I love the concept of this story, it's a great idea and applaud you for thinking of it author. But it feels to happy, no suspense or anything because I know for a fact that in the end everyone is gonna be ok. I don't know, maybe it's just me but I think some characters (either from your little group or some more we meet along the way (and not just ocs, cannon characters should so we get attached and want to see what happens)) need to die at some point
4957642 Yup. Those are the Homo novus, AKA Dark Ones, from the game. Rather creepy, almost alien, bird-like, psychic hominids. They can really screw with your mind.
Oh, a new chapter, fantastic! I missed this twisted and broken Rainbow with her new mindset to everything, especially to Jaeger. Though not much progression was made, it was a nice little chapter. There is something I want to point outhowever: the name of that town is spelled as 'Appleloosa'. No spaces in between. To see that I'm right: Here is the link for the actual wiki. Cheers!
Ocean water would not quench our thirst, but make us even thirstier.
Desalination, silly Trixie. You've got three unicorns and two pegasi. The ocean would be a very feasible escape route. Make your own cloud boat, keep the cloudwalking spells up and Bob's your uncle. Even free water in the Everfree could be used for such transportation.
I wonder if you can make cloud hydroponics.. *ponders* Or they could all retire to a tropical island and turn this into a harem comedy.
Was Spike's letter sending ability addressed anywhere? Because being able to IM the Princesses would probably be handy.
5603982 Yes, I just used the picture as the cover art. I've never actually played the Metro series before. Someone pointed out a while back that those were the dark ones.
If you've read the story, you'll know that Jaeger described the Shades as shadowy, wispy creatures. The dark ones are not that.
5604039 I'm not sure how that's pronounced, buy I planned it to be pronounced like "Yay-Grr". Think of how they pronounce Liger Zero Jager from 'Zoids: New Century Zero'
I love the concept of this story, it's a great idea and applaud you for thinking of it author. But it feels to happy, no suspense or anything because I know for a fact that in the end everyone is gonna be ok. I don't know, maybe it's just me but I think some characters (either from your little group or some more we meet along the way (and not just ocs, cannon characters should so we get attached and want to see what happens)) need to die at some point
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Glad to see this again. Also, RD is funny when she's horny for Jaeger.
I saw the Metro 2033 cover art and was hoping for a crossover. Now I am disappointed and sad.
4957609 wait, that pic's actually from something? well fuck-a-duck!
4957642 Yup. Those are the Homo novus, AKA Dark Ones, from the game. Rather creepy, almost alien, bird-like, psychic hominids. They can really screw with your mind.
Oh, a new chapter, fantastic!
I missed this twisted and broken Rainbow with her new mindset to everything, especially to Jaeger.
Though not much progression was made, it was a nice little chapter.
There is something I want to point outhowever: the name of that town is spelled as 'Appleloosa'. No spaces in between.
To see that I'm right: Here is the link for the actual wiki.
Cheers!
-Zeph
4959772 yes, but that's just a wiki. if you look at the official map of Equestria, you'll see that there's a space between them.
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Desalination, silly Trixie. You've got three unicorns and two pegasi. The ocean would be a very feasible escape route. Make your own cloud boat, keep the cloudwalking spells up and Bob's your uncle. Even free water in the Everfree could be used for such transportation.
I wonder if you can make cloud hydroponics.. *ponders* Or they could all retire to a tropical island and turn this into a harem comedy.
Was Spike's letter sending ability addressed anywhere? Because being able to IM the Princesses would probably be handy.
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Fine, you won this time, but only because I accept this map as canon as well.
Anyway. When will we get the next chapter?
4961686 tough to say. It's still lingering in my mind, so pretty soon.
But The Dark Ones were not hostile in the Metro series, just desperate for survival.
5603180 These aren't the Dark Ones from the Metro series.
5603975 i.imgur.com/XptN98i.png
You sure? :>
5603982 Yes, I just used the picture as the cover art. I've never actually played the Metro series before. Someone pointed out a while back that those were the dark ones.
If you've read the story, you'll know that Jaeger described the Shades as shadowy, wispy creatures. The dark ones are not that.
5604016 Only one and a half chapters in.
And is 'Jaeger' pronounced like Jäger?
5604039 I'm not sure how that's pronounced, buy I planned it to be pronounced like "Yay-Grr". Think of how they pronounce Liger Zero Jager from 'Zoids: New Century Zero'
5605515 Probably better off with a name like Jaegyrr then.
5605597 No, that makes it sound like 'Yay-Gear'.
5606281 But in German "Jae" is pronounced like "Jä" and Jäger = Hunter.
5606307 Well in this it's pronounced like 'Yey-ger'.
5609651 Huh.
5712235 no, this isn't a metro crossover. I never even knew these were dark ones until someone pointed it out to me.
I like this story. It's like a combination between I am Legend, Fall Out and Zombieland. Perfect.