Wow man... this is just... wow! A whole set of unique ideas, presented in a universe I like quite so much, added with an incredible aura of despair, brought together by unearthy creatures.... I am deeply impressed. And the writing style, the descriptions, thw switches of POW, this is fantastic! I certainly hope sou that you will continue writing this story as soon as possible, I MUST read more of this!
What in the FUCK is their body type!? In the beginning you said that a guy had broken his FINGERS...but then you say that they're ponies with fur...THEN YOU SAY THEY WEAR CLOTHES...and then you say "They walked on two legs" like Twilight hadn't seen that kind of body before. WHAT ARE THEY!?!? I feel like you can't make up your mind between anthro and feral. It's confusing and painful to try and understand!
This is getting interesting now that Twilight is working with Jaeger. Keep up the good work.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
You know, that description got my attention faster than any I've ever seen.
Is this story an accurate retelling of life in Glasgow?
4225622 Good to know. I'll have to try that with future stories.
This is one of the very few stories I wish to see go on for a long time, 'cause this is really good
Continue this awesome story.
Wow man... this is just... wow!
A whole set of unique ideas, presented in a universe I like quite so much, added with an incredible aura of despair, brought together by unearthy creatures.... I am deeply impressed.
And the writing style, the descriptions, thw switches of POW, this is fantastic!
I certainly hope sou that you will continue writing this story as soon as possible, I MUST read more of this!
-Zeph
DAMN i dont kile this story......................................…....…....... I LOVE IT
That picture drew me in fast and i'm not disappointed, keep up the good work
What in the FUCK is their body type!? In the beginning you said that a guy had broken his FINGERS...but then you say that they're ponies with fur...THEN YOU SAY THEY WEAR CLOTHES...and then you say "They walked on two legs" like Twilight hadn't seen that kind of body before. WHAT ARE THEY!?!? I feel like you can't make up your mind between anthro and feral. It's confusing and painful to try and understand!