Bar Scene

This story is a sequel to Club Scene

Nothing is going right for our favorite farm pony Applejack. Twilight and Rainbow Dash are fighting, one of Fluttershy's pet's is sick, Rarity is stressed over her work and to top it all of she has her own problems. What's a mare to do with all this stress? Drink it off at her favorite local pub of course!

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Raidah

Raidah #1 · Feb 26th, 2014 · · · Bummed Out ·

Hmmm... So this is what you've been up to... Of course, there are those few errors, such as "AJ" not being both caps. But when all you have to write with is a phone, I can see why this happened. I have the same problem actually... Nevertheless, I'm intrigued by this, as I liked Club Scene so I think this will be good as well. Will keep an eye on this one.

-Devastation

Kodeake

Kodeake #2 · Feb 26th, 2014 · 1 · · Bummed Out ·

*Checks Club Scene*
Clever thing you did, linking those beginnings....

So this is where you've been! And why Essence hasn't been updated... I figured it was going to be something like this

Anyway, I want to be interested, I really do, but... story focused on AJ? Not my cup of tea.

Does look good though, unfortunately this is one I will not be sticking around for.

maxxxxxx

maxxxxxx #3 · Feb 26th, 2014 · · · Bummed Out ·

4007799 i just got my new computer, but as i have been out of practice i thought i would start something new to get back in the swing of things. Sunrise will update by tomorrow night

Raidah

Raidah #4 · Feb 27th, 2014 · · · Bummed Out ·

4007824

by tomorrow night

THANK YOU!!! I have been waiting for my heart to get ripped out by this (just assuming that this is Fluttershy's chapter)

maxxxxxx

maxxxxxx #5 · Feb 27th, 2014 · · · Bummed Out ·

4008456 not Flutter's chapter yet, been out of practice so i am doing an interlude chapter for Twilight and sunrise relationship building

keam

keam #6 · Feb 27th, 2014 · 1 · · Bummed Out ·

God damit, this is good! Funnie how much I enjoy fanfics were ponies drink alcohols, when I've promised to (and it isn't legally for me , anyway) not do so...