Big Brother

by JT

School

Derpy shifted in her desk, before letting out a sigh of frustration. She tapped the beige wood of the desktop before leveling her eyes back at the chalkboard.
She listened as Miss.Grade A, a dark blue pony with yellow hair, and a cutie mark of an A plus on her flank. Explained multiplication to the class.
Derpy let out another sigh as she decided to take a nap.

"DERPY!"

Derpy screamed as she woke up, the harsh voice of her teacher making her worst fears come true. She felt a sting of pain as a ruler was smacked across the back of her skull, making her yelp in pain. She slowly opened her eyes to see Miss. A Plus's eyes burning with the fury of tartarus.

"Derpy, see me after school."

Derpy shrank back in her desk, tears welling up in her eyes. "B-B-But, I was going to see Tyrelius after school...."

Miss. A Plus stopped her short walk to her desk, and turned ever so slowly. Her face scrunched up in a scowl.

"Who? Are you lying to me?"

"No ma'am! Tyrelius takes care of me now."

"Well then, it seems I need to have a talk with this Tyrelius then."

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A plus stood trembling before the giant before her, his frame overshadowing hers by far. She looked up to the hood pulled up over his face.
She gulped as she saw only darkness. He motioned to me, where I was sitting on a crate, looking like I was about to cry.

"What seems to be the problem young one?"

I motioned to the teacher, her foreleg pointing in an accusing manner.

"She caught me sleeping in class, and hit me in the head with a ruler."

"I-I did not! This filly is lying! She threatened to kill me! S-So, I defended myself!"

Tyrelius facepalmed, the massive gauntleted hand colliding with his face in a loud smack. He sighed and brought his hand down to his chainsword, resting it on his hilt.

"Derpy, can you remember the lesson?"

"It was multiplication..."

"Alright, from now on, your being taught by me. Now for Miss. A plus here."

In a blur of movement, he brought out the weird sword and the weapon roared at Miss A Plus.

"GET OUT OF MY THUNDERHAWK!"

"Derpy

Comments

[InsaneBatPony]

Long waits for short chapters? Aw man, you're killing me.

[applefritter]

Come on bro. Really

[Arxsys]

Long wait for a short chapter that ends on a cut off sentence. What gives?

[JT]

4365989

Finals week. School, and family stuff. Im sorry man

[The A I]

Best way to deal with a angry teacher!
im loving this so far. Keep it up.
I dont mind the short chapters and long waits myself.

[dakingofmuffins]

more

[Cmmdfugal]

this is nice its not like other stories in which it has this overarching story and some big evil to defeat or goal to accomplish its just a space marine who wants peace raising derpy its simple and that makes it really good

[JT]

4381696
yeah....right. I know man

[Nein Iron]

Um... Excuse me sir, and I don't mean to be rude, but will this be updated any time in the near grimdark future?

[JT]

4433147

Maybe. Its finals week at my school and they're killing me. ...sorry bro

[Sword Smith]

cool story would want to see what will happen

[Hard Cider]

cute. i enjoy stories with overpowered foster parents that aren't native to Equestria.

[3volve]

lol worlds shortest chapter if i was a judge i would give a 10000000000000/10

[Gojira_Tanaka]

4366592
Yes... dealt using an angry space marine, not an Angry Marine, as that would be filled with more F-bombs