It has been three months since Rainbow Dash passed away into Elysium, joining Pinkie, Fluttershy, Applejack, and Rarity. Meanwhile, Twilight's body has been frozen in time, unable to join her former friends. As she considers the meaning of loss, strange nightmares come over her, forcing her to turn to Luna for help. As they spend more time together, though, just one question arises- will either ever find any happiness that doesn't need to end?
Back from the dead by 09242014! On 09082014, updated description and tags. Removed "OC" and "Alternate Universe", added "Dark" and changed rating to "Teen", just to be safe. On 09222014, deleted the first seven or eight chapters. That's why the view count is so low, but comments and responses are much much higher.
Amazing!
5041847 Why, thank you! I must say, I'm very happy I finally got around to publishing it.
Super amazing, im really happy that you were finally able to write this(evenif im a bit sad to see the old one go) and i'm looking forward for more of your writting and updates on this.
Yes! Glad to see this one back!
Great set-up! Looking forward to more.
5042230 Well, it's going to be slow (I'm still working on this), but it's happening nevertheless!
5042694 You, my good sir, humble me.
Pony words have much improved I am not sure why the rest had to go but I am looking forward to more.
5045026 Because nopony bothered to answer me when I asked if they wanted to keep the originals except one, and he said to delete them.
5045088 I think it was good that you deleted the old ones(even if it was a bit sad) but maybe it would have been even better if you posted this as a completely new story not updating an old one. But do as you wish
This is back, cool.
5045278 We're not allowed to publish re-writes as new stories. It's against the rules.
5045447 Yeah, yeah it is cool!
5045732
Cool.
Hmm, with my logic and look on things, I never considered immortality as a curse, I mean, do you want perfection? And I imagine immortals, some, enjoy helping generations of people.
5110626 Now imagine those same immortals having to deal with those same generations upon generations inevitably dying while they are forced to stand strong. We have a hard enough time psychologically dealing with one lifetime of death- how would you really feel if you had to deal with hundreds?
5110643
You come to realize this before they die, treasure your time with them, and do as they say, don't mourn over them for long, move on, it's just extended life, sure, you see people die, and it's sad, but you will learn to not get to sad and move on like they would want you to.
5110647 Did something happen that I missed where Twilight had time to learn that?
5110655
No, it's my view on such a subject, doing something you enjoy also helps.
5110663 Oh, we'll get to that.
5110667
I mean like helping generations of people, protecting them so they may live in peace, and then yours, coping with a special someone...which I'm a sucker for, that gets shipped by UPS.
5110672 I have assumed direct control of UPS.
5110689
Damn.
Do I choose to destroy the UPS system?
Do I choose to control it?
Or should I work at UPS?
5110696 I understand that reference!
5110713 so,is this story dead... Or what?