Chapter 3: Setting the Stagecoach
The tavern that Early Shipment led the girls to, dubbed The Vulgar Monkey if the broken sign dangling over the door was to be believed, was a nondescript affair. The look and smell were familiar to the four friends who had recently spent most of their time in The Dancing Dame. Being the middle of the day there were a few patrons with plates of roasted meat or bowls filled with some kind of stew on their tables, but for the most part the tavern was empty. The main room was somewhat small, but there were a number of curtained doorways lining both side walls, each leading to a small, semi-private room of their own.
As they entered, Early nodded to the hefty female bartender, who grimaced in response and tilted her head toward one such room.
“Didn’t realize Keg’s twin sister was in the same business as him,” Spike joked in a whisper. Applejack chuckled while Pinkie’s eyes widened.
“Kegger’s got a sister!? No fair, how come I haven’t met her?”
“Shh!” Twilight hissed as Early pulled back the side room’s curtain and held it open for the girls. Twilight swallowed and hesitated for a brief moment before stepping through. She half expected a dozen armed thugs to pounce on her the instant she was inside, but instead she was greeted by the sight of a large table filled with an assortment of foods: loaves of bread and biscuits, several pitchers of drinks that varied between water, wine, and what looked like a stout ale. A large turkey sat at the center of the spread, minus one leg, and was flanked by a tall, steaming pot of stew and an equally large wooden bowl with a variety of apples, oranges and other assorted fruit.
The thing that truly caught and held her attention, however, was the wild mop of vibrant, polychromatic hair on the head of the room’s lone occupant, who was currently sitting with her back to them.
“Well go on in, Twi, don’t jus’ stop in the middle of the-” Applejack said as she and Pinkie stepped around the mage, her jaw dropping when she spotted the seated woman. “You!”
Rainbow Dash twisted around in her seat, the missing turkey leg in one hand and a half-eaten bread roll in the other, her cheeks bulging out slightly as she chewed and swallowed. “Oh, hey guys! How’s it hangin’?”
Twilight raised her staff--which she knew from experience would be of little help, especially since she had not yet taken the time to enchant it--as Applejack reached for Winona. Spike let out a somewhat underwhelming growl while Pinkie produced what looked like a party popper and aimed it at Rainbow. The seated woman took another bite of her turkey as she watched the display with a passive, unreadable expression.
“Um,” Early spoke up from the back of the group, “I take it you know each other?”
“Somethin’ like that,” Applejack said tightly. “Last time we met she tried to kill us.”
“Hey, you guysh were breakin’ into tha plaesh I was hired ta guard,” Rainbow said around her food before washing it down with a swig of foamy ale. “Last time I checked that’s still what guards do, right?”
“Good point,” Applejack admitted with a nod.
“What are you doing here?” Twilight asked. “Did Spellbinder send you?”
“Pff! As if!” Rainbow spat. “That jerk skipped town without paying me a single bit! I don’t work unless I get paid, and I don’t give anyone the chance to jip me twice.” The others continued to stare at her, their expressions unchanged. She sighed and set her food down on a plate before repositioning to sit with her legs on either side of the chair, her folded arms resting on the back.
“Look, I’m a merc. I work for money, and this guy told me he was hiring,” she pointed to Early. “I’ve already told him I’m awesome enough to handle whatever the job is on my own, but if you guys want in that’s cool with me.” She grinned devilishly. “Just try not to cramp my style, ok?”
Twilight’s staff drooped for a moment as her expression went from one of anxiety to one of consideration, but quickly rose back into place as she shook her head. “How can we be sure you’re telling the truth?”
“Guess you can’t,” Rainbow shrugged and tilted her head to one side whimsically. “It’s up to you, egghead.” Twilight’s hands wrung at her staff for a tense moment as she stared hard at the swordswoman.
“I think we can trust her,” Applejack said.
“Are you sure?” Twilight asked, drawing a nod from the cowgirl. “What about you, Pinkie?”
“Sure!” Pinkie said with her usual enthusiasm. “I’m always up for making new friends! The more, the funnier!”
“I think that’s supposed to be ‘the more, the merrier’,” Spike suggested. “I dunno Twilight, I’m still not convinced, but I’ll go along with whatever you think is best.”
Twilight nodded, slowly lowering her staff. “Ok. I guess for now there’s no reason to be enemies.” She extended a hand. “We haven’t been properly introduced. I’m Twilight Sparkle.”
