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The Grimm Reaper


The Grimm Reaper is the writer of the 'Darkness Duology', 'Immortal', 'They Come at Night... Mostly!' and 'Only Bone Deep'. Among others.

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This story seems to be very exciting. I cant wait for the next chapter to see how our protagonist interacts with Twilight and the Mane 6.

This is so interesting, moar

Good so far. Hope another chapter comes out soon.

i bet the monsters are just gangbangers

make another chapter or i rape your family

This is getting interesting now that Twilight is working with Jaeger. Keep up the good work.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

You know, that description got my attention faster than any I've ever seen. :rainbowderp:

Is this story an accurate retelling of life in Glasgow?

4225622 Good to know. I'll have to try that with future stories.

This is one of the very few stories I wish to see go on for a long time, 'cause this is really good :pinkiehappy:

Continue this awesome story.

Wow man... this is just... wow!
A whole set of unique ideas, presented in a universe I like quite so much, added with an incredible aura of despair, brought together by unearthy creatures.... I am deeply impressed.
And the writing style, the descriptions, thw switches of POW, this is fantastic!
I certainly hope sou that you will continue writing this story as soon as possible, I MUST read more of this!

-Zeph

DAMN i dont kile this story......................................…....…....... I LOVE IT

That picture drew me in fast and i'm not disappointed, keep up the good work

Dark Ones aren't evil.

Oh that cliffhanger. It hangs so well.
*le sigh*

I'm more than interested about how this story continues.
I also wish that it was updated more often than once a week.

-Zeph

You darn writers and your cliffhangers! (angrily shakes fist)

The cliffhanger and the interaction between Twilight and Jaeger is very well written. I can't wait for the next chapter.

I'm glad I decided to read this as my first story in a while. Definitely got me back into the reading mood! :ajsmug:

It's great to see this story updated again.

Do pegasus zombies retain their magic and enough coordination to fly? Because one would assume that the Pegasi would have it all their own way in a zombie invasion.

Twinkies. Oh you clever monster :ajsmug:

Shit is 'bout to hit the fan

RD seems to have had it rough. Congratulations, the shipping war has started.

Okay, let's see.
We have two references to the great movie, called Zombieland, 1/3 of the mane 6, Trixie and some addition.
Rainbow is deliciously out of character (I highly approve it! :D ) and Twilight seems to be in a fight with her already, over Jaeger.
Oh boy, I have been waiting for something similar to happen (thinking about Dashie, I mean), I can't wait to see how it turns out!

Also, the closing scene of the chapter, with that (probably) Shade... hm. Makes me think. Jaeger knows the kind, however, Rainbow, who has been hiding from them, can't recognize the sound. Interesting.

Aaanyway, I'm on the side of our broken-minded Pegasus, in the means of 'dibs on Jaeger'! xD
But seriously. Make it happen.

-Zeph

4383597 glad you're enjoying it. Though I didn't know about the zombieland references. Actually, I still don't, it's been so long.:twilightblush:

Due to her OOC behavior, I'm going to assume that either Rainbow Dash saw a lot of her personal friends/family getting killed in Cloudsdale or she took a really bad blow to the head at one point and it's messing with her personality. I'm guessing that it's the former.

4387805 Picture, if you will; living in a ransacked establishment for two months straight. Every night, you're woken by strange sounds that are beyond the vocal range of anything living. Everything and everyone you knew is gone and the constant threat of death looms over you every waking and sleeping second.

Wouldn't you go a little crazy?
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Sweetie Belle ftw.

Given my sick enjoyment of Scootacide stories.. Man, you're making me choose between cheering for the rope or the zombies. Evil.

Nice Aliens reference there in the title, I always thought Newt was a cool character.

4444107 Yeah. I actually got the name from that song in the story bio. Took me a while to realise where it came from. It's a shame they killed Newt off the way they did.

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Yeah, one of the main reasons I didn't like the third one, but it was still better than Resurrection.

4444116 Yeah, despite it, I liked Alien 3 for this scene:

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And now, hopefully, anyone here who hasn't seen any of the alien movies (AvP doesn't count) will be intrigued enough to go watch them.

"Fuck, I hope they have Twinkies."

Is that a Zombieland reference?

No, bad pone! You don't feed a starved being a lot of food! The shock their system takes by being provided such rich food after such a long time can end up killing them! It's known as Refeeding syndrome...

What in the FUCK is their body type!? In the beginning you said that a guy had broken his FINGERS...but then you say that they're ponies with fur...THEN YOU SAY THEY WEAR CLOTHES...and then you say "They walked on two legs" like Twilight hadn't seen that kind of body before. WHAT ARE THEY!?!? I feel like you can't make up your mind between anthro and feral. It's confusing and painful to try and understand!

4444282 :facehoof:They're anthro, but instead of feet, they have hooves.

I gotta feeling that she'll live. As long as she didn't break her neck on the rope, proper CPR has the possibility of reviving someone after 5 minutes of oxygen loss at the very least.

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Your welcome, once in a blue moon my encyclopedic knowledge of useless shit comes in handy.
But could you imagine it, being aware of your surroundings, your vision slowly fading to black as your lungs burn and your brain slowly shuts down?
Horrible.

Hmmm, nice chapter. I expected more POV scenes from the others.
Nevertheless, it wasa good chapter and new things were hinted about the Shades too!
And this Scootaloo thingy... I think she could be reviewed, especially thanks to ze magic!

About which one is my favorite of the three? Sweetie Bot... Belle, of course!

-Zeph

Well... They better hope that the virus doesn't work like the virus in The Walking Dead. Basically, everyone is already infected and death/severe physical damage triggers it.

"defibrilator"

Pedant mode activated! A defibrillator is used to deal with arrhythmic heart beats and such. Restarting a heart calls for an injection atropine and adrenaline, followed by CPR. Then possibly the paddles to sort the heart beat out.

Hmmm, nice chapter, very nice!
And just as I predicted: Scoots was reviewed by magic!
But anyway. The others went to Manehattan. A large city. That means a LOT of Shades. They either died (at least some of them) or still on the way there. The gang should hurry.

Oh, and we should get some new additions to the small group too, namely, a male. At least one more male should be in...

-Zeph

I love the concept of this story, it's a great idea and applaud you for thinking of it author. But it feels to happy, no suspense or anything because I know for a fact that in the end everyone is gonna be ok. I don't know, maybe it's just me but I think some characters (either from your little group or some more we meet along the way (and not just ocs, cannon characters should so we get attached and want to see what happens)) need to die at some point

-------hope I helped nightwatcher

Glad to see this again. Also, RD is funny when she's horny for Jaeger.

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