Author here!
I thought the rule 'old stuff makes me want to shoot my younger self' only applied to art, but here I am!
This. story.
SUCKED.
Well, the formatting did. I'd go through it and fix it, but lack of motivation stops me.
Meh, oh well. I do have a new story though, so if you like evil Twilight, it's for you! :D
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/41494/Broken-Dawn
But yeah...I'm not going to take this story down, and truthfully, to me, the only reason this got featured was because TwiDash.
Yeah...Not good D:
Should I re-write this?
And no, there will be no sequels.
Ever.
Sunny, out~! x3