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So approximately how 'old' is this 'old nag', or would that be telling?
4503506 Oh, I hadn't settled on a number, but she'd be pretty solidly middle aged. Older than I am, at least. (I'm in my 30s)
4503545 MILF territory and no mistake, then!
Yeah, that's kind of what I was guessing, to be honest. From what I hear, it's a rather difficult age to be at in terms of body confidence and feeling 'worthwhile'.
Hell, people talk about being 21 again, but I am 21 and I feel really old with that! It's funny how these things work.
Oh, you sexy middle aged vixen. Like fine wine, better when older.
This was really sweet. The sex was passionate without being over the top, and the thoughts running through Pearl's mind were really interesting. Drive home the good that Ember is doing.
For real, this is one of my favorite stories with clop content. Great job, brother! And yeah, this fandom makes me feel old...
4503748 Aww, thanks!
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Dude, I'm 29. Every time I go to a convention and see all the teen and early-twenty people, I feel this uncontrollable urge to shake my fist and scream, "Get off my lawn!!"
I really liked this chapter. Appealing to the 'mature' crowd, eh SPark?
LIES!
Nit-picking, even though you don't care:
I'm wondering if that should be "Canterlot high society"? As it stands, it reads to me as if she's planning to remove herself from Canterlot entirely.
*shrugs* Up to you, of course.
Oh my! [/George_Takei]
4503759 Spring chicken...
4503666 Still in the egg...
Staying young by acting childish,
The Ponytrician.
A good chapter indeed. The moral was nice, and the clop entertaining. Although, seeing the conversation Jet and Jake have been having about ages is making me feel awkward as hell.
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How so?
4504009 Err... I'm 14.
4503545 Chat was dead, so I came here to see my updates and here was yours! I actually like this one, found it a bit humorous in Pearl's behavior but, that's just me in the end.
4504012 Shakes a cane at you.
4504218 I did try to put a few small touches of humor into this. It's mostly a serious story, but that doesn't mean it can't also be occasionally a bit amusing!
4503759 Lol, kids be like "lighten up, gramps!"
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4504012 Awwww, babu!
That was a good chapter. I read it before it was released but I had to read it again.
4505148 ...Babu? What needest I do to prove I am above such a name?
4504447 Agreed!
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Dear sweet Celestia, I own boots that are older than you.
4505505 Give it a few years? :shrug: :thatfacewhenthereisnoshrug:
4505505 I'd say fail to die for another decade or so.
Kids, lawns, etc. Not that I'm old. I have it on good authority that 37's not old.
I quite liked this chapter, too. It was very sweet.
4503921 We are (not quite) legion, here, but there are far more of us here than most people probably realize...
Two things: One, I really liked this chapter. It's always nice to see Ember's moral side and that she is a caring individual. Also, the way she talked and her interactions with Pearl were really beautiful and felt like something you would say to a lover. Second, when you called yourself a foagie all I can hear in my head is "The problem with jeggings"
That was absolutely beautiful. This story is quickly climbing the ranks of my favourites. And I mean that overall, not just ponies. Wow.
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4530703 Thank you very much.
Will Ember's next "encounter" be mare-mare or -
*just realized default-Ember had sex with male receptionist*
... now awaiting the former and default-Ember with female.
Every chapter gets a gold star. But this one gets platinum star for making Pearl feel loved.
4532426 Thank you! My next chapter will feature a stallion, but is a slightly different chapter, as it is non-clop.
The one after that isn't written yet. I have more stallion ideas down right now than mare, so odds are it will be a stallion, but it kind of depends on which of the several partially-written bits I finish up next.
Oh... my.
Hee. Called it. She's doing this to push back her instincts to build a hive of her own
Oh dear. A "lie back and think of England" type. How sad!
Heh. She's breaking out of her upper class conditioning quite nicely.
Oh, wow. The fact Ember referred to a changeling queen made me totally miss the link with Honey Pie. I kinda think of him as a Changeling King, or something, I guess
(also, am terribad at names, and it's been a while since Honey Pie, so I totally forgot he was called that )
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It's always nice when people pick up on the little extra storytelling bits in these!
I don't see Pearl as having been very invested in her upper class identity in the first place, she married into it, and was never comfortable with it, I figure, so this is pretty much a welcome excuse to do what she's really wanted to do for ages.
Well, they're only in the same setting because I am too lazy to invent a new changeling system for them. That and flinging obscure hints about the final resolution of Honey Pie into these (and into Ember's blog) amuses me more than it should.
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Oh, I adore these extra storytelling bits! They tie the whole thing together as one story!
Awwe. This is really sweet. *wipes away tears*
Lovely chapter.
5108198 Thank you! This is still probably my favorite chapter. Though maybe when the two-parter I'm doing now is done, that'll be my new favorite, I like that one too.
"I'm sorry," said said.
From chapter 4
Is there a chapter where the ovipositor is used?
5138584 Sort of. Ember is not fertile, so she has no eggs to lay, though.
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Ember is not fertile? So even if she mates with a Changeling male, she has zero chances of getting pregnant? Oh poo :-(
Besides, why do you say that "Sweetcake is properly addressed as "him", not "her""
Isn't Sweetcake a queen, so a female? And since Ember knows Sweetcake authorizes her to stay close to the Sweetcake Hive, she met Sweetcake at some point, didn't she? Or was it just a messenger she met?
Dang it, I keep forgetting the site doesn't notify people if you don't comment on the chapter they were reading at the time. I answered this on the last chapter, accidentally.
I really love this chapter. It's so much more than just a simple clop story...you are a fantastic writer.
5292960 Aww, thank you!
the more horn jobs the better i say....
also are you suggesting there's some kind of more background about this whole changeling arrangement for the canon of this fic that we don't know about?.....
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I'm not quite sure what you're asking here. Have you read my story Honey Pie? This is set in the same universe. And yes, of course there's background that people don't know about, it's a poor writer who hasn't thought about where their characters come from and why they're in the situations they're in currently.
" testing the temperature of the bath and pouring in things from various jars and [battles] from a rack on one wall."
typo : I think you meant 'bottles'. Certainly no meaningful analogy was found for 'battles' in this context. :)
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If you didn't have a toy battleship in your bath then I'm sorry. :(
Thank fucking god you left the hornjob in, it was amazing!
Horn jobs are hot...
I find hornjobs to be incredibly beautiful and sexy.
Also this is one of my favorite fanfictions of all time now. Thanks for being a great writer. :D
6397020 You're welcome! Glad you enjoyed it.
well
so far this is very different from whatever I've read before. And believe me I've read a lot, and not just clop.
You are eiter very good writer, or you have personal experience with people's insecurities (NOT meant as offense) or you are very emphatic person.
I got to this trough WatchPony video about exceptional "clopfic" and decided to give those mentioned a shot. And I was surprised quite a lot so far. It was not completely accurate - there was much more in those stories than sex, and as such heir value was much bigger.
To me, as unbiased person with big interest in sexuality, minorities, genderism and gender identity it is very interesting reading that goes much deeper then just normal porn or normal romance
I guess I'll get trough this and then give your gallery a decent look, because I'm not reading just porn for the sake of porn - I truly appreciate interesting ideas, characters and stories (which is a reason why I basicly gave up on furries more or less, because it is way too much obsessed with sex alone - and not something nice but simple, boring unimaginitive rutting, and that was simply not enough for me)
keep up with good work
You know, when I need reminder of what and who I want to be, I come back to this chapter. Not for the clop, mind you, just the way Ember shows Pearl that she is still beautiful and has a life ahead of her. Always cheers me up.