Everyone thinks they're the hero of their own story. Yet nobody wonders just what its like when you swear you're doing the right thing, that everything you're working for is because you have to do it, yet youre seen as the villain for doing so
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I assume the text after "That cursed zebra did this! She probably knew about how dangerous this path was, and sent us here to perish!" wasn't supposed to be entirely in italics.
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Just fixed it. Thanks for pointing it out though.
hm interesting wonder who this mysterious mare is?
I'm loving this story, so keep up the good work. This needs to get more attention to be honest.
Ah, another great chapter. The 'chase scene' (Easiest thing to say without spoiling the chapter) was quite unexpected, but turned out well, as I would hope from Brightlight. Never disappointed, Monsieur Bright.
On another note; I thank thee beyond words for choosing one of the cover images I made, as I was quite surprised.
Don't let any of those people who tell you that you aren't good enough to write or that you won't 'Get Fans' get to you, because from the looks of it, everyone loves the story so far.
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4385629 Totally gonna be a new love interest for NMM to compete against
I think the mark of a good ship fic is whether or not the story could still work if there was no ship in it at all, and this fic does just that. I really like Jeremy as a character despite not knowing if his crime was justifiably evil enough to warrant him being locked up with Chrysalis and Nightmare Moon.
Probably causes of Incarceration.
- Hunting and eating meat.... 40%
-Pissing off a noble in Canterlot....30%
-Tax Evasion....20%
-Arson....7%
-Sex Offender....2.5%
-Planned take over of Equestria.....0.5%
Well, at least you picked a pony who might reasonably end up in that situation, if unintentionally.
Man I love this story! More!
I know its for sure....
this pony!
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Well... Its a good guess... Pfffffft, HAHAHAHAHA!
Awww maaaan! It would have been great if this fic were an actual cartoon! Like a side story to the original MLP storyline.
I think it is pretty cool how Nightmare Moon's mane has a mind of it's own. Anyway, great chapter and I can not wait for the next one.
Dam love it all keep it coming PLEAS
4390214 I'm going to call it. It's Hardhat isn't it?
I think you meant: "I said, are there any other old friends of yours that we should know about?"
I'm calling dragon, cause that'd be really cool!
5773014 Im calling griffin
5809304 I second that call.
Aww, I hope Chryssie gets some grub soon.