Everyone thinks they're the hero of their own story. Yet nobody wonders just what its like when you swear you're doing the right thing, that everything you're working for is because you have to do it, yet youre seen as the villain for doing so
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No yeet
Do not the yeet
Illegal maneuver, penalty kick to left orange
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Dang. Should have yote’d instead
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True accurate facts, 100% political military support, 3k social credit
Surprised he didn't bring up the torture sessions that much.
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That and the whole "Why was I put in jail?" thing.
I was practically screaming for him to ask about those in my head during the entire encounter... Damnit.
Aww, I was really looking forward to knowing what the hell J did to get himself thrown into the supermax. Guess that'll happen another chapter.
Whether we wanted it or not, we've stepped into a war with the Cabal on Mars. So let's get to taking out their command, one by one. Valus Ta'aurc. From what I can gather he commands the Siege Dancers from an Imperial Land Tank outside of Rubicon. He's well protected, but with the right team, we can punch through those defenses, take this beast out, and break their grip on Freehold.
That... Went better than expected.
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I hate you.
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Indeed
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I'd say prices may vary near you. Also just noticed you're profile picture and I find it adorable
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Cuteness is priceless. On that we can agree.
Nice chapter. Can't wait to read the next one 3 years from now.
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She thinks Celestia knows and it doesn't make sense to mention it, because what would change that?
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Pointing out her hypocrisy when it come to a "harmonious" diarchy. Why should one trust a hypocrite?
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He could have done, but he probably thought more of getting out of the situation and "Negotiating" than insulting the sunbutt. You know, he has a little lower priority. As for trusting ... No one would ever think to trust her after what she did.
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He called her stupid and threw out some other expletives along the way, I don't think insulting her is above him, even in negotiations.
Well...that went a little better than expected.
Ngl I think Gilda deserves a little more credit than Chrysalis gave her. KO-ing and capturing two members of the Royal Guard is pretty impressive.
Ceslestia was there to negotiate and they flipped out on the first proposition instead of giving a counter offer and taking the chabce to talk some sense on Celestia...
As far as we know NM has not hurt anyone other than Celly and 3 guards that attacked her first, now that she is separate from Luna there us no reason to belive she wants to cause problems since the reason she did at first was for Luna's sake. NM could go free with no problems and be a new princess to help protect the land.
Crysalis I am not sure, she could be integrated in the land somehow, her motivation was the starving hive that goesn't exist anymore so she has no reason to be a problem. Though that would depend on how she feeds on love, if it is harmful that could be a problem, and on the Queen herself since ahe may not want it.
Jeremy there is no way to know since we don't know why he was imprisioned but I don't see a reason for him to be a problem with how he has behaved so far.
I really think Celestia is losing out on an amazing oportunity here, the 3 could be of great value to Equestria.
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Didn't PC replied that it was reasons of the crown and that she couldn't reveal it?
Then dabbed on them that when questioned about it because she don't have to answer to anyone.
Celestia's proposal is so unprofitable and absurd that I have no idea what she was thinking when she brought it up in the negotiations.
Thanks for the update!
🎊 LET'S GOOOOOOOOO! 🎊
now that's a good update, well done bright!
Damn, nr regicide yet.
And the plot thickens. Shockingly, not Sunbutt's. Well, not more than usual anyway.
Halfy: "Are you sure they are fine alone in there work her?" Gilda: "I'm sure they're just fine." Guard1: "OH GOD, THAT ISN'T SUPPOSED TO BEND THAT WAY!" Guard2: "Uncle! UNCLE!" Guard1: "HELP, SHE'S KILLING US!" Chrysalis: *evil laughter* Gilda: "Just fine."
'She rolls a hoof' - rolled
'jumped me two one one' - two on one
Just found this a couple of days ago! I wish in some ways I found it sooner, but now that I’m at the last chapter I’m wanting more. This is one of the best humans in Equestria I’ve stumbled upon.
I really love this fic. It’s been a wonderful read so far and I really want to see what happens next. I’ve loved the character development and the dungeon scenes. Your NMM and Chrysalis personalities are a delight! You did Zecora really well and Halfy and I am extremely curious about her bandage and what’s under it. Thank you for the great entertainment.
