Everyone thinks they're the hero of their own story. Yet nobody wonders just what its like when you swear you're doing the right thing, that everything you're working for is because you have to do it, yet youre seen as the villain for doing so
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Hmm.
From the previous chapters, there kept being this indication that maybe, just maybe, the previous events from the other seasons had not happened. But no, that doesn't seem to be the case, Chrysalis is, in fact, still a selfish evil queen who was in it for herself and her people, trying to lead an invasion, she's not some misunderstood monarch unfairly vilified. So there's no good reason to give her the benefit of the doubt. Which STILL leaves the question of why Jeremy was in there with her and Nightmare Moon. You made the argument of realism. But it's not realistic to stick two of your most powerful criminals so close together in the exact same prison any more than if is for there to just so happen to be a secret way out of said prison. So much of this relies on contrivance and sheer dumb luck. It still doesn't make any sense why she could possibly be so scared of Jeremy she stuck him in the deepest, darkest prison possible.
... Chrysalis hid the food, didn't she?
I'm enjoying his new attitude with chrysalis, we will see how that turns out when he finds out what she did with her food.
I... must... need.... moar, this story is delicious
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Yeah, I'm not entirely sure why, but after certain chapters of a story have been published, the favorites and like ratio shoot up like crazy. I've not yet found a rhyme or reason to it. My own story doubled, and tripled at certain chapters on that graph.
Anyway, good chapter. Keep it up.
Really made Nightmare Moon hugable.
Okay since you won't give much in terms of Halfy's backstory, gonna make up my own theories until the truth comes out.
1). she's secretly one of those zombies from Story of the Blanks and under the right conditions she reveals herself to be a living corpse.
2.) She was the victim of "abuse" for her heritage and that's why she lives in the forest.
3.) She's secretly some other sort of monster and has also been on the run from Celestia for some reason.
$.) She's just a crazy kindhearted hermit.
Oh and this chapter was great BTW.
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Oops. Heh, going from one way of speaking to another can lead to a few remnances.
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I like the short fill-in.
And wheatear Chrysalis likes it or not, SHE. WILL. BE. FEED!
Even if the kiss has to be forced on her! Tough love baby!
I am saddened I can only give this story one thumbs up.
Keep up the good work
Now lets see that kiss really don't care who he kisses either he kisses Crissy to save her like or nightmare kisses him because of her love for him or I could be wrong and everything I just stated will never happen lol
Can he at least give her a hug or something? That way it'll be less awkward?
I get the feeling that Halfy is going to fill in the role of bringing Jeremy and Nightmare together. Sadly, I feel like it's going to be over her death.
Scenario: Royal Guards find the group when one part is at the shack and another is at the garden. Guards subsequently set fire to garden and Halfy can't bear to leave the thing that was her mother's. She dies and Nightmare mourns after escaping with the rest, only for Jeremy be there in support.
It would kinda suck to have Halfy die, but that's just the vibe I'm getting here.
All through this story, I just keep hearing the same thing every time Jeremy and Chrysalis have a fight.
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4639966 IKR the smoldering sexual tension between those 2 is just too great!
I think that Jeremy is going to force feed her now. Food or otherwise. She done goofed!
4640071 Ahhh yes, nothing says romance like forcing someone to eat. This could be romance that lawyers basically orgasm in their pants for.
NMM and Jeremy are bonding even more! Yay!!
When we Will know how jeremy was put in the dungeon?
4637016 in the couch
@Chrysalis through the entire chapter
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Serious UST going on between Jeremy and Chrysalis, almost to the point of being belligerent.
4639966 I'm glad I'm not the only one.
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chill?
Dry.
This is why you dont write in the same universe as your characters