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Blake Skies


The Brony Pilot

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Over a thousand years ago, a great Evil came to Equis. Only with the help of an off worlder was the evil repelled. He was called Razgriz and he was a Demon Lord, a creature half Archangel and half Legion Demon tasked with keeping the peace on planet earth. With his assistance of the Celestial sisters, he fought back the great evil. But it came at the cost of his life, or so the sisters thought.

Now the great evil has returned to Equestria. It threatens all the lands on the planet, and not even the Elements of Harmony can stop him. Seeing the plight of the Equestrians, the Demon Lord Council sends Razgriz back to Equestria to help fight the enemy and stop him once and for all.
But Razgriz's home coming will be anything but joyous. He will not only have to contend with the past events of his supposed death, but the heartbreak, terror, and secrecy that came after it. Live's will be tested, friendships and families brought to the brink of disaster. the future of two worlds is at Stake. And all important, lying underneath, is the return of a great evil.

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 43 )

Not entirely different from my idea "Humanity's Nightmare".

3279883 I see....:scootangel:
i hope to see that story on here so we can compare :)

3281883 Haven't made it yet, but when I do, it'll be Awesome!

3283757 i look forward to reading it, in the meantime enjoy this one

I hope he doesn't turn into a pony again.

Well, so much for that hope.
Well now I hope he doesn't have to use the disguise for long.

3631221 Its just a precautionary disguise for the investigation

Flash Sentry? The hell is he doing here?! :twilightangry2:

Kill him! :flutterrage:

Good thing I read the chapter through. I almost quit when I saw the sudden ponification. I don't dig that kind of stuff. :twilightsheepish:

Ehhh, the pony disguise somewhat turns me off the story...you have a badass demon lord why do you keep turning him into a boring pony.

Oh and that dude Flash Sentry.

Kill him before he lays eggs!

3664166 3631221 Does the topic: blend in to avoid mass panic and conduct a through investigation seem to be foreign to you all?

3667235
Yeah, but it still sucks. Especially when we started reading the story for a non pony character.

3736560

i was just thinking the same as 3736554, the problem is that "your" razgriz is so similar to "the real" razgriz to the point that i can't separate the parallels without losing sight of who razgriz actually is and who you are trying to make him out to be.

had to downvote, in the future try not to use a name that is so immensely associated with a particular character/story and then turn him/her into something he/she is not.

is like writing a DBZ crossover and calling the main saiyan character goku even though hes obviously not goku. at best its unintended confusion, at worst it's an annoying as shit way to get viewers by giving them a name they are familiar with.

3871587
I'm fairly sure he changed the picture, because I think he used to have a picture up that looked kinda like a male version of 5's Razgriz too.

3872011
heh... I totally derped there, didn't I? This is why I generally don't skim over such long comments when I'm hungry and about to go eat.

And now that I read it over, I'm confused. Who're we calling the real Razgriz again?

3871587 You make a valid point, i can't really argue. Truth be told i tried hard to make a see able difference between The Demon of the north sea and Lord Jamantie. Guess i didn't do it hard enough

-sees title-
no
frigging
way...
ragris from ace combat 5?!?! ZOMG!/)^3^(\

3927090 Razgriz* if your gonna fan out please spell it right.

Do I smell a harem on the horizon? I think I do

As always, excellent chapter good sir, happy to have you back. As far as your authors note goes, don't worry about it. This place is meant as a bastion of love and tolerance for all, and if anyone gives you problems i'll grab my shovel and smash in there f:scootangel:&:unsuresweetie:%:applecry:g face until their own mamma couldn't identify the body! Uh...:twilightsheepish:...any way, yeah. Glad your back, love the story keep it up.

~Dollars. :eeyup:

Don't care if this isn't about Ace Combat, I'm still bringing Ace Combat into this. Payback for toying with my heart! Then again, this song fits just about anything epic, so nothing to worry about if this story is epic, eh? :P

(BTW that story description does sound an awful lot similar to the other Razgriz' story. I take it history's witnessing a great change here as well? :derpytongue2:)

5623992 I do hope you at least enjoyed the story over the character name. But I will ask this, did you not see the tag which said (Not an Ace Combat Story)?

Also, not to be mean, but I have the Wikipedia article about Razgriz right here:
http://acecombat.wikia.com/wiki/Razgriz

While I won't deny the similarities, I do think there are a lot of fundamental and major differences with My Razgriz and the Demon of Strangereal's North Sea. To those of you who don't know the article, please read it over and further more I'll put it in the editors notes in the most recent chapter

5694603
I did see the tag; I was just messing with you while jonesing about Unsung War :derpytongue2:
Still a kick-ass song, by-the-by. Figured someone will be playing it when the final battle comes around. In the meantime, I'll just be over here making random quotes from the game. "We're gonna do this! Just believe in yourselves!" See, like that.

(Also, considering how there's only one Razgriz when you do a web search, it's easy how people could make the mistake:derpytongue2: x2)

5695988 well good sir if you do make quotes make em good for Chopper

It returns. Needs typos fixed, but other than that, glad a new chapter finally came out.

Rhahahahahaha...

Love the story very interesting.

*Cringes a bit* Christ another human turned pony type.. *Sighs* Well.. *Strokes his chin in thought* Meh I'll keep reading it, seems interesting so far and I can't ignore the interesting lore you've set up for the Council and what not. So I'll over look the human turned pony stuff.

6601472 just wait to you get to the fight sequences and the deeper lore of the demon lords

Well this is definitely a good story, only thing is the amount of flashbacks going on. They aren't a problem just interesting to see two or more it feels in each chapter, and each flash back is really long.

Well.. a fav from me. Good job so far with the story.

The Ghosts of Razgriz shall avenge Chopper! I still get chills thinking about that.

“Uh, yes mum. But mum what do we do if we run into him again or if one of those things come back?” Flash asked.

Uh mum?

7437023 it's something british officers do when addressing the queen

6601472 I know how ya feel there, hopefully it works out.

9359253
maybe soon, i'm working on other projects atm

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