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Aww, Ember is sweet. If a bit creepy on being Rarity
4533024 I don't really think of this story as clop, you put alittle to much work into the lead up for it to just be clop. Adult yes, clop....meh..I guess I've just got weird definitions in my head.
You FUCKING buzzkill.
I enjoyed reading the chapter, but I would have moreso if I hadn't had an anticipation-boner the whole time.
What if a pony comes in and wants Ember to be that pony's self- or even r63 self?
4539163 Now THAT is an interesting idea! I have no idea where I'd go with it, exactly... but I shall have to file it away in case I find a way to make it work.
How is this story clop? I consider it educational adult erotica that teaches you things you will never learn in school.
Also, I prefer Applejack over Rarity.
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Love it, man. People are so obsessed with sex! Like, the way it was talked about in High school, I thought it'd be some epic night of steamy passion, an hour of frantic lovemaking, and then fireworks, water spouts, then a damn chorus would come out of the closet singing, "HEEEEEEE LOST HIS VIRGINIGTYYYYYYYYY!"
Nicely done, as usual. ANy idea when/if you'll be doing my idea?
4539260 Thanks! I definitely will be doing your idea. It'll be after Bronycon at some point (I just don't have the time to write before then) but exactly when I'm not sure.
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They only trot out the musical number for gay guys.
For straights, Bulk Biceps gives you a "YEAH!"
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Actually, from what I've heard, the reality is five minutes of sex, and then the only sound you hear is: "... that's it?"
This is why I love your work. It's real life ponyfied. This series isn't clop but a mature look into sex as more then just the act but the emotions that make sex meaningful.
I really enjoy this. It's different, but in a really good way. Especially chapters like this and the one with bell pepper. I can sympathize with the characters too. I look forward to reading more.
its reminds me of a friend
200 likes, you more then welcome
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Thank you all very much. It makes me very happy to know that I'm succeeding in connecting with people with these little stories.
I like this chapter the best. Sunburst's dream for he and Rarity accurately depicts my own for a certain someone.
trixie could be the one to do the R63
Pure sex doesn't appeal to me, strange as that is considering what I wrote about the last chapter. I would prefer the same things as Sunburst, honestly. It's interesting... Sunburst and I have a lot in common, I guess.
Sunburst's view of sex seems quite similar to my own. I buy into the whole idea of romance, but sex itself disgusts me. I suppose in that sense I'm a romantic asexual. Perhaps he is too.
I really liked this chapter. Life ain't about the next fuck.
4539139 It literally says "not a clop chapter" at the top. What did you expect?
4540418 Ha ha funny, weird funny, or enjoying the misery of others funny?
Rarity, a Manehatten fashion designer? I didn't know this story took place in the future, then again I suppose there's no reason for you to mention that because this story isn't focused on the mane six.
In any case, this chapter was different because before Ember just seemed to give advice, but here it feels more like a deeper wisdom. Maybe it's just me but she seems smarter than she lets on.
4543206 This is set at least a couple of years in the future, yes. I haven't pinned down exactly how far, since as you say, it's not directly relevant. But Ember needed time among ponies to learn so much about pony relationships, so having this be immediately after the show felt too soon to me.
4541291 Thank you.
4540433 I wasn't writing him specifically to be asexual, more to parallel some of my own feelings and experiences (if I mentioned how old I was when I lost my virginity, it would probably surprise at least a few people!) but I could definitely see him as asexual.
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4539621 I'm glad you could relate to this chapter, that really makes me feel like I'm accomplishing something good here.
I love this story. This chapter was nice and sweet. I'd give you ideas for the rest of the story, but I don't really have any. I'll see if I can come up with anything, though!
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And what about those of us who can't decide between the sexes?
Loved this chapter, and still love this story.
4559329 For the bisexual, pansexual, etc. Bulk Biceps does a musical number, of course.
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Now that would be something worth seeing.
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Exactly.
He has a lovely baritone.
This story was a lot better than I initially expected it to be. Keep up the good work.
4599106 Thank you.
4808050 Don't feel in ANY way obligated to read this if you don't want to. I do feel it's a worthwhile story, else I wouldn't have published it, but it's not a piece of amazing literature that will ruin your life forever if you miss out on it.
If you do want to gently dip your toe in the water, each chapter is a stand-alone story, and "What you've been missing" is actually no worse than PG rated. You can feel free to check that out and decide from there if you want to read any of the other stories here.
This was a beautiful, beautiful, chapter
give us more
Now THIS is a chapter. Clopfics are severely lacking in stuff like this, a real perspective of the characters behind the sexual literature. You sir, or madam, are brilliant. Finally, somebody who understands that characters can have more emotion and development than acting as sexual gratification for low-life genre readers. No offense to anyone here, nor am I saying anyone here is such a thing, so do not take my words the wrong way, please.
The point is, this is one of the more respectable clopfics I have ever seen, and you scored a follow from me if you haven't gotten one from me already.
5137018 Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed this so far. Hopefully you like the rest of it as well.
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He he ... This is, and by far, the most enjoyable clopfic I've ever read. Sexy, yet classy. With feeling, genuine emotions, proper grammar and orthograph, good manners. Not just rutting and rutting.
I assume you are on Deviant Art also. What is you DA username, then? :-)
5212825 Is that addressed to me? I'm bladespark on DA, but I don't post writing there.
Embers* : [Sundrop] followed, his own tail still held low.
! no reference for 'Sundrop' (implicit character/location?)
Embers* : Sunburst let his head fall to... ground down by [month's] of his friends' constant ribbing
! no valid expansion for possessive/contraction
I think you meant Sunburst and months (no apostrophe). P.S. This story will be a real challenge to extract any character plans/goals from, even moreso than 'Sweetie Pie', as there's basically no prior art on propositional causal logic description of sex scenes. :)
Disappointing chapter, but at the same time it's very hard to dislike it.
This is amazing. This whole story, I love it! I know we really aren't supposed to talk out this, but it is somewhat of a clopfic. I came twice, that's unusual for me. And before all you guys get weirded out, I'm a girl. Which makes it even more impressive. Amazing story, it has the perfect balance of sex, realism, and emotions. Love it.
6364387 Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed reading it! Er. And now I'm worried that I sound creepy for being glad about other people getting off. Oh well!
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This conversation!
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In retrospect it wasn't that funny; thankfully sleep deprivation, like alcohol, makes anything amusing...so I guess that makes me an alcoholic.
First I was never here. Second this is by far my favorite chapter, I found I had a lot in common with the Sunburst even though I hate that mechanic with a burning passion. But this isn't MTGfiction, which makes that a bit moot. As an asexual, like Sunburst, this chapter helped me. Life isn't about sex and it's nice to be reminded about that from time to time. At the risk of sounding cliché, the struggle is more real then you could imagine.
6579064 I'm glad you could relate! I'm not asexual myself, (and I think it's a bit of a gray area whether Sunburst is asexual, exactly, but certainly that was the thought that started this chapter) so it's nice to hear I wasn't completely out in la-la land about what somebody asexual might think or feel.
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There are many flavours of asexuality, Sunburst seems to be a heteroromantic asexual. Just because you don't care about sex doesn't mean that you can't like romance.
I like that last line, "When the right one come, I won't have missed anything" BRILLIANT!
This one is my favorite so far.