So I'm confused. Like why was his home still empty months after he 'died'. Also what's the point of having gaurds tail them? Celestia should already know where they live so I guess she wants to prevent them from pulling a runner. How the fuck did the gaurds make it through the everfree and find a hidden behind shrubbary small ass building. I guess they've gone magic bloodhounds or something? If that's the case why'd it take do long to follow them? Why did they come to Cantorlot without any sort of plan other then one person will gather Intel.
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Good questions, 1st up, his house. i'm missing a bit of info as well, but i figure the house defaulted to the crown due to his 'death' and him not having a will for anyone to claim his stuff, which, likely was put on the backburner and forgotten for the sake of selling it in a few years. though even if Celestia knew where they were living, she's not just gonna up and attack because it would draw attention to a matter she's wanting to keep in the dark. and yes, also to prevent them from pulling a runner.
2nd up, the magic bloodhounds. Luna's been fishing in his subconscious dreams for answers as to where they reside, had resided, and who's all helping them. ect. that's how they discovered it and how they knew about the lunar flower patch. so, luna is said bloodhound.
3rd up, they did have a plan, he didn't like it but he was overruled by the rest of the group as a whole. as for how that plan goes, it goes something like this. "hide in the one place the princesses can't overtly hunt us, lay low, profit."
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I forgot about Luna dream walking or maybe a Nightmare Moon sense. That reasoning makes sense if Celestia is really that desperate to keep it under wraps. It's still confusing why she's making such a fuss about the human being seen when he's been in Ponyville then Canterlot for at least a few months. I think if it was just Chysalis and Nightmare Moon she would've just detained them. I suppose that is the crux of this story and the author will reveal that in due time.
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yeah, that is kinda the crux of the whole story, he's gonna find out what he did to deserve jail time eventually, but for the time being it's a bit of a tease with him not knowing.
and double yeah, luna's been dream walking into the humans dreams at the behest of her sister. thing that i am wondering is when luna will discover how he and the others were being treated in the dungeon, cause after all, fears tend to be left in the subconscious and that is exactly what she is fishing through- this is all conjecture after this point -and with his fear of the light being so strong, he's also bound to have a nightmare of exactly that. which, luna being luna, she's gonna wanna know more about his fear so she can either sooth said nightmare, or capitalize on it to get her sister to stop freaking out so much. (cause yeah, celestia's been running screaming_inside.exe since they escaped.)
Very nice chapter.
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Dude was tortured in prison there. I would be screaming at her.
"I was beaten bloody, starved half to death, kept in a completely dark cell so that I went half insane. And you tell me you can't even tell me the original fucking reason I was there?"
I find that I have to comment the fact that THIS chapter start to halfway down and the end of the last was probably my favorite part of the entire story, not to belittle the whole story because quite frankly its the perfect buildup, This goes to the author: I have ready allot of literature from allot of parts, I believe I'm a bit finicky to how writer's write the story rather than what they write, The story can be cliche and sappy and corny as hell but if written just right it suddenly becomes a great enjoyable read. I found that from the moment Celestia entered the diner my heart started to beat faster and my mind got caught with a turmoil of feelings all from indignation to despair to anger, basically what the main character of the story would have been feeling and I FELT IT... All because you handled the pace, events and description of your story just right. I haven't felt this bouts of heart racing at the edge of my seat for a while now, I thank you for that. I don't give a damn about typos as long as I can understand the idea behind it which you would be surprised as to how many stories are just a projection of temper tantrums some people have written that I cant relate to even if I tried and some are so "intellectually abstract" or "moral compass spinning" like Cultural Artifacts and Diaries of a Mad Man respectively that at one point I cant follow even though I wish I could wrap my mind around those stories because quite frankly I think they are both awesome in their own level. I haven't finished reading yours but hell I am hooked on it just like my first time reading Article II. Again, cheers and thank you for this awesome "horse words" ;p
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Okay, what the fuck? Celestia is here, under a privacy bubble of some sort, talking to Nightmare Moon and Jeremy, and won't even tell them why he was imprisoned? When it's just the three of them? What? WHY? That's really kinda stupid. Maybe if she gave a reason Jeremy could at least understand why his life had to be destroyed from Celestia's perspective. He wouldn't agree, but it gives some idea into the mindset at least.
Saying nothing comes across the same as "because I felt like it", and that's only going to make him more of an enemy than he already is. He could become actively antagonistic. Were I in Jeremy's shoes I certainly would.
Also I am convinced Halfy is a pony-changling hybrid.
And on Halfy's front. Her talent is to see the true nature of ponies. Is Celestia actually a good pony? I rather doubt it.