“Rainbow Dash,” she returned a handshake somewhat slick with turkey grease, “but of course, heh, you knew that already.”
“Uh,” Twilight intoned as she flexed her slimy hand, eyes darting around for something to wipe it on. “Right. This is Applejack, Pinkie Pie, and my familiar Spike.”
“Oh, I’m so glad!” their host said with a clap of his hands.
“Soglad?” Pinkie Pie asked, “I thought you said your name was Early?”
The merchant blinked at her. “What? No--I mean, yes, my name is Early, but I was just… um…”
“It’s ok, she does that,” Applejack said. “Now, why don’t you tell us what kinda work you need done?”
“Oh, certainly! Please, sit down; I’ll explain as we eat.”
The four seated themselves, with Applejack and Early taking seats flanking Rainbow Dash, while Pinkie and Twilight took up places on the opposite side of the table so they could all face one another. Spike cleared a small place for himself near Twilight and happily began sampling the fare as the others dug in, with the exception of Early who began his tale.
“First things first. I’m a merchant who, up until recently, ran a very brisk trade route between Canterlot and Las Pegasus. Normally it’s quite safe, but for the past few months it’s been-”
“Ran into some bandit trouble, huh?” Rainbow interjected as she helped herself to another roll. “Sounds like easy-peasy money to me.”
“No, that wasn’t-”
“Not bandits?” Rainbow perked up a bit, “Some kind of monsters?”
“Well, I’m not sure if-”
“Ooh, ooh! My turn!” Pinkie Pie piped up. “Is it… zombies?”
“Z-zombies?!” Spike whimpered, clutching his tail as his tiny eyes widened.
“Um, can I-”
“Spike, there’s no such thing as zombies,” Twilight rolled her eyes. “Necromancy isn’t real; it’s just an old wives’-”
A shrill whistle cut the air, silencing the room. Applejack removed her fingers from her mouth and looked over them all.
“Can we let the man finish his story?”
“Sorry,” Twilight blushed as Spike nodded. Pinkie pouted but remained silent, and Rainbow Dash just grumbled slightly and resumed chewing. Early cleared his throat.
“Thank you. As I was saying, for the past few months the main road between Canterlot and Las Pegasus has been blocked due to flooding.”
“Floodin’?” Applejack said. “The rains ain’t been that heavy this season; leastways not this far north.”
“Now who’s interrupting?” Rainbow said under her breath, only to receive a surprisingly quiet shush from Pinkie Pie.
“Neither in the south,” Early agreed with Applejack, “but part of the road runs through a low-lying coastal marsh. The rains combined with some unusually high tides have made the area impassable. There are a handful of other routes, but only the one road is frequently patrolled by the Guard, leaving the rest, erm, less than safe.”
“Ah, there we go,” Rainbow nodded. “I knew there’d be bandits involved somehow.”
“So you just need us to protect your caravan through one of these other routes?” Twilight asked, drawing a grimace from Early.
“I’m afraid it’s not quite that simple either. Initially we just hired a few extra guards, but after losing two consecutive caravans on different routes, my business partner and I had our backs against the wall. Half my clients started looking elsewhere; I needed to get a shipment through if I wanted to stay in business.” He paused to swallow. “There was only one road between Las Pegasus and Canterlot that I could be reasonably sure was free of brigands.”
“Hold up, pardner,” Applejack straightened up in her seat. “Are you talkin’ about what I think yer talkin’ about?” Early swallowed again and gave her a grim frown.
“What? What’s he talking about?” Spike asked, even as Twilight’s eyes widened.
“Oh my stars, you can’t mean…” she breathed quietly, serving only to increase her familiar’s agitation.
“What does he mean? Somebody please just say it; the suspense is killing me!”
Early closed his eyes and took a single, steadying breath.
“The Everfree Way,” he said. “I sent a caravan through the Everfree Forest.”
There was a sharp clatter as the turkey bone Rainbow had nearly picked clean fell from her grip and onto the plate in front of her, but no one turned to look in her direction. Every wide eye in the room was focused on Early, whose head bowed under their incredulous stares. The room was entirely silent for a long moment until Pinkie, a stunned look still on her face, took a large, noisy bite out of an apple. The sound both broke the silence and opened the floodgates.
“That’s gotta be the most dumbass idea I’ve ever heard!”
“Are ya plumb crazy?!”
“Spike, could you pass me the butter there by your foot?”
