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After the battle that took place during Royal Canterlot Wedding, Princess Celestia is starting to feel the side effects of the fight, slowly making a horrifying transformation. About a year later when she confines herself to her quarters, Twilight must help Celestia overcome her new form and find a way to turn her back to normal, but is it too late?

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Please update this! I am dying to know how this turns out! DYING I SAY!!:raritycry:

Quite short, but still good.

Well this has "Bad Idea" in flashing Neon Lights written all over it. I'm just not sure who deserves the facehoof, though. :facehoof:

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Okay then. What are the areas of concern? Maybe I try to avoid future problems.

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That wasn't criticism on your part. It was aimed at the characters. It is clear that there is an "Idiot Ball" in play, and I'm trying to figure out which party is currently holding it.

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Ah. :derpytongue2: For a moment, I thought there was a problem with the story.

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i thought it was for flash sentry:applejackunsure:

ok hold on. last chapter happened at the end of the wedding, this one is clearly happening sometime after twilight becomes a princess. There has to be several months in between those 2 events and Celestia is A: able to hide the fact that she's now a changeling, and B: just now desperately trying to feed on other peoples love? What has she been feeding on this entire time?

finally someone who's not out to torture, tar ,kill, etc flash. I look forward to future chapters.

4311547 chapter one is a prologue.

an aquaintance of mine believes seasons 1-3 took place within a year because s4 begins with the summer sun celebration as did s1. so it might not be as long between the wedding and the coronation as we feel it is.

changelings can look like anypony. so wouldnt being in her old form be pretty easy.

at first it might be easy to combat her hunger for love. but as she becomes a changeling it gets harder.

as for flash... he just helps make twidash fic look more uncanon :rainbowwild:

4257806 I don't think anyone's holding it YET. Since Changelestia (my nickname for her) isn't at a point where ignorance of her problems would be downright foolish (which would be when she can no longer raise or lower the sun), that'd be the point where they'd be holding the Idiot Ball.

You could argue that the guards and Luna are holding it right now, but I think that Luna's at the point where she either can't do much else until more info comes up, or is simply in denial about Celestia's new vocation. And the latter isn't necessarily holding the Idiot Ball at this point. But the fact that they consider all this suspicious means they aren't. yet.

4317144 S4 opener was at the Summer Sun? Hmm..

However, that doesn't necessarily mean that S1-3 happened all in one year. Especially since, despite how awesome Dash's Rainboom was, I don't think she'd be able to get into the Academy THAT quickly. Not that I'd know, but still.

Wish this had a Flash Sentry tag so it wouldn't show up in my list. The story seemed pretty interesting but I can't stand Twi with Flash. Even if obviously it's not the main focus it's more than enough to keep me from continuing unfortunately.

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Just bear with us. Our focus is mainly on Celestia.

oh super exsited to see were this story gose XD so exsiteing so far can't waite to hear the rest. :twilightsmile:

You have trapped my interest like a carrot

Are there any plans to complete this story? I ask because I am going to favorite this because the plot behind it sounds interesting. HOWEVER, until it is completed, I am going to give it a thumbs down. Because while I may approve of the plot behind the story, I DO NOT approve of the fact that it has been 8 months, 3 weeks, and 1 day since the last update. I mean, I understand that greatness can't be rushed, but needing 274 days in order to update the next chapter means one of three things. A: You've given up on the book (this is the most likely scenario). B: You’re too busy to write any more (this is understandable). Or C: You're dead (this is a scenario with a 50% probability chance, seeing as how people die every day.) If option C makes you feel uncomfortable than that means two things. You are obviously not dead, and I am sorry for having that as one of the three possibilities. Also, don’t give up! Your fans deserve better! I, of course, meant that in the best and most encouraging possible way. (This comment has been copied and pasted for the sake of saving time, HOWEVER the plot behind your story does sound interesting, the only reason that I mentioned the fact that it has been copied and pasted for the sake of saving time is because it is usually used for stories that have been sitting for a much longer period of time, for example, stories that have been sitting for 2 years, 4 months, and 29 days [i only say this in case I sound unduly pushy]).

Comment posted by Gear_change deleted Jun 21st, 2021
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