The Poetic Frost makes mistakes so that you don't have to. "Dance, Sode no Shirayuki!"
Fluttershy's parents are the two most wonderful ponies in her life that she could ever ask for.
So she has to ask herself whenever possible:
"Why did I push her away like that? It should have been me!"
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A one-shot written in a one-evening sitting.
Rated Teen for some... heavier things.
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Wait - there's no explanation on what the parent creatures are - or why mama died...
*sob* *cry* *whimper*
Repeats cycle.
Well good story even if a little sad
this is so sad...
you are an awesome writer though, nice story so far!
can't wait to see more
4127338 the parent creatures are her parents
Idk why her mom died
4137865 OH YOU DON'T SAY
My point was that if they're referring to them as "parent creatures" and they live in a cave, they obviously aren't ponies.
4146422 I just answered the question you posed in your comment.
I see nothing wrong with that.
The cave is their house. They are, in fact, ponies.
4137865 , I approve this interpreted explanation of my one-shot.
4148658 Hooray!
4147977
I know that the cave is their home. My point was it is not of the norm to refer to one's parents as simply creatures, and to live in a cave, considering the ponies' civilized species. Why are you acting all high and mighty? Surely you can understand my confusion right?
4156123 , I suppose that's more my fault than anything else.
4156123 I'm not trying to come across as high and mighty, sorry
I thought you were confused to I tried to help you understand it
I was just trying to help you out because if I'm confused about something I appreciate it if someone helps me understand something
I really am sorry if I made you upset.
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4164526
Lol, and sorry as well. I got a bit fed up.
You came across as a troll, but you're not, and you sincerely apologise. God i love this fandom.
4172546 It's all about the Love and Tolerance