“Y-yeah… sure Pinkie…” the little dragon said in a daze as he absently shoved the small dish toward the grinning performer’s waiting hands.
“Mister Shipment,” Twilight stood and placed both hands on the table, “the Everfree Forest is the only untamed wildland in all of Equestria, and for good reason! It’s home to some of the most ferocious creatures known to man, and is considered too dangerous for anyone! Even research missions sent by the Academy to gather samples of the indigenous plant life only venture a few dozen feet past the treeline at most, and even then they’re escorted by no less than a platoon of Royal Guards!” She shook her head. “How could you possibly justify sending people into such a terrible place? It’s… it’s like signing their death warrants!”
“I…” Early stammered, slight tears gathering at the corners of his eyes. “I’m not proud of what I’ve done. Looking back, it was far from the smartest decision I’ve ever made... but you have to understand, I was desperate! My company’s reputation had gone from sterling to nothing in a matter of weeks! I was willing to risk anything, and the first few caravans did make it through!”
A second crescendo of silence swept through the room.
“Wait… what?” Twilight asked. “You… they survived?!”
Early nodded. “Please, sit. I will tell you everything I know.”
Twilight did as she was asked, and after taking a long drink of water, the glass quivering in his grip, Early sighed.
“The first caravan I sent into the Everfree was armed to the teeth with a dozen mercenaries per wagon. Over a hundred in all. I offered them exorbitant pay; half up front and half upon the shipment’s safe arrival in Canterlot. I’m ashamed to say that I expected many of them would not make it out alive... imagine my shock when they emerged from the woods having lost only a single man! They reported some scattered animal attacks, and an encounter with a lone manticore, but nothing like the terrible stories we’ve all grown up hearing.
“I was overjoyed, despite the immense financial cost of the first trip. Knowing that the forest was safe to traverse was an incredible boon because the route is much shorter than the main road, which skirts around the Everfree’s borders, and the perceived danger seemed to be keeping the bandits out as well. Two more shipments passed through just the same, and I cut back slightly on the number of guards so that I could still make a profit. We lost one or two men each time, but I was paying well, and neither Canterlot nor Las Pegasus is lacking in mercenaries for hire.” Early paused and looked down at the liquid in his glass. “With the fourth caravan, though, things started to get… complicated.
“At first it was just a few more animal attacks; nothing truly dangerous, but it was only the beginning. Half of the fifth caravan was lost when a fire broke out during an attack by a pack of timberwolves; the guards were trying to scare the beasts away with torches and set one of the wagons aflame. The next shipment was even worse. The handful of guards who arrived in Las Pegasus, having abandoned the wagons entirely, said that they’d been beset by the forest itself. Animals of all shapes and sizes accosted them for every moment of the day and night, and the trees themselves came alive and wove their roots through the wagon wheels when the men were not looking. The final caravan left Las Pegasus just over a week ago, and I-I’ve heard nothing since.”
“How terrible!” Twilight said, her face sharing the same sullen look the others--Pinkie included--now wore. “Have you alerted the Royal Guard? Has no one gone in search of them?”
“That’s part of the reason why all of you are here,” Early said with a nod. “The Guard and the Adventurer’s Guilds that I’ve approached have all turned me down; they say the forest is just too dangerous, so freelancers like yourselves are my only hope. The job I’m asking you to perform is two-fold. I plan on sending one last caravan through the Everfree Forest, and would like you all to act as additional guards. Secondly, I’d like you to find out what happened to the previous caravan, if you are able. Will you help me?”
The room was silent again, as the girls exchanged glances. Rainbow Dash seemed indifferent, while Pinkie, Spike and Applejack looked to one another with uncertainty. Only Twilight appeared lost in thought, her head bowed slightly and her fingers on her chin.
“Man, you just don’t know when to quit, do you?” Rainbow shook her head. “You know the place isn’t safe and you just keep throwing money at it. Quit while you’re ahead, pal.”
“Don’t ya think that’s a little harsh?” Applejack turned and glared at the swordswoman. “Ain’t nothin’ wrong with an honest businessman protectin’ what’s his.”
“It is if it’s a lost cause and gets people killed,” Rainbow shot back. “C’mon, it’s the Everfree Forest; folks go in, but they don’t come out. Today’s the first time I’ve heard of anybody making it all the way through.”
