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the dobermans


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Shit that was dark as hell.... Keep it up :D

Ah yes my fellow weak humans that cant bite back we have teeth for a reason and we apex predators

I'm lost in the ending

10/10 would read again.

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To be fair, its some neckbeard. Humans can be strong, with actual skill, effort, and having their hands on a proper weapon.

It being a nightmare would not help, at all.

Why is she special? She has fangs and kicks flank with lightning. What are her powers? Pretty much anything she wants. What happens to her? Gets beat down by a lame-ass rainbow. As if. Why is she your favorite? Because she deserves to win.

Ron put the note down, and fell backwards out of his chair. Nightmare Moon was watching him from the window.

She was still there, staring at him with her insane green eyes. She grinned, displaying her fangs and jagged teeth, perfect white against the blackness of her throat.

Well holy crap. That sounds terrifying. Not having your favorite pony appear in real life, but Nightmare Moon's description here.

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Dude, what the fuck.

When I saw you had added my story "Luna's Soliloquy" to your favorites (thanks btw), I couldn't help but notice that I had seen your name before. Then I realized it was because of "Obsession", the reading of which I had seen on YouTube. I've seen, and read, quite a few stories about Nightmare Moon, but this is by far my favorite. Keep up the good work.👍

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Thank you so much!! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :twilightsmile:

As for Luna's Soliloquy, I really liked how you depicted her as still struggling. It feels like she never fully got closure in the show.

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