that sort of storytelling, even when I'm doing something that's not really meant to be any kind of epic.
Aww. That's cute. She didn't let him cheat, made him confident and saved marriage. What a nice girl.
If you take suggestions, I'd like to see Ember deal with pony who attracted to fillies\colts. Not like 'pedo-creep-rapist', just he has this preference, even if it's not acceptable in society, does not actually do anything with little ones but... there's still part of him that wants to fulfill his desires at least once.There is many ways to write this, but I'm sure you'll manage to do so without judging.
On the side note, I'll totally fuck Ember in her original form - not a fan of ovipositor, but overall, love changeling babes :3
4453806 Somebody else has already suggested that one too, so it's definitely on the list. :3
4453665 Nah, I can wait. I was just annoyedly pointing out that books are released the way they are (a bunch of chapters) as opposed to Fimfiction's way (one chapter at a time) for a reason, and being generally impatient. But, I'd rather not have the reveal ruined for me.
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Oh! I'm waiting then. You definetely has what it needs to write good and interecting chapter about this kind of pony. You are very... balanced and level headed writer... don't know how to say it, but your story so far is full of harmony. Nothing too much, nothing too little.
4453851 Aww, thank you! It will probably be a bit before I get that chapter done (I'm super busy with non-writing stuff right now!) but I hope it will be good once I do get to it.
I want to read about the poor boy with Luna fantasy from first chapter. What will happen with him and his fear of his fantasy?
4453982 He will probably be making a second appearance in a later chapter. I haven't gotten to writing that one quite yet, though.
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Thanks! I will eagerly wait!
I like how you're approaching this story, from a perspective of how it might apply to your readers rather than simply being clop. Very well done. I'm really enjoying your writing.
4453058 I took this to mean that her alternatives were getting what she needed in the much more typically aggressive and damaging, canonic way of a changeling. For a changeling to make a conscious decision to fulfill their needs by using their powers to help ponies, instead, is really intriguing, but it's cool to hear that there is something more to it than that. Building on Ember's past and character little by little will make this collection that much more interesting...
I thought of one idea that you could approach: There would be plenty of survivors from the changeling invasion who had lost a significant other to it, one of them having been a changeling who replaced their loved one. I can see where one might want the ongoing pain of that love removed, drained away, and misinterpret exactly what Ember could do for him. Probably a bit more emotionally intense than you're after, but it's an idea...
One more thing:
Hmmmmm!
4454420 I'm sure it would make a terrific story, to talk about ponies who lived through the invasion, but it doesn't really fit with the theme and purpose of these stories. (It's not really the intensity, but the fact that such a situation isn't something that readers will personally identify with. As you noted, these stories are about connecting with people, and nobody reading this has been through a changeling invasion!) Perhaps if I ever want to do an extended non-clop story about Ember herself I might pick the idea up, but probably not. I do really love getting comments like this, though! It's great that people are putting this much thought into this little tale.
4454491 Sorry about that! I was apparently looking at the trees and not seeing the forest when I made the suggestion. I blame having the flu all weekend - it's made my head too cloudy to think properly.
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I'm a fan of this idea, and I'm not sure if you have your own plan for how to proceed with it, but I thought of a good idea for it if you're interested.
You could have a pony that wants to teach young ponies about their sexuality, how to be accepting of it and even to enjoy and revel in its expression. This could easily come as a response to that pony's own experience growing up either having someone to teach them in this same fashion or as a form of rebellion against parental figures that tried to shame the pony for their sexuality as a foal.
4454683 Interesting idea! I'm not sure how I'd fit that into the framework of Ember and her brothel, though. I do have some ideas about embracing sex and sexuality, the next chapter I'm posting touches on that a bit.
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As far as frameworks are concerned, you're dealing with an area that society refuses to even acknowledge. A pony that wanted to teach fillies and colts about their sexuality would be seen as a deviant regardless of motives because society sees such actions as a breach of the protective instinct towards children, preferring to leave their sexuality either unacknowledged until adulthood or worse yet shame them for it. A pony with this desire would likely feel similar to the stallion in this chapter except in fear of society at large instead of just his wife. A perfect 'actress' like Ember would likely be the only way for a pony to safely express their desire without fear of a societal reprimand.
4454715 Ah. I think I misunderstood what you were trying to get across, then. I am afraid I cannot tackle that story. I myself don't know where I'd stand on a person whose goal in life was to teach children about sex. There are reasons, and they're good ones, to be protective towards children when it comes to sexual experiences. "Sex ed" in the sense of knowing the facts of how it works is intensely valuable even at a fairly young age, but gaining actual experience with sex before puberty is something that makes me somewhat uncomfortable personally. I don't know that I could agree to a "moral" that it's good and desirable for children to become sexually experienced. I don't think it really is. I do think that our society leans too far the other way, and tries to shelter children from the simply facts of biology, and the shame that some children are taught young is bad, yes. But being willing to be frank and open about what sex is with children is one thing, teaching them to " enjoy and revel in its expression" is something else entirely.