“Well that just means it’s not as dangerous as we thought,” Pinkie grinned. “I mean if you go from ‘nobody makes it out alive’ to ‘sometimes people make it out alive’ that’s a big improvement, right?”
“I think I’d rather stick with ‘don’t go in the first place and definitely stay alive’,” Spike said, drawing a nod from Rainbow.
“That’s what I’m saying! Listen to the lizard!”
“Dragon!”
“Whatever.”
“I understand how ludicrous my request may sound, given all you’ve heard,” Early said, “and truth be told it probably would be smarter for me to simply cut my losses and move on, but I… I can’t. Not until I find out what happened to him.”
“Him?” Pinkie echoed.
“My business partner, who I mentioned before? He… he’s also my brother. I handle the financial side of things, while he drives the caravans.”
Applejack’s eyes widened. “And he vanished right along with the last one?” Early nodded silently.
“Oh, that’s so sad!” Pinkie said. “We have to help, girls! How can we not?”
“Easy, we just say ‘no’,” Rainbow shrugged. Applejack scowled at her.
“How can you be so dang cold? Weren’t you the one who nearly got us both killed tryin’ to save your two buddies?”
“That’s different,” Rainbow locked eyes with the cowgirl, but after a tense moment it was clear she didn’t intend to elaborate.
“Why us?” Twilight said, softly at first, but loud enough to draw everyone’s attention. She straightened up when she realized the focus had shifted to her. “You said you needed women who knew how to fight,” she looked at an increasingly pale Early. “What haven’t you told us yet?”
Early swallowed hard. “I-it started with the man we lost on the first caravan. He wasn’t killed by any animal--at least, not while defending the wagons. He simply vanished. The other guards say he left the camp one night to relieve himself and never returned. They searched for him a little, but there was nothing; no blood or signs of a struggle... it was as if he had just wandered off into the forest. Also, some of the men reported that they thought they heard a woman singing.”
“What does that have to do with anything?” Rainbow shook her head.
“I didn’t think much of it at the time either; I was just overjoyed that the shipment was safe… but it kept happening. Every caravan had at least one, sometimes two or even three men disappear without a trace, and more and more started talking about hearing a woman’s voice singing. Rumors and superstition took over, and soon every one of my brother’s men was whispering about the Siren of the Everfree.”
“Ooh, I love sirens!” Pinkie grinned. “Back in Ponyville they used to ring the big bronze bell on top of town hall whenever there was an emergency. This one time I was throwing an anniversary party for Mister and Missus Cake, and-”
“No, Pinkie, not that kind of a siren,” Twilight waved her off. “A Siren is a creature from Marecedonian mythology, usually depicted as a beautiful mermaid that lured sailors to their deaths with a hypnotic song.” She turned back to Early. “That explains why you wanted to hire women; according to lore only men are susceptible to a Siren’s call.”
“Why would somthin' like that have set itself up in the forest?” Applejack scratched the side of her head. “Ain’t exactly full of sailors.”
“Or water deep enough to swim in,” Rainbow added.
“Well, it’s probably not an actual Siren; they are mythological, after all,” Twilight said, “but it certainly sounds as if something is acting like a Siren. I suppose we’ll find out when we get there.”
“Wait, what?” Applejack blanched. “Y’mean you actually wanna go?”
Twilight shrugged. “I don’t see that we have much choice. We had no luck trying to find work in the Bazaar, and I don’t think that tomorrow will be any better. As dangerous as it sounds, this may be our only option.” She turned back to Early. “Assuming, of course, that the payment is sufficient.”
“I can offer you five hundred bits each for successfully escorting the caravan to Las Pegasus. If you can bring my brother back, or if you can at least find out what happened to him, I’m willing to double that.”
“Whoa, that’s a serious chunk of change,” Rainbow said as Applejack let out a low whistle. Early nodded.
“I find myself in a position where I have little choice but to bet everything on this last shipment,” he admitted. “If this doesn’t work my business is effectively finished anyway, but more importantly I can’t even begin to put a price on the chance that my brother is still alive, even if it is a slim one at this point.”
“Optimistically, that’s three thousand--more than half of what we need,” Twilight said softly, causing Spike to snort in her direction.
“Hey! What about me?”
“You and I are sort of a package deal,” she smiled and scratched her familiar’s head briefly, “I don’t really think it’s fair to charge double.” Spike crossed his arms and grumbled a half-hearted consent. “So are we all agreed?”
