Everyone thinks they're the hero of their own story. Yet nobody wonders just what its like when you swear you're doing the right thing, that everything you're working for is because you have to do it, yet youre seen as the villain for doing so
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Probably just looked for what she wanted and that's it.
Thanks for the update and amazing work as always!
amazing
FINALLY
IT IS SAID
I HAVE NO NEED OF ANY KIND TO SAY ANYTHING ANYMORE
GLORIOUS DAY
Holy fuck
Glad to see this story is still going, unlike most heavily interesting story’s that stop abruptly in the year 2014 and never appear again.
You know how sometimes a person cant fathom what he/she is seeing/experiencing that when the time of shock passes they cant remember what happened only to be stored in their mind so deep as to keep his/her mind from breaking, sort of self preservation memory submission, just locked away. Me thinks this human suffered an accident so horrid that by the time he was put in jail he cant remember what it was much less how it happened. And I think the ones at fault are the construction brothers, and that Celestia suspects but preffers to belive it wasnt her "little ponies" that caused death on the sugested construction accident, way easier and less scandalous by throwing the "monkey" under the buss. And now its backfiring so much now that Luna knows of our human's terrors and phobia and now has clues as to how those came to be.
God damn cliffhanger, I need to know what happens next!
I know that sooner or later the moment will come when Luna finds out the truth about what happened in prison. I just hope it's not behind the scenes because I want to see her reaction.
that was cool, but i was 100% thinking this was going to be a nightmare on why Jeremy was in prison, or at least why he thinks he was
Boy howdy, I do wonder just what Luna's reaction will be when she finally realizes that A) the Nightmare isn't quite what she thinks anymore and B) her sister did a terrible, terrible thing.
Epic. I'm hoping to see Luna's reaction when she finally realizes how much of a hateful and malice-filled person she's being.
That was awesome!
Time to give Lulu the lecture of a millennia, and make a bloodmoon from the absolute spanking she's gonna receive.
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I always get sad when I see stories that once updated frequently when I first came to this site… but now haven’t been updated in years.
awww but i am really hoping The Prison shows up and they see what happened :/
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I'm still confused as to what Celestia did.
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It hasn't been fully revealed yet.
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I can hear this image
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Pretty sure Luna's going to get a metaphorical slap in the face with Facts that have been percolating for the last few chapters. Whether she chooses to believe NMM loves(? or just really cares for him as a kindred spirit) Jeremy or NMM is not out to cause nightmares again is up to her though. The takeaway is also Jeremy is absolutely terrified of Celestia on a subconscious level.
that, was, awesome.
another well-done chapter there bright, I am excited to see what comes next!
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Who said the human is the most powerful race?
Also it is clear that this is not the first human Celestia has met and the previous one(s) have given her some reason to believe humans are dangerous enough to warrant such actions.
Also... you are kinda downplaying humans there, though pack tactics is OP that is not the only OP BS in a human arsenal.
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Wait... wasn't that just so obvious no one saw the need to comment before?
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I wish I knew…
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Well just know that in any case you are the best!
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I noticed! It got a chuckle out of me. I think. Was a while back when I last read it.
Anyway, great new(ish) chapter! Can't help but wonder what Moony is going to do next... likely something to blow Luna's mind and turn her world view sideways.
Also, thinking about how paranoid they have Celestia, our group could likely have a lot of fun just quietly traveling from town to town doing random things just to troll her.
"What?! Why did they leave a cart of Salmon in Downtown Manehatten? What could this possible have to do with dying the hair of every stallion in Trotsvil pink?! Why did they host a swing club part in Rainbow Falls? What is their evil plan?!!"
Just stumbled across this a few days ago, and now...
*A new follower has appeared*
I don’t want to be rude, but can I get a status update on this story?
Holy crap! I am glad I didn't drop this fic. Jeremy early on came off as a little immature, and I often found the prose to be overbearing, almost meandering, and tedious. It felt like it tried to add more substance than necessary. This led to me having contempt when reading. The latest handful of chapters really turned it around for me. I got the impression the author has improved in writing. The prose feels focused.
Jeremy was coddled much in the beginning and this demeaned him in my view, but he became more bold later, which makes him more respectable. I have laughed at Jeremy's banter with Chrysalis and Nightmare Moon, and Halfy is a top cute pony.
Regarding Halfy and her special ability I was elated to learn it didn't turn out to be so black and white, with her questioning the meaning of it. If she were a character in a different story, I think the author wouldn't have considered delving any deeper than presenting it as to be taken at face value.
For this most recent chapter, I have to say I love the dream world. The details, the world building like Nightmare Moon teaching Jeremy about the eight primary emotions, and the fight between Nightmare Moon and her twin.
Lastly I'm glad the author didn't give up on this fic either.
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Still alive! Very busy lately. Hopefully have the next chapter coming out within the week!
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Don’t get too stressed out about it! Also, hope you’re having a good day:D and thank you for responding
I think this version of Luna has to best friends, their names are "It's not my fault" and "Someone else is to blame". She can't seem to accept that any of the past was her fault at all, blaming it wholly on Nightmare Moon. This attitude makes her more childish than the very pony she blames for everything that goes giggly for cheesy fries. Not that I can really blame her on that one, mmm...
Luna's attitude is really starting to get a bit grating at this point. That being said, this chapter did show there is some hope for her. She rushed towards Jeremy to help him with his nightmare, even when her own magic wasn't working as it should. And she's seen the sheer depths of his fear and some of his memories. I REALLY hope she investigates this further of her own initiative, to see just how far Celestia has fallen. Celestia won't even tell Luna why "oh he's going to bring disaster to Equestria" "Just take my word for it, trust me" All of this screams "something is wrong here" to me, and the fact that no-one, not even Luna says anything about it, is one of my biggest gripes. "Just follow my orders, my little puppets" Someone should be asking "WHY?"
Speaking of Celestia I'm beginning to get a picture. She hates change. She wants things to remain as they are. Jeremy brings new ideas that will disrupt her perfect controlled little world. As she see things in Equestria, they are perfect, orderly, stagnant... In other words, not harmonious.
The way I see it is like this: Order is unchanging, stagnant, death. Chaos is change, destruction, adaptation... entropy. Life cannot thrive if it cannot change, evolve to meet new situations. Harmony is the balance between Order and Chaos, where things can adapt, change, grow, without excessive destruction.
Celestia has probably unwittingly become an avatar of Order and cannot see the flaws within herself or her view.
Anyhow, those are my ramblings.