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Understandable, it's a topic that seems rather on the fringe, it just seemed like something neat to see dealt with in this setting. I myself was taught to be ashamed of my own sexuality as a child, and I've always felt that a disservice was done to me because of it that I didn't get over until my time in college, so the idea struck a chord with me and my mind went into ideas of how it might be dealt with in your 'Ember' setting.
4454749 Well, I think few of us get out of childhood without some kind of screwed up attitude about something.
Can I just say that this is pretty ffff-'d up? If she's unwilling or unable to fulfill every one of her husband's sexual desires she just doesn't love him enough and is worthless as a mate? If Pepper repeated that to his wife's face it would amount to an attempt to emotionally blackmail her into sex that she (hypothetically) may not be comfortable with.
4454764 That depends what you mean by 'screwed up'. Sexual development does not really have a norm after all, there are so many ways at so many times it can go 'wrong'. But what we regard as 'right' is merely the most common development pattern.
4454940 Wow, you read that in a way I SO did not mean it! The way to make him happy won't necessarily be her performing the acts he wants. It may be letting him go to Ember's, or finding something else that she's comfortable with that satisfies him. There are lots of ways for a couple to work out this kind of thing, it's not necessary for one partner or the other to give in to all the other's demands, but it IS true, if they really love each other, they will both find *some* way to make each other happy, whatever that way may be.
4455163 I didn't say anything about sex there. But if you managed to grow up never believing anything wrong, unhealthy, stupid, etc. you are a miracle, and I hope you appreciate it.
4456148 Afraid not. I'm the exact opposite, a Victorian out of time in regards to such matters.
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It jumped out at me because I immediately associate the phrasing "if you really love(d) me" with abusive relationships.
How about she helps somepony with incest related problems, like forbidden brother X sister or sister X sister relationship?
and +1 for her help in her natural form as others suggested :)
4459880 Incest is another one that I'm not sure I'd be comfortable touching. I don't feel that I can possibly write a story with a moral that incest is okay, but writing a story with a moral that incest is wrong wouldn't really go anywhere or help anyone. That's already the commonly held belief and doesn't need correcting.
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boo
ok, how about "Anthropophagolagnia - Sadistic paraphilia that involves raping and then cannibalizing another person." just kidding
That's as I think not a bad one: "Sexual narcissism", something about somepony who wants to be with (her\him)self.
Interesting. Good to see it didn't go wrong for pepper. Although if it did go the other way, he had someone that he could go to. Can't wait to see more.
This was a good chapter, well written and Ember was being very helpful. SHe seemed like a real character who loves what she does, not just some image of a character.
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4460220 Thank you.
4460181 I have a couple of ideas about narcissism that I might get to eventually. I have more ideas than I have time to write, right now!
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No, but there is something about living through having a partner who uses you and isn't who you thought that can be taken as an analogy. The shame of being tricked, the desire for someone who isn't real, the desire for some sort of revenge, even if it's holding the piece of shit down and screwing them hard some way you knew they wouldn't like...?
It could work maybe.
Of course, it could be interesting to see if she has any obsessi es who come for fixes.
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I took it the way it was intended myself. "If you really loved me" is a phrase that should never be used except in dire circumstances. However, someone who truly loves you wants to see you happy. They might be freaked out at first, but a kink won't change that.
This is why open relationships exist for many people. "I am not interested in that. Try it with me and I'll beat you to death with your own dick. But I think we can talk to somebody about ways we can both be happy."
Maybe it's online RP. Maybe it's a professional. Maybe it's a fuck buddy. Maybe it's meeting them half way for their fantasy - they want a gang bang with bukakke? Blindfolds and a bottle of warm mayo work wonders!
4453829 I was thinking, and maybe you could do something with the loss of intimacy after a breakup? Not the sex itself, but more the small stuff, a hug here and there, simply touching each other without ulterior motives, that sort of thing. If somepony has been in a relationship for some time and they break up (regardless of reason), it can be quite hard to just deal with that. Especially if ponies are creatures of habit as much as humans are. I can see somepony getting lust and intimacy mixed up and looking for a professional to "help", only to end up at Ember's because the sex in and of itself isn't what he or she is looking for.
Sorry if I'm just rambling on here, but as I said, I was thinking and this is actually one of the weirdest things for me ever since my breakup. The only difference is that I make up for the loss of intimacy by cuddling our cats more instead of going to a professional.
4460761 Funny seeing you here.
The alternative being... starting a hive? Actually getting preggers and pumping out a bunch of bugs?
Hehe.
The Doctor is [IN].
The teasing between Far Gaze and Ember is magnificent.
The Doctor is [OCCUPIED]
Welp. Looks like she got paid the other way as well, then
Ah, smut with affection, charm and wit. How I missed you. This chapter earned you the like and fave; that was excellent advice.
I'd like to see someone dealing with body dysphoria - a transgender or intersex person who would love to love their understanding lover, but is too emotionally screwed up over having screamingly wrong parts to do it with.
4984239 That is absolutely on my list of things I want to address. I have a couple of ideas roughed out, but I have so many ideas, and so little writing time these days!
This chapter was really telling.
*clicks favorite button*