“Absotute-a-lutely!” Pinkie bounced up and down in her seat. “The evil creepy forest part still sounds scary, but I’ve never been to Las Pegasus before! I hear it’s the Entertainment Capital of Equestria; imagine how many people I could make smile there if I put on a show!”
“We ain’t goin’ there to get on stage, Pinkie,” Applejack said. She then let out a small sigh and looked to Twilight. “I’m in if you’re sure this is what you wanna do, sugarcube.”
Twilight nodded. “Spike? What do you think?”
“What, I don’t get a share of the pay but I get a vote?” he quipped, causing Twilight to blink.
“Oh. Good point; forget I asked.”
“Hey!” he started to protest as the others stifled their laughter, but Twilight had already turned back to Early and extended her hand.
“It seems we have a deal, Mister Shipment.”
The merchant grinned--the first honest smile he’d worn since the girls had met him, and reached over to eagerly return the gesture, grasping Twilight’s hand with both of his and shaking it firmly.
“Thank you; thank you so much!” He turned his attention to Rainbow. “And you, Miss Dash?”
“Hm,” Rainbow Dash put her feet up on the table and reclined by tipping her chair back, “Nah, I think I’ll pass, thanks.”
“No surprise there,” Applejack crossed her arms with a snort. “What the matter, money not good enough for you?”
“I like the money just fine, but I like being alive just a tiny bit more.”
“Aw, c’mon Dashie!” Pinkie Pie startled the swordswoman by popping up behind her and nearly toppling her chair over entirely. “It’s like a mystery adventure, it’ll be fun!”
“Yeah, not exactly my idea of fun,” Rainbow frowned, “and don’t call me Dashie,”
“Whatever you say Dashie!” Pinkie blinked once and then grinned sheepishly. “Whoops! Sorry.” She slunk back to her seat, followed all the way by a stern glare from Rainbow.
“Look, if it’s all the same to you, I’m gonna head out,” Rainbow said as she stood and hooked her thumbs in her belt. “Thanks for lunch, and good luck with the whole forest of death thing.”
Early stood and offered a slight bow while the others watched with a mixture of expressions as Rainbow strode to the door, scooping up one last apple on her way. Just as she pushed aside the curtain that led to the rest of the tavern, Twilight leaped to her feet.
“Wait!”
“Huh?” she asked as she turned back. “Why?”
Twilight blushed a little as every eye in the room focused on her; not because of the sudden attention, but because she realized she didn’t actually have an answer.
“Um,” she stammered, her eyes searching the table frantically as if some item of food or drink would provide her with something--anything--that would help convince Rainbow to come with them.
“Sometime today?” Rainbow crossed her arms with a frown.
“It’s just that… you’re right,” Twilight finally said. “You’re right, Rainbow. The Everfree Forest is dangerous; probably one of the most dangerous places in all of Equestria. I honestly don’t know what our chances are of making it through, but I do know that they’d be a lot better if you came with us.”
“Well of course they would be; I’m awesome!” Rainbow scoffed.
“Then prove it,” Twilight said with a sly smile. “Prove to us that you’re really as good as you say you are.”
In a split second and with barely a single stride Rainbow was standing in front of Twilight, and despite being only an inch or so taller the sheer, iron force of her presence made it seem like she was towering over the diminutive mage. The two stared into each others eyes, Rainbow’s simmering gaze locked in battle with Twilight’s passable attempt at a calm veneer for an uncomfortably long moment. The rest of the room held its breath right up until Rainbow’s face split into a wide grin.
“It takes some real nerve to call me out like that. You’ve got guts, Twilight Sparkle,” she said. “Okay; I’m in, but you better remember,” she leaned in, close enough that their noses nearly touched, “don't cramp my style, understand?” Twilight managed a nod and another weak grin. As Rainbow walked back to her place at the table, the mage slowly let out a breath she had been holding as well.
“Okay, well,” she turned to Early, “It looks like we’re your new guards.”
“Excellent!” Early said, clapping his hands together. “I can’t begin to thank you enough; this means so much to me.” He paused and bowed his head slightly as he started pacing. “I will need to get the rest of my guards together. It shouldn’t take more than a few hours to load everything up, but the wagon teams…” He shook his head as he trailed off. “So many preparations!” He turned for the door as if he were about to leave, but spun back around in a single motion. “I believe I can have the caravan ready to go by tomorrow morning. I’ll handle the provisions and supplies you’ll need for the journey, so would all of you please meet me at Canterlot’s east gate, say, an hour after sunrise?”
