Everyone thinks they're the hero of their own story. Yet nobody wonders just what its like when you swear you're doing the right thing, that everything you're working for is because you have to do it, yet youre seen as the villain for doing so
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Soooooow Cute!
And give Moony some love to.
It's good to see that there are no hard feelings. Please keep on going.
I don't see why sir Jeremy needed to apologise, to be honest. He saved her life, and only made some complaint while doing so, yet he still showed great worry for chrysalisis' well-being all the same. I know she's supposed to be distant and cold, and that the only thing keeping the trio a trio and not a duo is because they spent time together in a cell, but c'mon! Ungrateful bitch.
ewww feelings..
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just kidding anyways please continue
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Look at it from her perspective. She's spent all her life learning to act that way and learning that "dropping your mask" is like baring your neck to a beast you've never seen before.
It's the same as if you were dropped on a nude beach and expected to blend in. The brain is a habit/pattern engine and a lifetime of nudity taboos means you can't just flip a mental switch.
Wow, at first I thought Jeremy will end up with Nightmare Moon, and I still think that. Although it seems there's a sort of a relationship going between Jeremy and Chrysalis. Good job mate, can't wait to see what you got in store for us
Good stuff.
And after a chapter like this for, Nightmare Moon. I'll be waiting for the 'drama bomb' to drop.
The next update should be quick. Later!
girls need to realize that us men are stupid when it comes to emotions, TELL US WHAT YOU WANT PLEASE!
Never Before have the phrase "gimme some love" been used in such a way as now.
This is the first story I gave a thumbs up before it was completed for a very long time.
Gonna be interesting to see how those group dynamics further play out ;)
Hug it out. That's all I kept thinking during this chapter.
I hope if they get in a real relationship that it isn't so draining on him. I've always liked the changling stories where love directed at their natural form is just like so pure and unexpected. Nightmare probably doesn't even know herself what she is fealing. She probably just thinking she is angry or annoyed at them for no particular reason.
Nightmare is jelly.
I'm just waiting for Nightmare to blurt out "I want a kiss too!"
4716190 yeah, and then she sneaks up on him in the day time and kisses his entire body while he sleeps or cuddles with him
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Speak for yourself.
You specifically are stupid, and/or you've been chasing some obtuse chicks.
Bro, I'm sorry, but you need an editor. This story needs SO much sentence tightening to delete superfluous words.
You mean "his caution"?
You can just say "A shade of red firmly on my face," we know why it's there!
Also, why do you keep saying "myself" where it's not necessary? "I stand myself back up" can just as easily be "I stand back up."
Wait wouldn´t that mean he wants to do it and does it?
That should be "his". Also you put a blank too much behind "payback".
4703624 Good explanation, right along my own thoughts. She's spent her entire life behind a mask, an even thicker one since she had to be the infallible, always site leader of a hive of empaths. She's going to take her sweet time breaking out of that shell.
Plus, before being caught she saw and felt her entire hive starve to death one by one. And if this setting she gave birth to all her subjects... She's basically had to see and feel her children waste away in unbelievable agony. I can't begin to think what kind of mark it has left on her psyche.
And this chapter was just d'awwww.
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This. Love the concept, enjoy the slow relationship progression, but a lot of this is very awkwardly written, and it tends distract from the story.
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Biologically men brains are wired to reconize patterns not emotions. One can learn to reconize emotions but for some reason men are desincentivized to do so in our society, as if it should be something natural to them.
Women on the other hand are inatinctually good at it and project on men that hability the same way men project his inate qualities on to women.
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It's been four years. They blew in a while ago. I wonder what they think now that some time has passed?
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It's not about someone think, it is about biology and sociology.
Biology has not changed at all and, if anything, society pressure on men has just got worse.
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Nha, he just be more pragmatic than most and maybe even dated a toxic woman, been there: tipical "do you think I think I want what I think I want? If you dont read my mind I will be upset at you" kinda Woman, its not all of them, but sertainly not short of a big number of them.