Everyone thinks they're the hero of their own story. Yet nobody wonders just what its like when you swear you're doing the right thing, that everything you're working for is because you have to do it, yet youre seen as the villain for doing so
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They're going back to Canterlot? Wha - BAD IDEA!
Uh ooh.
Back to Canterlot? Of all the stupid things to do. I would of accepted going to decrypt castle ruins or becoming a pirate, but back there? It just screems incarceration.
I don't believe he had met Chrysalis at this point.
Mmmmhhhh me like sunbutt needs to explain.
I think the NM must be there.
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Okay, wow that was stupid of me.
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Goddamnit! Uncertain stupidity!
"Cely you have some splainin' to do."
Keep it coming. Keep up the good work.
CHANGE PLACES!
I could complain about how impossible it would be to get inside the city when you're walking alongside two of the world's most wanted villainesses and everyone thinks you're dead. But I don't even care. Because after over 100,000 words and twenty four chapters, it's about time we FINALLY get some real answers to the questions the entire premise was founded upon:
Why was Jeremy thrown in jail? Why was he TORTURED? Why is Celestia supposedly afraid if him and pretending he's dead? Why is Night Mare Moon present when SHE should be dead? All of these have lingered on through the story and never been explained or even given real hints that could clue the audience into what the true reasons are. In fact, how he broke OUT of the prison was questionable. It doesn't make much sense his cell would be so close to theirs and they could so easily get to freedom, it was too contrived for them to escape without overcoming any real odds.
We deserve answers.
i dont understand what is going on!
5383007 5383131 Why, but of course they should go back to Canterlot! It's the perfect place for them to go. It's the last place Celestia and Luna will ever suspect them of being all the while they get to gather valuable information.
This is a brilliant plot, simple yet brilliant.
I must read MOOOOOOOORE!!!!!!!!!!!!
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hmm, Nightmare Moon? Maybe here she was born from Luna when the nightmare forces possesed her, and the EOH separated them and removed the desire to coupe or something?
I can see how this could possibly be a good thing . . . . . or the most stupid idea I've ever heard.
. . . Oh boy.
More please.
5385152 Or just,you know,Fixed her sanity.
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In the first chapters it clearly say that Discord help them run away from cell. Maybe he know that Jeremy is innocent and decide to do the right thing in his way.
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It happens some time and I truly don't care about grammatical part if story real good.
Shall I prepare the 'Why you suck' speech when they do meet?
Onward to castle de la sunbutt!
Alert , an epic chapter has been detected . Distance next chapter . Possible hostile medium , chance of princess freak out high , level of epicness ? It's over 9000!!!!!
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Er... Wow...
To be honest, i suppose its a bit of "twisting the perspective", if you will. In terms of pony sizes, im not always very consistent. I like to keep it that way.
Though, your info actually is fairly helpful. I can probably find some way to use it.
Oh, and thanks for taking interest in this.
5461647 My pleasure.
BTW. Don't know if you're aware of this, that if you're answering to the other post through main page of the story, instead of in the chapter that this post is in, FiMF doesn't send notification about it.
If I didn't remember that I asked question, I wouldn't now I got the answer till I reached chapter 23.
This is a crazy good idea! These three have been thrown under the bus for to long. And someone has a lot of questions to answer for!
I can see the four of them walking(Gilda flying) into the center of Canterlot and waiting or someone magic up a megaphone to call, Celestia out!
DO IT!
When can we expect the next chapter?
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Today :D
By the gods, he's a dad...
Found an error:
Wonderful story so far, although many changes in perspective took a while to get used to.
Yeah, why would they need to go to Canterlot? Aside from the fact that that's where the Princesses and any guards that would be actively looking for them are...if the plan is to simply get knowledge of their existence out, they should just go to Ponyville, or Manehatten or literally any other settlement BUT Canterlot.
You've got some 'splainin' to go, Sunbutt!
Coming to think of it... If the EoH removed NM from Luna, and NM was a part of her mind, doesn't it mean that the EoH lobotomised Luna?
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I always thought the NM mode act it became a clone of luna with own conscience. so she speaks and acts as if it were the luna, but from the separation of the two both started to build their own conscience after that.
thus breaking that question. if NM is NM. why she speaks as if celestia is his own sister and she quotes the night and the moon is it even all know that Luna regent of the moon and the night is currently in the castle.
I believe that's just 'cause they're like Twins sisters, together they become the evil mind who wanted eternal night, separate them become what they are currently
I could be wrong about everything I wrote up there
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From what has been shown so far this NM and Luna are the same person. It is not like together they were evil but that at the time it was NM in control of the body but they are one i dividual, like the voice in Celestia's mind a dew chapters ago.
That being said the separation don't make any less the same pony, just now there are two of them.
We are free and with are friend that has not only survived being tortured and starved but also developed a fear of all thing's light. So to stick it to are former captures we are going to risk it all by going back to the city of are imprisonment with said friend that is vary much likely to curl up in a ball at the meer sight of princess Celestia's sun printed flank!
...good lord villain's (former) tend to always do the dumbest thing's and I can't even falter the author because it's to bloody in character. I can only argue about Zecora but at the same time can't if this chick can make potions that allow you to see the past