Twilight nodded. “The east gate, tomorrow, one hour after sunrise.” Early smiled and bowed again hastily before bolting from the room, leaving four women and a pseudo-dragon to exchange curious glances over the substantial amount of remaining food.
“Wait a minute,” Spike asked, “did… did he just stick us with the bill?”
The girls’ eyes widened.
“Not it!” Rainbow Dash said after a moment of stunned silence, followed by the sound of wood scraping wood as chairs were hastily shoved backwards and out of the way in a mad scramble for the door.
“Aaand we’re startin’ off fifty bits in the hole,” Applejack groaned, having felt too terrible about running out on the bill at The Vulgar Monkey to let it stand. “Thanks for spottin’ me, Pinkie. I promise I’ll pay you back soon as I can.”
“No worries!” Pinkie said as she skipped along ahead of the others on their way back to The Dancing Dame. “I consider it our very first charge to the Guild Expense Account! Though I guess I’ll have to save my receipt until we actually have a Guild Expense Account… or a Guild, for that matter.”
“I’m sure Early will reimburse us if we remind him tomorrow,” Twilight said without lifting her eyes from the cobblestone street in front of her. Applejack frowned slightly and slowed her pace to fall in beside the mage.
“You sure you’re ok with this job? It feels like we’re sorta throwin’ ourselves in the deep end of the lake, know what I mean?”
“I do,” Twilight nodded. “Every time I think about where we’re going it sends a shiver down my spine.”
“We can still bow out if you want. As much as I want to get my farm back, it ain’t worth somebody losin’ their life.”
“I understand, but this seems to be our only realistic option.”
“‘Realistic’?” Applejack snorted. “How in tarnation is walkin’ into the place you called one of the most dangerous in Equestria ‘realistic’?”
“You’re right about that, but without any other choices…” she trailed off. “Be that as it may, you and Pinkie are more than capable of protecting yourselves, and you know better than any of us how good Rainbow Dash is. This ‘Siren’ aside, I’m fairly certain we could handle the likes of animal or monster attacks.”
“I bet none of Early’s caravans ever had an awesome, fire-breathing pseudo-dragon and his wizard along for the trip either,” Spike added from his relaxed position on Twilight’s shoulder.
“Great, we’ve met her twice and Rainbow’s attitude is already rubbing off on my familiar,” Twilight rolled her eyes. Applejack chuckled.
“He’s got a point, though. I can whup a bandit or chase off a critter well enough, and I’ve tangled with the odd timberwolf or two, but I ain’t never messed with the likes of real monsters before,” she admitted. “To be honest, I don’t think I’d even consider goin’ into that forest without a wizard or ten watchin’ my back.” She paused for a moment. “Thanks, Twi. Y’know, for bein’ willin’ to go through all this to help me get the farm back.”
Twilight exchanged smiles with the farmgirl, who then resumed a walking pace more comfortable for her long legs and pulled ahead to where Pinkie was happily greeting every random passerby she came across.
“Speaking of Rainbow Dash...” Spike asked softly as soon as Applejack was out of hearing distance. “What’s the deal? When she almost walked out you nearly had a panic attack.”
Twilight’s eyes widened a little, but then her lips turned up into a small, knowing smile. “You felt it too, huh?”
“Of course I did,” he waved a claw in the air vaguely. “I’m your familiar; we share that emphatic bond thing.”
“Empathic bond, Spike, not emphatic,” she corrected with a sigh. “I… just feel that it’s very important that Rainbow Dash come with us to the Everfree, that’s all.”
“But why though?” Spike pressed her. “Sure she’s good in a fight, but she doesn’t seem very reliable. What makes you want to keep her around so badly?”
“That’s just it,” Twilight’s pace slowed by a half step as she bit her lip, “I don’t know.”
“Say what now?” Spike tilted his head.
“Back there, when Rainbow Dash was about to walk out, I suddenly had this overwhelming sensation of… wrongness, I guess; I don’t know how else to describe it. There’s no logic to it. I don’t know her very well, and I’m not even sure yet if I trust her,” Twilight said, “but no matter what I just can’t shake this feeling that she belongs with us.” Suddenly her eyes widened. “I think I’ve felt it before too.”
“When?”
“Do you remember the thief from Spellbinder’s tower?” she dropped her voice low. “The one who took the Heartstone?”
