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JT


Aspiring Weapon designer, and has a soft spot for ponies.

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Luna has a son, a human son, before ascending to his own throne, he will bring peace to Equestria and end a terrible war. Yes, he will do great things, there is only one problem.
Celestia hates him. She see's him as a threat and a savage, so when she sends him to die in the frozen wastes, what will happen?

Also
He's Blind.


Art by Good0Bye

Chapters (22)
Comments ( 110 )

This looks promising story go on please.

Short chapters, but well done chapters, Keep it up I demand it!!!! (or bad things happen:pinkiecrazy:)

Luna has a son, a human son

Then put the human tag :ajbemused::facehoof:

This looks really interesting!

And so begins the tale of the death of celestia...:eeyup:

Death to the celestials!

"I'm back bitch."

perfect now let the blood flow like rivers:pinkiecrazy:

Oh toying wiht your prey nice one. I whonder what will happen next.

Theres some dark, fucked up part of me that loves see the good guys fall for their own evils, and I always love a good revenge story(who doesn't). I kinda like the short little cut up pieces of chapters, though I know when the stories finished, I'll have alot of questions unresolved. Either way a good bit of ultra violence is always fun, and I'm looking forward to more.

Yummy lots of blood,organs!!!!!!!!!

You're gonna somehow fit romance into this?! I am intrigued to see such a thing. Besides seeing how Celestia gets her just deserts, how and WHO for that matter will love this guy? :rainbowderp:

JT

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Who hates Celestia, just as much as Shadowkin?
Would like nothing more than to see her eviscerated?

Section 8? That or I'm just blind.

Well, this is going to be an interesting story. Let's watch!:raritystarry::moustache:

Goes on mission to kill Celestia- kills all the guards and does noting to her :facehoof: this sucks.

OH bo a master assasin wiht a army of shape sifters. This gona be good. But I still don't understand how will he defate the changelings and bring peace to the land if his most important plan is to make a coat out from Celesta hide? Maybe his meating wiht his mother Luna change something dastricly also how will his father respond to this so many qwestions so few answer. Can't waite for the next chapter.

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Maybe it was only to send a message? Get her out of the Castle and in to a more public place? Maybe he wants it to be seen by the populace, just so they know the price of crossing him?

Well thats going to hurt in the morning

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I don't think hurt is a strong enough word....how about....

"OH MY GOD! I'M ON FIRE!IT HURTS SO MUCH!
AAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11

3380678 well JT you read my mind

man fuck twilight and her holier than though friendship:flutterrage:

Damn that's going to hurt like a bitch when he wakes up

when is it going to be revealed that Celestia is a monster herself? Cause lets face it, I wana see Twilight disown her and where in the ever living hell has Luna been?

Is it bad that fics like this make me wana see the world burn? (The pony world of course) :pinkiecrazy:

Thought this was somewhat fitting.

And ofcourse Celestia forgot to mention for the main six thet this is all her fault. But then agan if my public image woudbe painetd as a loving charing diplomatic leader it woud hurt my credit if the people woud find out thet I decided to leave a infant to freaze to dead (freazing to dead is not a fast and painles way to die even if you are a infant) becouse I don't like his race. Even barbarians woud end a infant right there on the spot fast instead of torturing his/her slowly to dead if they whanted his/her dead.

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Oh, and because she did that, a raging, trained, deadly psychopath, who can hide just about anywhere and revels in blood and organs, is out to get them all.

Smooth move Celestia.

Whooo confrontation! OoOooO will Luna join the "dark side" to rid Equestria of its xenophobic leader!?:pinkiegasp:
Just a crazy thought.:pinkiecrazy:

I wonder how will the main six will react when they learn Celestia dirty litle secret.

AJ: Being a big sister and somewaht mother figure woud be problably pissed by the fact thet Celestia tryed to kill a infant slovely and didn't tell nobody about it.

Pinki Pie: She problably cut you for this Celestia :pinkiecrazy:

Fluttershy: Do I nead to serously explane this? :flutterrage:

Rarity: This. IS. THE. WORST. POSSIBLE. THING. EVER!!!!! :raritycry:

Rainbow Dash: Not cool man not cool

Twilight: Her complet word will be shattered in my opinion and woud be more then happy to flip Celestia the bird. :twilightangry2:

LOL so she saw what would happen if she tried to kill him as a kid thinking it was if he stays in equestria. So she brought this upon herself in that the vision was saying NOO dont try to kill him!:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::facehoof:

3405973 A typical self fulfilling prophecy.

And thats how equestria was made the end.:pinkiegasp:

For chapters so small, you update way to slow. :ajbemused:

Hmm interesting well I like him he's flipping amazing now not by murdering the royal guard but by how flipping ninja he is. :rainbowdetermined2:

3445148 who are you to complain you do not know how work he may have how much little free time he has to do what he likes to do and it is a good story so dude that is the writer of this story don't here people like this out you do what you love because you love doing it and good luck with the story

Where da f#$% is Luna I mean this isher kid and if she protects the night then she should be there protecting it.

Really short, but it's still better than nothing. Keep it up man! I'm getting anxious :9

This just seems so out of character for Celestia though. I mean, look at the shit Discord pulled. Even after all that, she still showed mercy to him in S3. Then look at Princess Luna. She threw a temper tantrum and tried to literally kill everybody by making eternal night, and Celestia just turned the other cheek, albeit after 1,000 years. Still, if it was someone as cruel as in this story, I doubt they would even allow Luna to continue living. Celestia never gets downright angry and irrational in the show. Look at when Twilight abused her magic with that smartypants doll. She caused so much trouble, and the princess was only disappointed, at most rationally angry about the situation.

Then in this story, she just tosses her own family out to die just because of appearance. It just doesn't line up... Either Celestia has some serious past issues with humans, or you've got yourself an OOC Princess. Either way, I await her to 'splain herself for this bullshit. :twilightangry2:

3453379 Fucking this!\/!

3453379 What if Celestia got a vision of what he would do in the future. And to stop this from happening she tried to eliminate the source while it was defenseless, thus the reason and motive for the birth/making of the ''monster'' was set in place and the vision became a self fulfilling prophesy.

3459275 we'll just have to wait and see I guess. Still, I don't think that's how Celestia would approach the situation, but that's just me.

3459291 Well, it was just a possibility after all.
If you look at the start of the 1st chapter, it seems like Luna and Celestia may have had future visions, but sides of the same coin. One being where he was showed love and the other where he was not. Look at how absolute their dialog is.
But all of this is just rambelings, and yes, Celestia would still be considered OOC.

"NO LUNA! THE CHILD IS A BEAST AND A MONSTROSITY! I WILL NOT ALLOW IT TO BRING HARM TO EQUESTRIA!"

Celestia roared over the guards who stood ready to defend her. A crying Luna opposite of her, her won guards poised to defend her from the others.

"PLEASE! HE IS MY SON! YOUR NEPHEW!I HAVE SEEN IT, CELESTIA! HE WILL BRING A BALANCE TO OUR LAND! HE WILL END THE CHANGELING THREAT!"

all of my yes goes to this awesome story

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That really means alot man....really does.

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