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Haha! Excellent twist, even if it was a little obvious, and probably one of the best depictions of bondage play I've read. I can't wait to see what happens next
~Crystalline Electrostatic~
I am afraid I must disagree with Toma here. I in no way saw this coming. In fact, just a few lines before the end I started half-thinking about whether you should have one of the princesses show up as one of Ember's guests.
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Coulda fooled me. Dar was written well enough that I thought she was her own pony here.
...Dammit I have to quit reading these when you put them out early through IRC. I was all excited until I saw the chapter title, then I was like, "Oh shit, I already read that."
Oh, and by the way; is Ask Ember still going on?
5108536 I kind of keep forgetting about it, and also I only have one question left to answer. If people send more, I will still be posting, though.
5108487 Well, I only post them to draw new people into the chan to chat, and the last few times people have just come in, gotten the chapter, and left without even saying a word... so I probably won't be bothering to do that anymore after this, honestly. Or at least I won't be posting the link here when it happens, it'll just be for the people who actually chat in my chat room. If you're not one of those, then you'll get it when it goes up like everyone else! Problem solved.
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Well, I wanted to leave a few clues, because it's always bad when a twist like that comes up literally out of nowhere and makes no sense at all. But I am glad that people didn't figure it out too easily, I didn't want it to be super obvious. I feel like I've succeeded pretty well!
Hmm...
Hmm...
(gets to "Having It Both Ways")
Hell, yeah! Bi-clop!
I just thought Dar had such an intense orgasm that she burst into flames, but wow was not expecting.
The last line of the description is no longer accurate, because I gave this one an edit pass.
I also egged SPark on shamelessly. My presence distorts the narrative field in ways that make Celestia more prominent in nearby stories.
Just wanted to point out: I've learned a bit of Latin, and I've created the Latin version of MLP's slang. Handcuffs in Latin is Manacles. Hoofcuffs would be Ungulacles.
Great job.
Also, jeez, never knew there were so many types of fetishes.
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...Yeah, I admit I did just pop in to get the link. I'm not big on chat rooms.
As for the askblog, you could mention it in the author notes, that might refresh it in people's memories.
5108619 It is true. You are the cause of all my Celestia stories, I think. If it weren't for you, I'd be writing non-stop Luna.
5108645 Man, I haven't even scratched the surface of the fetishes that are out there. This is still pretty tame stuff! (Not that I expect to really deal with most of the weird ones or anything, but you'd be surprised what some people get up to...)
5108672 Believe me, I've read about a hundred or so erotic fanfics. Not one has mentioned anything about suspension. Wow.
And I thought I was the kinky one here.
Dear sweet mama Jeezus, BDSM. My fantasies, they are all coming true!
5108681 Only a hundred? Oh sweet summer child, you have so much to learn. (Also, while fanfic does have its fetishes, most of the really fun ones happen in real life too.)
5108558 I think you did an excellent job. I hope I didnt come off as rude saying it was obvious and if so I do apologize. This really is an wonderful story and I've enjoyed every chapter. Please keep up the amazing work
5108907 Nah, it's fine. Obviously it wasn't obvious to everyone!
well then, this is what i have been waiting for.
5108965 Was working on reading the first chapter when you replied so it took a few minutes to actually read it.
That said for having never heard of the series let alone the character I can still certainly see some major similarities between the two of them. You should definitely look up the Holic series and at least watch the anime. Last time I had Netflix it was available there, probably on Hulu too. You'll probably like it.
Oh Faust please!!!!!! tell me that something happens later on in connection to this chapter. A royal summons, luna decides to go check out where her sister went, something anything. well played by the way
You are me, and very evil to leave us like that.
It was obvious that it was Celestia, but I kept expecting it to be Luna for some reason
And if she goes somewhere public, she will need to explain the getup
I was surprised by the ending (intermission?) of this chapter, but I can’t say I was shocked. Really, I don’t think any of us were shocked at who the client was.
Actually, I suspect that a lot of us were happy to see her find something that, in turn, gave her an outlet for the multitude of frustrations she doubtlessly feels everyday that she can do nothing about.
Fear not, dearest. Ember is like an all-aspect, 10-year warranty: No matter what goes wrong, she’ll be there to make it all better.
5109044 Ha ha ha. Oh man! No, I'm pretty sure she went straight to her private quarters, but it would be really funny if she hadn't.
