Everyone thinks they're the hero of their own story. Yet nobody wonders just what its like when you swear you're doing the right thing, that everything you're working for is because you have to do it, yet youre seen as the villain for doing so
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Looking good.
I'd gladly make a cover image for you, if you'd allow me. While my skills aren't quite the best, I've done a couple things in the past.
Also, the story's doing great! I'm loving it!
(Edit: I've four different cover images made up, seeing as I have nothing better to do, so I have those ready for you if you're interested.)
I'll help you if you want. I'm bored as hell.
Good chappy.
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I'm looking over the submissions I've been given so far, but I probably won't be decided for a day or two. If anyone has a good cover image, just send me the link/image over PM. Thanks.
Great to see an update to this fic again.
Ok this story is actually pretty interesting. A note: chapter 7 is almost entirely in italics. Also, are we ever going to learn what the heck he was actually imprisoned for? I mean, he was put away with the biggest villains which implies some great crime or Celestia being speciesist.
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Alright. As for chapter 7, I'm guessing that you mean all the times I italicize words for emphasis. Yeah, it's a habit of mine, but I feel as though it accentuates a characters thought process to a better point, though that's just my opinion. Also, yes, we will learn of Jeremy's reason for improsonement as the story progresses. Since it is a major plot point though, it may take some more time and build up before I feel as though it should be announced, so I do ask that you, and my many readers, bear with me there.
If you have any more questions or suggestions, feel free to comment and I'll see what I can do to answer. :D
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No I mean that after a certain paragraph the entire thing is italics, as in it lacks the normal differentiation between what is in italics and what isn't. My guess was that something didn't get bounded right by the tags. I guess technically it's chapter 6 rather than 7 but I was just doing a quick check at the bottom of what number along the line I was. I forgot about the prologue but almost the entire thing is italics, not just emphasis.
Edit for clarification: Chapter title is Life Before Prison
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Ah, ok, that makes more sense. I'll fix it in no time.
Nice story.
I am loving this story. It is such an interesting concept. I really hope you keep putting out chapters! I enjoy how chrysalis isn't instantly infatuated with him yet. Anyway, keep up the great work! I really dig it!
Always watching...
"My desire to see my friend was great, yet at the same time, I felt it not to be correct."
It would seem you forgot to switch out of Zecora mode for a moment there
Author's Note:
Welp, I'm late... As hell.
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Sounds like a pregnancy innuendo.
This fic is just great...(sarcasm not intended)
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First I see this:
...lemme put emphasis on the plural there...
...and then I see this:
...from Nightmare Moon. My question is thus; are Nightmare Moon and Luna separate entities in this or are they one and the same? Because these conflicting statements make it hard on my poor head to decipher.
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I imagine in this fic's continuity, Nightmare Moon and Luna were the same entity until the mane six used the Elements of Harmony on her. Since they were the same entity, they would share the same memories and experiences up to that point, at which they separated into two different entities with separate new memories and experiences.
when Jeremy knocked on the door and Zecora opened the door I thought he would say, who was the idiot who put that thing on her neck poor zebra?
I see he was off to a great start in Equestria.