• Published 24th Mar 2012
  • 14,052 Views, 163 Comments

The Sparkle In My Eye - HIDEMYPAST



Twilight and Dash take a walk on Hearts And Hooves day, and play a game of 'Pairing'.

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Oh my god why was this story featured

Author here!

I thought the rule 'old stuff makes me want to shoot my younger self' only applied to art, but here I am!

This. story.

SUCKED.

Well, the formatting did. I'd go through it and fix it, but lack of motivation stops me.

Meh, oh well. I do have a new story though, so if you like evil Twilight, it's for you! :D

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/41494/Broken-Dawn

But yeah...I'm not going to take this story down, and truthfully, to me, the only reason this got featured was because TwiDash.

Yeah...Not good D:

Should I re-write this?
And no, there will be no sequels.

Ever.

Sunny, out~! x3

Comments ( 6 )

Don't take it down! There's no reason to! If you really think it's bad (which is bull if you ask me) then it can serve as a reminder of how far you've come. Obviously plenty of folks liked it though, so on behalf of those of us that did, please leave it up!

plz leave it up it is okey work and if you have the time rewrite it (if you have time and the inspiration for it :moustache:)

Awwwwww, I wanted the wedding... :pinkiesad2:

I. Read. The. Crap out of this story just to find out that you refuse to do a sequel to a good story? Shame... So much shame...:ajsleepy:

I DEMAND A SEQUEL. :pinkiecrazy:
And you will make it so.

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