Everyone thinks they're the hero of their own story. Yet nobody wonders just what its like when you swear you're doing the right thing, that everything you're working for is because you have to do it, yet youre seen as the villain for doing so
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Soon we will come to the epic scene between our band of oddness, and the royal fat ends duo.
Good chapter. The plot is thickening.
I'm just waiting for the explanation of why Jeremy was even thrown into the dungeon after his death was faked by Celestia
Oh man, chapter update to one of my more favored stories on fimfiction, tis a good morning! Love your story so far.
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yeah the author has done a really good job keeping any and all clues to an absolute minimum.
I wonder if Celestia tried to sic the Elements or Rainbow Power (or whatever) on our merry band of misfits if they would have any effect.
They already know the power of friendship. (Yes, even Chrysalis. She won't ever admit it though)
Gees that nightmare moon dialoge must have been a bit of a pain to write
And now we play the waiting game...
Beat them princesses flanks!
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Believe me, you get used to it... Sorta... Kinda... Not really, no.
This fic seems to be back into swing of late. Good to see.
Think you meant solitude there.
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well congrats on my favorite type of talk.
So Luna can feel them comming closer because Jeremy is asleep and can feel his Dreams? Huh, a rather big blunder on Nightmare moons side, she if anyone should be aware of what Luna is capable of.
5697272 Would be particularly awkward if the rainbow power just turned around, spread out and blasted the sadistic guards and whoever set up the fire around Jeremy instead.
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That is a good point. How come Nightmare Moon isn't showing up to act as his dream guard/warrior princess and kick Luna's ass?
make her see his fear, please. Do justice where justice is due.
Why do I get the feeling that the information they "obtain" from him wont be useful to our little group?
5696780 Annnnd now my laptop is covered in milk and needs a repair.
5720671 Don't blame me, blame yourself for allowing milk to be on your laptop.
Oh crap, looks like Jeremy's and NM's "sleep-walking" is starting to bite them in the ass.
Great job on this chapter, it's nice to see Halfy beginning to open up more.
Wonder whats wrong with her eye, at firsts I thought it was just missing, but it seems more than that.
I also can't wait to find out why Celestia wants to keep Jeremy's life as low-key as possible, she probably orchestrated his death just to have the opportunity, come to think of it.
It can't be a simple thing either; you don't just make someone appear dead, throw them in prison for no reason, and beat the shit out of them while they're there, for no reason.
I hope Jeremy gets acquitted, the right pony is thrown in jail; Princes Celestia is sued for unlawful imprisonment, tortue, property damage and has to pay Jeremy back in wages and property lost during the imprisonment. (Currently on chp 21)
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Except that it doesn't look like Celestia knows Jeremy was beaten. IIRC, it's said that Celestia's interrogation method was having him asked questions, then given less food if he refused to answer.
There's a hell of a lot going on behind the scenes here, and I'm not about to try guessing what it is.
...of course, one thing I would like to know is if Celestia had any contact with him while he was in the dungeon. It doesn't sound like it.
So...are they gonna stand in the middle of Canterlot and reveal themselves with a big "Guess who's back!" neon sign behind them? Cause that'd be really funny.
Oh shit what's gonna happen next
I'm just imagining the group of them waltzing into canterlot and chrysalis just dropping the disguises just "hey, were here, and we haven't broken the law yet... Kinda... Again-ish"
Are you ever going to reveal why Jeremy was placed into prison? I can't help but feel like he's the protagonist for an Elder Scrolls game, ya'know, with the whole 'your in prison now for reasons. Here's the escape route.' Only difference is the Empire said criminal escaped from seems to actually give have a damn.
Eff you, Sunbutt, I'll laugh seeing you fall.
So not only torture and inhuman imprisionement conditions but also invading another mind to force take information...
More and more the princess are making themself the vilains here.
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I have been re-reading the story and I think there are 2 reasons for J's imprisionment.
1- He was upstaging ponies in their special talent, which would give reason for jealousy and framing J's to get rid of him.
2- For causing the fire to harm ponies, likely also with the idea that he wanted to eat them.
The real culprit is... I forgot his name but the guy that Hardhat hates to ask blueprints from.
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Follow scene is the pony's name and I like the prediction. It also doesn't help the Celestia is biased towards human's for reason's yet unknown. Added in the fact that she has a separate set of thoughts highlighted by the author implies that she may have more going on in her head. Be it her own version of nightmare moon or having multiple personalities. Jeremy's imprisonment is also highly suspicious with it being covered up and the fact Jeremy has no memory of the event. This may vary well have been a murder attempt for all we know by having Jeremy unconscious during the fire. Celestia would suspect foul play from per precious pony's when she doesn't even know her guards where beating up the human in her basement
It's almost like the roles are reversed, with the "good" ponies being evil, and the "evil" ponies being good...... and this voice, methinks daybreaker (or whatever your name for it is) is tired of the bullshit.