“Oh, her,” Spike’s eyes developed a far away look as a silly grin took over his scaly features. “How could I possibly forget a creature that gorgeous?”
“It was the same feeling. When she was about to leave something in me just sort of twisted up into a knot, and I called out to her.” Twilight shook her head. “I think she was as surprised as I was that I knew her name.”
“Rarity,” Spike cooed. “Even her name makes my scales tingle.”
“Focus, Cassanova,” Twilight poked him in the stomach gently. “At the time I thought I was just worried about losing the Heartstone, but now… now I’m not so sure.”
“So what do you think it means?”
“I honestly have no idea,” she admitted, leading to a long pause. Twilight looked up from the road in front of her and spotted the others just as they turned onto Mane Street a block or so in front of her, engaged in some form of animated discussion. Pinkie was grinning and bouncing up and down as usual, and despite Applejack shaking her head there was a warm smile on her face as well. Twilight couldn’t help the corners of her mouth from curling up to match.
“Y’know, for someone who never wanted friends, you sure seem to be collecting some pretty good ones so far,” Spike said with a sly wink.
“I can’t disagree,” she nodded. “Would you do me a favor, and not mention what we were just talking about to anyone yet? I don’t want to worry them.”
“Are you sure, Twilight?” Spike frowned. “It seems like it might be important, and even if it isn’t shouldn’t we tell them?”
Twilight nodded again. “I will, I promise. I just… I want to think about it a little more first.” She took a quick, head-clearing breath. “Besides, we’ve got more important things to focus on right now. We’ve got a big day tomorrow.”
Spike raised an eyebrow. “So… since Early said he was taking care of all the supplies, we don’t have to make any checklists or anything to get ready, right?”
“Oh, don’t be ridiculous Spike! Of course we do!” Twilight laughed. “There’s no way I’m going on the most dangerous trip I’ve ever taken without a checklist.”
Spike let out a groan that could be heard halfway down the street as he flopped down on Twilight’s shoulder in defeat.
“Come to think of it, I’m sure Pinkie and Applejack won’t make their own checklists, so we’d better make some for them. And one for Rainbow Dash as well. Oh! And a master list for Mister Shipment; I’m sure he’d appreciate having a proper catalogue of all the supplies, equipment, and trade goods in his caravan so he can be sure they all make it through safely!” She let out a girlish squeal. “Ooh, this is going to be so much fun!”
Spike’s second groan could be heard all the way to Victory Plaza.
POLL TIME! What do you guys/gals think is better, having this story continue as a series of separate 'books', or should I take what we have here in Siren and what's in Stolen Gem and lump it all together as one story? I was kinda looking forward to picking out cover art for each part but then I realized that I can just include the art at the start of each new 'arc', and now I'm not sure which way I like better. Let me know what you think in the comments, and as always thanks for reading! 
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Why do I get the feeling that there is going to be a crater where Everfree was before the job is all said and done?
As for your question: I vote for keeping them as separate 'books' for each arc.
I say keep it like this.
So, in answer to your 'poll' - either way works. That said, I think it might be better for the story on the whole to have it all together. Less chance of people missing each "sequel".
As for the story itself... I can't describe how much I am enjoying this story. It's just such a neat take on the story.
Seems Twilight is having some post-reincarnation memory lapse here. Interesting.
This employer of theirs seems kinda shady. If he's willing to shell out the bucks for guard duty, why stiff them on the bill for food? Seems rather petty.
Heh, it was either going to be Rarity or Rainbow Dash as the other member. Got me wondering how Rarity will be re-introduced to the group.
Let's see, the poll: I vote to keep it the way you have it now. Sure, some readers might read them out of order, but seeing a 50,000 word story is a lot less intimidating than a 200,000+ word story. As long as you link the sequels correctly, I don't see multiple stories as being a problem.
Not to mention that if one bombs, it won't affect the others quite so much.
Later!
Well I'll be damned, OP delivered with the double update.
The conversations between the characters flowed really nicely, and I'm generally interested in seeing where the story goes. Overall I think the series is starting to come into its own, so keep it up
Poll vote: Split the story into arcs
This story is turning out very nice. I have to admit I didn't think you were making the entire story in 1 setting, and posting all the chapters at once. You are making the characters actions very believable and realistic. (So to say in pony universe) Looking forward to more chapters, and I'm going to check out some of the other stories you made. You are a very talented writer and I hope you enjoy what you are doing.
