• Member Since 12th Feb, 2012
  • offline last seen Jul 7th, 2015


I write ponies :D


Pinkie Pie.
One slip-up.
Eternal talking.
The risk of death.
Can the girls save Pinkie Pie from her continuous loop, or will they lose her...forever?

I've re uploaded this with revisions. Why?
My brother deleted it. Luckily, I had it on a back-up!
So if you feel like you've seen this before, chances are you have!

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Comments ( 12 )

Revisions? Time to read this a second time :twilightsmile:

Why would your brother delete this awesome story?

Does it need an explanation? Brothers like to spite each other ALOT.

578408 I wouldn't know because I have no brother. But yah, I might understand if this author's brother is a brony hater. Still, this story was really funny the first time I read it, I might even give it a read again. :D

I don't remember if I gave a comment on this story before, but I do remember reading it.

Anyway, it's a great premise. The execution is alright, but I feel like it could have done much better with a little more polish. The odd placement of line breaks had a tendency to draw me out of the story too.

You have my thumb.

578408 578413 I don't spite my older sister. i mess with her but I don't delete stories she has posted. EVEN if the are backed up. that's just being a jackass.

Awesome. That is all that needs to be said.
:pinkiesmile: Pinkie approves.

Keep multiple back-ups.

I give you a heart and a smiling Pinkie :heart: :pinkiesmile:

Also a thumbs up and a favourite.

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