5109050 A few people seem to have been shocked. It's interesting to see how many were surprised vs. how many weren't. So far only one person has found it completely obvious, but most do seem to have clued in that something might be going on.
5109070 I can easily see Luna poking her head in concern for sister's absence, raising the alarm, summoning the guards in and creating one big mess. I can also see Discord popping into the room as well.
I have to say, I am personally not a fan of bondage, but this was still very hot. Good job.
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Surely, we should be no more shocked than we would be to see someone cash in their all-aspect, 10-year warranty.
And still, let’s face it, each one of us was nevertheless the less thrilled to see such fires of passion stoked from but an Ember.
Hehe. Welp, I read this on the chat, so I'll just repeat what I wrote there.
From the start, and her request, it's quite clear Darjeeling Cup is in some position of power, however, her behaviour here is far too timid for that. Not really a 'commanding' function, I realized, but definitely one of power. That, or she's overcompensating, somehow. OR hiding something. So, yeah, that was a bit of a hint. The title could just have referred to the fact she worked in the palace, but in combination with the rest, was another hint. And finally, the exceptionally strong emotions were the biggest hint of them all.
All in all, it was a great buildup, and despite everything, the final reveal still came as a bit of a surprise
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Wasn't the "part 1" in the title enough of a hint, then?
If I had payed more attention to the chapter title I wouldn't have been nearly as surprised by the sudden forme change at the end. As it was I nearly hit a mental BSOD, not quite though. I haven't gone into a full on mental BSOD since I watched Serial Experiments: Lain the first time through.
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yes it did occur to me AFTER i wrote the comment. i dont pay attention to chapter names because not all stories use them.
5109431 He hehe. The author's note might have been a clue, too! But yes, there is going to be more.
5109447 yeah but where would be the fun in reading those??????
Damn you, evil sadist! That cliffhanger is agonizing!!!
From the chapter title I was expecting a princess, but the bulk of the chapter itself led me to think othereise.
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Hah! Didn't even see that. It wasn't there on the doc, and seeing as I'm at work, I really wasn't going to actually reread it here. I just wanted to drop in my comment
Can't wait for the next chapter!
I actually didn't see this coming until the end. I figured more that 'Dar' would use Ember in the place of Celestia. Shows what I know.
And, this might sound incredibly pedantic, but what 'paperwork' does Far have to do?
The only problem I had with this chapter was the lack of a safeword. Dar might not know any better (Well, Celly probably might), but Ember, as an experienced pro would definitely say something along the lines of "If at any time, you want this to stop, say "red" and this will all stop. Vanilla might make "no" the stop-word, but for something like this, "no" is fuel for the fire."
I know the next chapter is going to be the aftermath, but I'd like to suggest a possible request. Someone comes in and wants the Dusk Shine fantasy. That or someone comes in and doesn't want the sex, but some cultured conversation, kind of like Lady Heather from CSI.
When I read the title, I knew that Celestia was involved somehow. But when Dar was given a name that had nothing to do with the sun or daytime, my suspicion died, slowly, until her fantasy came to light.
5110035 Not everyone plays with a safeword other than just "no". Unless you're doing a scene where you really do want the person to specifically say "no, stop" and not mean it, a safeword is optional. Kinksters really like to wave safewords about, because they do sound "safe", it's right in the word, but they really are optional for most scenes.
5109774 He does the bookkeeping, taxes, pays bills, deals with the buisiness license, etc. Maybe he even does some accounting for neighboring businesses on the side, I dunno.
Saw it coming but still loved it. Is it strange I come back to this for the story and not the sex?
5110213 Plus, I suppose from time to time he serves as a bouncer of sorts. If I recall the intro correctly, there are a few situations when ponies should not be allowed in to see Ember. Thanks for taking a moment to make up an answer.
C-Celestia? Wha...She... yeah, i'd buy that. An immortal princess being into pain, just to remind yourself that you're alive, I can see how she'd be into that. Especially since emotional attachments aren't always the best solution when you know you're going to outlive somepony.
Well, I certainly didn't see that coming. It's nice to be taken by surprise once in a while, and fun to read over and pick up the cues. While bondage isn't my cup of tea, it makes a lot of sense here. I'm looking forward to seeing the inevitable follow up when it occurs.
I thought it was a neat note that Celestia trusts a changeling queen enough in that sort of delicate situation. I'm sure if Ember will pick that up.
This is one of those stories you read just because it has a certain elegance to it. i'm seriously loving the themes you have going on here!
hey are you going to do anything with a dragon or spike