Poll: I think you should keep everything separate. It might help you with your writing by focusing on only one topic at a time.
this whole damn set up for this story is what I usualy read in fantasy book which is awsome
Personally, I think it'd be better to keep the story like it is now: in separate arcs as opposed to stuffing it all into one story.
I vote for keeping it like it is. Helps keep the story from turning into one gigantic long work that's intimidating as hell to read.
(Looking at you Project Horizons)
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Aw, c'mon, I wouldn't blow up the Everfree Forest,
... well... not all of it,
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Thanks, Serifina!
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Probably dragon stuff... y'know, best way to keep your scales shiny, discussing their favorite flavors of gemstone... although in this instance Spike is a pseudo-dragon; sort of a fey spirit who assumed a dragon-like appearance when he entered into Twilight's service in exchange for being able to visit and experience the physical world first-hand. It's possible that 'real' dragons might look down on him... or maybe they'd be flattered that he chose to emulate them... guess it depends on the dragon,
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Hehe, don't worry about Early, OCD Organizer Twi will straighten his act out in a jiffy,
Unfortunately, I couldn't come up with a decent way to insert Rarara into this part of the story in any meaningful way. She may make an appearance later, but she won't be reunited with the rest of the girls until the next story. I'm looking forward to that one,
I agree about the length; I wasn't sure if other people felt the same way but from the responses so far it seems like they do!
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Flim and Flam didn't leave me with a much of a choice,
I'm glad you liked it; I was actually worried about this chapter because it's one giant ball of exposition. This is an adventure story, dammit! Next chapter better have a fight!
... wait, who am I yelling at?
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Haha, thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying the ride!
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That is some amazing praise; thank you very much!
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Thanks to everyone who answered my poll; it looks like the story stays as smaller arcs!
Great story. Honestly, I think you should finish the whole plot here, in this story. However, only separate the plot in books if each book is long.
Have you really returned to us?
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Technically I never went away; I just have about nine hobbies and write slower than a snail covered in molasses going uphill in winter,
But to actually answer your question: sorta. I plan on trying to finish one of my other stories first (in the next couple of months, ideally) and then jump back to this one.
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I hope so. Too many good stories just die.
Oh, Twilight.
Also, I'm predicting Fluttershy is the "siren" here, based by the art.
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You never know, it could turn out to be Sonata in the end!
... No, it's totally Fluttershy.
One book for one story. Real books separate out into series to keep them from becoming too big to carry around, and because the authors can't afford to wait several years between releases to finish a whole series. Neither of those are problems here, where it weighs nothing and you release chapters as they're written. Separating the story just serves to make it more difficult to follow and find. Of course, you can have multiple stories about the same characters in the same world, so then you'd make a sequel. For example, you should probably cut this one off after Nightmare Moon and make a sequel for whatever Discord is planning because it's a different plot, with distinct conflict and resolution.
5635172 How's that other story coming along?
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Yeeeeeeeeah..... 'best laid plans of mares and men', and all that,
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In the meantime, are there any other stories like yours you can suggest?
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I can, in fact!
The closest story I've found so far is Bloodlines; it's not complete yet either but it's very, very good.
Also very similar are two stories from the 'My Little Mages' verse, The Nightmare's Return and Tales from Mystika. The latter is on hiatus and has been for a long time, but both are still well-crafted fantasy adventures.
Another great (and finished) tale is The Laughing Shadow. It focuses more on Aj and Rarity than the M6 as a whole, but it's a full-blown action-adventure/romance with a sort of modern fantasy feel.
Finally, The Sword Coast and it's ongoing sequel, Shadows of the Crystal Empire are based on an old Dungeons & Dragons videogame called Baldur's Gate and its sequels. They aren't humanized, but they are still solid adventure-fantasy stories that re-imagine one of the most epic and influential roleplaying franchises that there's ever been.
Hope that helps!
this story rock all 3 ch are really good and I look forward to more ch so please update when you can and I look forward more and so thanks for the story
7136691 Nah, I've never played undertale.
One of the best series on the site. I certainly hope it's updated soon.
hello, I'm new here and i wanted to say that I really liked your story. I was wonder, since its been nearly three years since you last updated this story, do you plan on working more on it?
Hey I read this a year or so ago and remembered it was awesome and it ended on a cliffhanger
So was it a matter of interest or block?
If you ever feel like continuing this series, know that your readers will be very grateful.